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The girl with the mousy hair. Part 1.
The girl sat alone in the cinema after her friend not turning up. It was a war film and it had gotten to the party at the end when all the husbands and fathers come back for V-Day and every body is happy again. It was rather amusing she had a father that was always away she had the boyfriend who was always away. It wasn't like that the first thing that any sane person does is hug them and kiss them not throw a damn party. But ah well she thought they were away at the moment but it didn't matter what did she care ,nothing, thats how much she cared. Her farther was a state alchemist so she was used to it. But then again so was her mother but she never went away, touch wood. Her name was Eliza Mustang the daughter to Riza and Roy Mustang. She to was a state alchemist but she was on leave at the moment she was supposed to be enjoying it but ha beggers can't be choosers she thought as she got up to leave a blond boy walked in looking for some one. He walked past her and she rolled her eyes.
"Always as visual as ever then Maes?" she asked tapping the boy on the sholder he turned on his heel and hugged her as he span her around. Finally stoping after he started to feel dizy.
"Im so sorry." he muttered out of breath he smiled looking more like his dad every day. His name was Maes Elric the son of Winry and Edward Elric. Eliza smiled back and threw her arms around his neck burying her face into the crevice of his neck.
"It's okay." she finally said. She smiled at him flicking a bit of her mousy brown hair out of her eyes.
"Your dad kept me a bit long" He replied taking her arm and pulling her out of the cinema smiling.
"Come on I said we'd meet Elyshia at the cafe. Oh and your little sister has been looking for you at base somtimes I think she thinks im physcic." she said walking beside him their arms entwined. They stoped out side of and old looking cafe she walked in to it before him and looked around for her best friend. Elyshia lived with her mum as her father had what the military would of called 'killed in action' she was a couple of years older than Eliza but that didn't matter they got on like sisters. She was sitting in the corner still in her uniform probably just gotten off of work she was 24, Eliza how ever was turning 20 in a week and Maes was 22. She waved at Elyshia and went over to hug her. They sat and chatted for a while when all of three sets of parents walked in laughing it reminded of her of when they all met all three kids.
*Flash Back 15 years*
"Mummy I don't want to go theres going to be no children there!" whined Eliza tugging at her mothers blue and white jacket. Her mother ,Riza, Bent down and picked her up. She gave her their special kiss ,eskimo.
"Come on Eliza there will be kids there I promise." she replied puttinge her free hand on her hand. She walked out of the room and she knew very well that there would be kids there but Eliza wasn't a very social girl. She put elza down in the hall way and watched her run to her daddy who had just appeared from the bathroom clean shaven and in a clean uniform. She had her little arms wrapped tightly around his leg not letting him move. He looked down at her.
"Whats up princess?" he asked smiling and crouching down to her level.
"Nothing I just wanted to do this!" she squeeled and stood on her tip toes and shouted "Hey look your short like uncy Ed" she pecked him on the cheeck and ran into her room. She liked to make people laugh and she could hear her mummy and daddy laughing. Twenty minutes she found her self looking at the spiting image of 'Uncy Ed' she smiled.
"Hello whats your name?" she asked holding out her hand but the boy just peered around from his mothers legs. She scowled and stuck out her tounge and said "Fine be mean!" and ran off it was whilest she was running that she bumped into Elyshia. She feel over backwards and just as daddy was coming to the rescue Elyshia pulled her up and looked her in the face.
"Your not going to cry about falling over are you? I mean you only feel. Whats your name? Mines Elyshia." she said holding out a hand. Eliza took the hand and shook it. The girls had been friends since. It was harder work with Maes somtimes she wanted to murder him but some times she loved him. They had been going solidly now for 5 years yes since she was 15.
*Back to reality (sp?)*
"Hey Daddy." she said in a chirpy voice he scowled and his eyes flickering between his princess and Maes. "Whats up dad?" she asked uneasily. she could sense somthing bad.
"I guess that he hasn't told you then?" He said indacating to Maes. Eliza shoock her head with a frown. "He's been given a mission which he volinitarily (sp?) sighned up for." he said the last part full of anger knowing how much Maes had hurt hus little girl in the past and now it was going to happen again.
"What?" Asked Eliza trying not to cry. She ran from the Cafe and just carriedon running she could hear yelling behind her but she didn't care the tears were now flowing freely. How could he! He promised! screamed her insides she found her self in the park she sat on a bench and cried.