yep, this is a Naruto Fanfic...
i decided to post mine on cause i just wanted other peoplz opinions..
and ill try to kep posting, but i have a lot of things to do so it might take 2-3 days ^^'
so hopefully you guys like it
P.S and theres a new person in it, and it'll take maybe 5 Chapters before ill reveal him/her
well... here i go...
CHAPTER 1: The Beginning Of Something New
It’s about sundown, Naruto, Kakashi, Sasuke and Sakura came back from the valley of the waters big race. The team were just doing their missions, racing back to Konoha so they don’t have to pay for their free ramen when they return. So far Kakashi was first, Sasuke and Naruto were head-to-head and poor Sakura was last. “Err, I’m not going to lose to you Sasuke!” Naruto yelled, “Hmph, lets see about that” Sasuke replied with a kind of a smile. Then suddenly Naruto banged into a tree and Sasuke just laughed, Sakura just poked her tongue out and tried to catch up with Sasuke. When Naruto saw everyone gone he just sighed, “ohhh now I gotta waste my saving for them to eat whatever they want!” when he was about to leave he noticed blood on the floor. He turned around and saw that the blood led to a girl that was staring at him, with a face that looked like he wasn’t welcome “Hmph, you know your very noise for a kid…” she said. Then Naruto saw that her hands and legs looked really badly injured by some kind of fight. “Umm… Are you ok? Your hands and legs are bleeding, I think I should take you to the Konoha Hospital, they can help you” Naruto said nicely, the girl stood up and looked at her hands and legs, then looked at him “why should you worry about me?” she replied, Naruto looked at her and said “well, what do you think? Your hurt! And it looks really bad too” then the girl just looked at him like he was stupid, “is this what you do to strangers? Just help them out? You never know what they’ll do to you, you know.” then she suddenly teleported behind Naruto and whispered “what will you do then…shortie?” then Naruto suddenly fell to the floor, “stupid, this is such a waste of time.” she replied.
It’s been 30 minutes since Kakashi, Sasuke and Sakura have been waiting at the entrance to Konoha. They were getting hungry, and very tired. “Where is that Naruto? What nerve! He’s trying to make us hungry! Probably doesn’t wanna pay for our ramen” Sakura complained, Kakashi was reading ‘Come Come Paradise’, he just then realised that Naruto wasn’t there with them. “Huh… where’s Naruto?” Sakura sighed. “He’s not here!!!” she yelled in an angry tone. “This isn’t like him, maybe something happened to him, like always…”Sasuke replied, then Kakashi closed his book and said, “you might be right Sasuke, lets go find him” then he ran off, Sasuke followed, “wait for me!” Sakura wined, and then ran off too.