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Saturn Stars
*Squeaks* I really don't want to post this here! I cannot compete with all the talented writers, and I jsut hope you don't compare me. *Squeaks again* Just enjoy my themes... and give me some feedback

PS: My themes will probably be more obvious than everyone elses, but I am an EdxWin fanatic (Can't help myself) and I figured, they all need their own style right? Right? *Squeaks for the third time* I really hope it is worth posting here. I know that you are all very kind, thats why I am going to step out of the comfort zone!


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Childhood Friend

~*~THEME ONE~*~

She wistfully remembered the cheerful young days with her two best friends. The days where they would all run down a path laughing gleefully, trying to catch up to one another… or Edward. Or the soft afternoons where the sky was a gentle pink and they would pick flowers in a field close to their homes.

She remembers one moment upon the hilltop, Edward sitting by her side. It was peaceful, quiet. No words passed between them, as usual. But she never minded, even to this day. It was the youngest days when she knew him as her friend best.

But terrible things had happened so tragically. His heart had almost been torn into a thousand pieces. Her heart had shattered as well, no doubt. Ed and Al were forced to come live with their best friend, her. Arguments could be heard echoing through the small town every night. Edward didn’t want to be there; Al didn’t want to upset anyone. All Winry could do was steer clear from the boy. How could she possibly replace his mum? No wonder he had shouted words of hate to her when she tried to get close.

But Edward soon sobered; there was no doubt about that. He became his old self once again. Winry knew why, and she didn’t like the reason. Why couldn’t he have become happy and accepted her as his family? Why did his energy have to return for all the wrong reasons? She was glad that the fire had returned to both the young boy’s eyes, that didn’t mean that what they were planning was right! Once again the girl fell silent, having no words to say. How could she stop them? Edward was determined.

She watched the train speed pass her. She couldn’t help but feel tears well in bright blue eyes. They were leaving for their training, and getting closer to their goal everyday. She really was happy for them in that aspect. But no-one ever thought of her, how their leave was affecting her.

What will happen with the Elric’ brothers she will never know.

If they will someday reach their ultimate life goal, she doesn’t know. After the accident so many years ago, she hopes and prays that everything will turn out alright. Then they can finally come home, and be within her care once again.

Winry Rockbell doesn’t really know anything, she desperately tries to discover the new people that rock up on her doorstep, but the stay is never for long.

But she knows one thing for sure.

She looks up from her book as Edward walks by, winking at her skilfully. How quick he was to capture her since his arrival. He was leaving tomorrow, and had only returned for a mere auto-mail repair. But that didn’t mean he hadn’t left her breathless.

He grabs an apple from the kitchen and throws it into the air before taking a huge bite out of it. “Thanks for all your help Winry.” He tells her truthfully. He then calls for Al loudly, who is outside with their escort Armstrong.

It had only been one sentence, but it had left her smiling. And it would be enough for her to hold onto until he did decide to return.

Yes, her childhood friend Edward was definitely much more than a childhood friend to her now, much more.

~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Dragons04
It's great *squeaks* lol well, are you forget the idea about football?
Bunny Hooded Bombchu
Haha!! Awesome!! I am so utterly joyified right now that you're doing this!! Really!! laugh.gif
Saturn Stars
QUOTE(Dragons04 @ May 3 2005, 08:03 AM)
It's great *squeaks* lol well, are you forget the idea about football?
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I started on the football one, but it dosn't make sense and I just sound stupid... I read the rules, but having no experience at all... it dosn't sound right... I don't know man. I might talk to some of my mates and get them to check over what I have written so far. Hahaha
Aoko-chan
Saturn Stars, your first theme was wonderful! Please write more ^^ reach 100 quickly~~~
Dragons04
okay, I will wait
Sonic-Teal
Good one Saturns if you need some help getting to 100 I can try ang get Woody Allen for you.
Saturn Stars
EdxWin 100 themes
Family

~*~THEME TWO~*~

He only knew his life with Trisha and Al. That was his family. It was extremely hard to suddenly start calling Pinako, Auntie Pinako. And there was absolutely no way in hell he looked at Winry as a sister. He had wanted to marry her since he was the tender age of five. Just because he was rejected by her, didn’t mean he could suddenly forget it all, like it was merely one of their stupid fights.

