QUOTE(nekodesu @ May 8 2005, 06:23 PM)
I think it needs more facial expression. He just looks spaced out in there and right now, the tears aren't very clear. So the eyes should be slightly squinted, the eye brows should be low and furrowed...hmm...that's all I can think of for now. And you should study the crying scenes of screenshots of animes and mangas to get the general idea. Other than that the pic looks okay to me ^^
I fixed the eyes when i colored it. i'm almost done with the colors, i'm just needing to shadow it now...