Okay I've added a new character and that is Riza's little sister shes called Elyza. Shes the main character. So here we go please remember ((sp?)) that this is my first one.
Elyza walked down the corridoor in her sisters shadow. She was looking down at the checkered tiles.
"Riza I'm not sure about this." she mumbled hardly unaudioable. Riza spun on her heel to face her little sister. She looked her straight in the eyes and said,
"Elyza your a blooby good alchemist and don't let any one tell you other wise!" pulling her into an embrace she relised and handed her, her gloves wich she put on. Elyza didn't enjoy wearing trousers so usually wore skirts but the only blue one she had was a mini skirt. Her sister had knocked on a door with frosted glass with the words M.Hughes on. She stood there hoping from one foot to the other. A Blond boy walked past her and winked. She cocked her eye brow. A few minutes later a hole group of men came out of what she guessed was the cantien. She heard one of them mutter somthing along the lines of 'anyone want to tell the new girl that mini skirts aren't maditory' She rolled her eyes. Some one coughed behinde her and she saw her sister standing behind her with a man wearing glasses.