But he soon realised his childish, stubborn behaviour made the young girl cry. He was quick to comfort her, but that didn’t make him feel any less guilty. He had shouted horrible words of cruelty to the girl; he was the one to blame. ‘We’re not family! I hate you! Get away from me!’ He had shivered involuntarily, when he encountered the shock in her wide blue orbs. He had softened his hash gaze straight away and looked down, in shame.

Despite everything he had put her through, she was the one there to help him through the process. She held his hand when he cringed in pain. Days and nights, she had clung to his arm steadily, while she helped him stand for the first time. The ordeal had been time-consuming, but she stood their patiently, waiting for him to take his first step with auto-mail. That’s what family was for…

Even now, he continued his journey, asking nothing of her except support. She willingly gave it, but could not erase the agonising pain from her eyes every time he turned up a complete mess.

So she would yell! She would yell because she cared. She would scold the stupid boy, not like anyone else did! He sat there in fear, teeth chattering over the sight of her mighty wrench. He prayed and prayed hard that it wouldn’t come down onto his head for the fourth time. But it never came. He looked up to see tears falling from her eyes, her whole body shivering with violent sobs.

“Winry?”

But she didn’t reply. She merely put the wrench down on the table calmly and walked away, muttering something that sounded suspiciously like ‘How can a stupid midget make me cry?’

Ed was left there confused, glancing at her back with a raised eyebrow.

Winry had been the girl next door. Then she had been his sister. He never really looked at her as family. But she was something of the sort, someone special to him.

It was humorous and ironic; he never would have thought that one day he could have a family with her.

~*~Saturn Stars~*~
sweetums
Saturn! That was a touching theme! So kawaii! So innocent! So.....so....so damn good!

'How could a midget make me cry?' <----That was so Winry! Very nice!
Guest
I know this may not be the right place exactly to ask...but all you writers should know. Does this site have anywhere you can post non-FMA stories? Like how there is a general anime, general manga and general music. Like maybe a general writers place?
Phyco girl
Sweet Saturn Stars happy.gif I'm glad you decided to tackle the 100 themes!

@guest: Hmmm, I don't think so.
foolmetal alchemist
Your such a good author Saturn Stars!! I wish I could write like you! I loved those two themes! Don't stop writing! laugh.gif
Aoko-chan
Please write more ^^ I loved your themes!!

LoL "midget" made Winry cry!!
Sonic-Teal
That story touched me in places I never knew existed, tahnk you Saturn now I feel all warm and fuzzy. Sarcasam off oh great now I have feelings thanks a lot. GOod theme thought keep it up ya dumb planet.
Guest
Very cool, though all the antaganism fell on Ed. I don't think Ed would ever say "I hate you" to Winry, unless he's done it in the manga?
Zarpia
that was a beauthifull theme, can't waith for more.
Saturn Stars
Thanks for your comments. About the thing where Ed would not say he hated her. I think it's very possible after his mother has just died. Just saying that from my POV Ed could get like that.

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Remembrance

~*~THEME THREE~*~

She remembers perfectly, even if he doesn’t. She remembers as she glances out the window over the town, her vision fogged over with loneliness.

She remembers the absolute horror within her own heart when his lips had come into contact with hers for the very first time. It wasn’t expected, she was merely watching the sunset, mourning the death herself when the boy next door suddenly had his lips upon hers.

She had wanted to squeal; she was only a child after all. But she couldn’t find the heart to do that. She knew what the boy was going through, she knew he needed comfort. His mother had just goddamn died; the least she could do was let him kiss her innocently. However, when the young boy pulled away with closed eyes, she couldn’t help but feel tears well in hers. She was scarred and scared. So scared that she then ran, ran far away.

She remembers it completely, even if he doesn’t (Or says he doesn’t). She had brought it up one night, just for kicks, only to have Edward shout at her in denial.

“Why would I want to kiss a machine freak?”

He had yelled at her. He had called her a machine freak. This of course resulted in another argument between the two.

The memory still makes her frown as she glances out her window miserably. It wasn’t exactly a happy moment of her life; her first kiss was absolutely terrifying. However, she had been glad it was with him.

The boys had just left her house to continue their journey. They had faded into the shadowy distance not to long ago. Leaving her lonely, already counting down the days till she could see the two again.

No, it definitely wasn’t a joyful memory, her first kiss with her childhood friend. But lately she had found her eyes lingering on his lips for far too long. Lately, she had wanted to kiss him again. Only this time she would create a memory she could smile back on.

