well, this is my story i make a new chapter every day when i come back from school (3:00 p.m.) or when I finnish my homework. Elementary school is hard!
I'm going to middle school (6th grade) in september. Enjoy the story!!!!
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Chapter 1


Ed and Al are walking around town while they wait for Winry to finnish her shopping.

Ed:Damn it! Whats taking Winry so long?

Al:Brother, do you think something went wrong?

Ed:I doubt it.

(An hour later Winry finishes her shopping.)

Ed:What took you so long?!

Winry:Well, good shoes are hard to find these days.

Al:You just bought new shoes a week ago.

Winry:Sandles are SO out, now strappies are SO in! Anyway, Ed Al I'd like you to meet my new friend Sazuka!

(Sazuka is a cute girl that is Al's age (17) she has long
straight brown hair with about 20 purple high lights,
romantic eyes as blue as the ocean, and long, thick
eyelashes that made her look even cuter. she was
wearing: a short blue shirt that is tyable at the bottom,
her shirt REALY showed her belly,a purple skirt
filled with glitter, and blue sneakers.)

(Al druled but Ed felt normal about her, he just thought she was kindda cute.)

Ed:Hi Sazuka i'm Ed, nice to meet you.

(shook hands)

Al:uhhhhhhhhhhh... Hi! I'm Al its very nice to meet you.

(shook hands)

Sazuka:My friends call me Sue, um Al why are you wearing armor?!

(Al explained why)

Sue:oh!!!!! I'm so sorry!

Al:it's ok my brother will join the military and make me a human again.

Sue: I lost my mother too. She got shot, and my father died because
he was so sad, his heart could not take it anymore. I miss them SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much!

(Al and Ed start to cry)

Ed: Thats so sad! Now you're making ME cry!!!!!!!!

Al:do you want to come to our place Sue?

Sue:sure!

Winry:Hey! Me too!