If that day came, she would surely seize the opportunity.


~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Saturn Stars
No feedback... not even from my sis' *Cries* Owell..

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Dog

~*~THEME FOUR~*~

“Ed! Can you please clean that mess up?” Winry yells rather loudly from the work table. She was referring to the huge mess she had made on the floor with the oil, and had rudely asked her guest to clean it up. She however turns to reach for the towel, knowing Ed will most likely chuck an argument over it. His eyes dull slightly as he walks over towards her.

“But you made that.” He states with annoyance. His tone was however low, and non-defensive.

“DO IT!” She yells again, unknowing of just how collared he had become. Without another word he bends down to the floor. The towel she had just reached for clutched in his hand tightly. He then begins wiping up some-one else’s mess. Not even another protest from his mouth. She almost drops her wrench in astonishment and watches him silently. He couldn’t be serious.

If she had to be completely honest, she was just looking for a fight. She was extremely bored, and enjoyed the days she would say one word and have Edward pounce on her with anger.

She had been noticing that he was slowly loosing that resolve in his voice as the years went on. She hadn’t seen him for a few months, and had no idea he had gotten this terrible. Did he not like they days we're they battled for dominance? Did his position in the military really teach him to obey? All she could do was watch as his soul and fire slowly deteriorated. Or could she… possibly do something about it?

“Ed, you’re so slow doing that! You’re so short!” The girl bends down to help him with the mess, scoffing to herself. Ed merely backs away with content, a word still not to be heard from his mouth. She then looks up at him desperately, she has no other plan, and she has no idea how to help him. “Ed why did you do that?” She asks too suddenly. He blinks twice then tilts his head to the side with confusion.

“Just wipe it up without even arguing?” She chucks the cloth to the side; it wasn’t important. She then backs him against a wall slowly, pain in every step she takes.

“Because it’s not worth fighting over?” He grins cheesily, obviously hoping it was the right answer, due to the anger in her eyes. He didn’t want to cause a fuss. When he discovered that her nostrils were still flaring, he backed against the wall a little more and tried his answer again. “Because you told me to?”

“So you’d do anything I asked you to?” The sneaky girl inquires innocently, pressing herself against him on the wall.

The boy merely blushes and tries to move slightly. “W-well.” He stammers, feeling her breath on his face. She grabs the sides of his red coat and grin’s in a way that makes him fear what’s going to come next.

“Anything…?” She runs her fingers along his jaw line flirtatiously, causing him to gulp slightly. He should have been hitting her for this, not standing there completely frozen! “What if I told you to kiss me?” She moves her face in close to his, too abruptly, too quickly. She smiles at his reaction, before tilting her head to the side. Her lips lingering just above his, not even a millimetre of air between them.

If he spoke his lips would surely brush against hers and this stopped him from doing just that. She could hear his heart beating at a furious pace, she could feel his warmth. This was also exciting her, although it was strictly aimed to find out how far he had fallen. She couldn’t deny that it was extremeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeely tempting.

When he finally gained control over himself, he moved his head to the side, slightly brushing her lips in the process. The feeling had been nothing more than a slight tickle, and caused her lips to tingle with delight.

“WINRY! Have you gone insane?” Edward yells eyes wide with fear. There was no way she could have been serious.

“DO IT!” She yells, exactly the way she had yelled before, her voice almost overpowering him. Although this time his eyes squint with anger and he pushes her away violently.

“No, okay! NO! I’m not going to kiss you!” He replies guiltily, looking down to the ground as if he had committed some sort of horrible crime on her behalf.

She tries to catch her balance and clings onto the desk behind her. The comment made her frown slightly. Her worries and frowns over being rejected soon however turned into a smug smirk over her success. “You don’t have to be sorry, you don’t have to kiss me if you don’t want to you know?” She says softly, smiling at him contently. He looks up with shocked eyes and beings to say something, only to be silenced by her.

“You are not a dog in my house Edward. I don’t care how you want to act around the military, but you will not blindly follow orders in my house, understand?” With this comment, Edward had realised what she was trying to do, and sighed. He then frowned and looked to the ground with shame.

“Otherwise I will make you kiss me by force!” She held up her wrench with an evil grin. Hoping to ease the tension she had caused between them.

Loud laughter could then be heard from the room, from the both of them.

She would not have Edward being collared; she would not see the flame slowly diminish in his eyes. Edward was meant for more.


~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Aoko-chan
awwwww really nice ^^!!! What a cute request, a kiss xD!!
sweetums
I loved the 'Dog' theme! Very Kawaii!!! YAYNESS!!!!
Morgri
Theme 4 is defenitly the best one I've read so far. Great job on it, I loved it!
Saturn Stars
EdxWin 100 themes
Library

~*~THEME FIVE~*~

He was the only thing essential for her knowledge. The only one she went to in times of need.

She would confess her deepest troubles within to him. He would never say a word to her. Just hold her silently, knowingly.

When she looked upon him, she knew that there was knowledge contained in every corner of his body, in every strand of his sun-golden hair. Knowledge she didn’t need to know, knowledge that had been packed into his head over the years. Knowledge he alone could comprehend.

She wasn’t ever going to try and compete with his books. She wasn’t ever going to try and compete with the love and affection he had for his brother. She was never ever going to try competing with his alchemy. She knew where she stood with him, and it was scribbled on the pages of her heart.

Like he was a library she could read him for days, explore every word of him, which might let her in on his deep dark secret. She could spend hours flicking through the pages of his story.

Despite everything he knew, everything he had been through, she was content in having the softest of powers over him; the power to send him to sleep when she ran her hands through his hair gently.

She had the power to completely freeze him when their hands brushed against one another. She had a quiet sort of power over him, a power they were both content with.

Her heart was a library, written at the hands of her own sadness, and understanding of his.

One day she would tear out the pages within them both, and create books filled with stories of happiness and joy. Their own library together.



~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Morgri
Hey SS! Just read this, and it's very good, I liked alot, though number 4 is still the best to me tongue.gif

Maybe I should write an Ed/win story, but I'm out of idea's write now, hey give some suggestions!
Saturn Stars
Wow I think it would be great if you wrote and EdxWin! As for suggestions... mmm... I dunno post fic always gets my attention. Or maybe you could look into a gap in the series. Like what happens after that time she braids his hair. Or that time he returns home and she looks into his watch. They are suprisingly comfortable with eachother the next day... so they at least talked about something.

I really don't know. But I'm sure that whatever you decide will be great! And I will support you as you supported me!

I can't wait till you do! Well here is another theme for you!

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Always Right

~*~THEME SIX~*~

The pain was always right. Just below his shoulder.

He had talked to Winry about it quietly one day, saying the pain could send him to the verge of tears. She insisted it was just a ‘phantom limb thing’ but he refused to believe his own body would be stupid enough to feel pain from an arm that wasn’t there.

So he insisted that she pull apart his auto-mail, dissemble it and reassemble it, all for his own satisfaction. She did it anyway, even though she knew it wouldn’t cease the problem. She didn’t want to hurt his pride, not at this hour of the night anyway.

She pulled up a chair next to him and sat on it delicately, throwing her pony tail over her shoulder, and furrowing her eyebrows in ready concentration.

He was even willing to put up with the pain of docking it on again. He wanted it completely rebuilt. Winry couldn’t believe she had to do this just because he thought he was right - he always thought he was right. But she did it anyway, and with any luck the pain would continue, and she would have to repeat the whole process again. Why was she so pathetic? Why couldn’t she just tell him to get stuffed?

But she wasn’t going to do that. She felt guilty about his auto-mail. It was being an inconvenience for him and it was all her fault. She would do her best to make it right; it always had to be right.

A couple of hours passed and the pain started again. He was lying on the couch, Winry watching over him tenderly. The pain had nothing to do with the docking on of his limbs though; it was that same pain he had felt before, a pain so strong he could have sworn his arm was there.

He glanced up at Winry desperately. He couldn’t ask her to repeat the process again, unless he offered a lot of cash. She looked down at him with a smug smirk. He has no idea what it was for and frowned in confusion. But she knew that the pain had returned.

Her smiled immediately turned into a guilty sigh however, when she thinks of his pain. He didn’t want to loose his arms. He didn’t want auto-mail, yet here she was smirking over it?

After that day he never challenged Winry when it came to auto-mail again. He had discovered that that pain was indeed a phantom limb sensation, as it was definitely always only right, never on his left. He had also discovered that Winry was as well when it came to these things, always right.



~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Morgri
Very good! Poor Ed suffering with phantom limb, poor winry having to re-assemble the whole thing! Can't wait for the next drabble/theme/whatever.

Anyway, yeah I was thinking about the braiding part, but since I've never actually seen that far, I don't know what the enviorenment was... *Sigh* I wish I could find the episodes, anyways I guess I'll make up the moment in my mind XD

Great job on the themes keep up the good work!
Sonic-Teal
Great themes Saturn I havent been here in awhile. Hrm my favorite has to be four though hehehe, but they are all good. I enjoy reading your work so keep it up. Oh and one more thing this is the challenge most writers fail at so you have been warned.
Saturn Stars
QUOTE(Sonic-Teal @ May 10 2005, 08:46 AM)
Great themes Saturn I havent been here in awhile. Hrm my favorite has to be four though hehehe, but they are all good. I enjoy reading your work so keep it up. Oh and one more thing this is the challenge most writers fail at so you have been warned.
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Do you think I will fail at this because of the length? No not me not I! Just watch and see! I have already written about half of them, muahahaha! I shall never be beaten! Enjoy tongue.gif Thanks for your comment, and remember I'm a chick! Okay just making sure.


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It's kind of a fight...


~*~THEME SEVEN~*~

It was kind of a fight every time they were in the room together. Kind of a fight every time their strong personalities slammed into one another.

Stubborn stares, heated glares, tensed fists, red faces, bumps on heads, wrenches raised, hairs on end, gritted teeth. The list just went on.

It all started over the stupidest things as well. So stupid that sometimes Ed's brother would even leave the room. It was so stupid he couldn’t bear to hear it. He would stand up over the newly started fight. What was the fight over again? Who got to sit in that chair at the dinner table? He would sigh with one last glance over his shoulder and head outside to talk to auntie Pinako.

The fights were destructive as well. Anything was hurled. Anything and everything was thrown, vases, knives, forks, cups, plates, chairs, books, shoes and of course her trusty wrenches which was almost most dreaded by the young man. Ed would be damned if he could ever dodge that thing. It was always Winry who threw these items though. Although Winry could greatly piss Edward off, he would never dream of hurting her. Winry on the other hand, definitely did dream of hurting him. Actually it made her day when she created a new bruise on his body, especially after the jerk he could be! She would burst into mad laughter after hitting him over the head… that’s exactly how frustrated he got her.

If it wasn’t ‘Drink milk you shrimp!’ it was ‘Shut the hell up machine freak.’ The list of insults they threw at each other was also never ending.

Some times he would just crack up into laughter at the sight of her angered glares upon him, wishing him painful death. Then there were times she could be rolling on the floor with laughter, when he had a heart attack over her comments on his height.

They would always get angrier when one started laughing, which resulted in the other laughing, which resulted in them rolling on the floor with laughter together.

They would just lie there when the giggles subsided and Edward would turn his head to glance at her for a few short seconds.

“What were we fighting about again?” He would always ask, in hope of reviving the fight for some stupid fun. But it was gone; they were content with one another again. Winry would shrug and stretch, poking her tongue out at him.

It was kind of a fight whenever they were together; two people so powerful would always clash.

Then again it was kind of flirting as well. It was the only way they could express their passion for one another, without giving away any of their feelings.

They always say that fighting was the best kind of flirting. It was, kind of anyway.


~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Morgri
Cool yet again! But I must say #4 remains the best tongue.gif Can't wait for the next theme!
Sonic-Teal
Yes yes I know you are a chick, or at least you say you are, but I can still call you dude right? Great theme ah yes arguing can be a type of flirting, old saying old saying. I hope somebody would point out the fact why they were fighting over a single chair at the dinner table?
MSqre
Nice piece for the theme on fights. That's exactly what me and my bro do everyday, and it's always over the silliest things haha... but we don't fight cause we love each other, more of a hobby some good siblings share. smile.gif Anyway, that was a great piece so are all the other pieces!
_alchemist
Dear Saturn Stars,

First off, you're an AMAZING WRITER! i loved all your edxwin fics, words cannot describe the ingenuity of it! oh yes anyway, i have a request story for you to write, well, since i lack imagination and well, writing abilities, can you please write a story, it could be a one-shot, of the aftermath of Chapter 47 [with Winry wearing Ed's coat and whatnot]. The translations should be out in a day or two so once you get around reading it, do you think you can somehow continue it in your own way? i'm just dying to know what happens and i'll have to wait one full month before Chapter 48 comes out so...if it's not a burden, would you adhere to my request? it would be awesome if you could and i will love you forever biggrin.gif !

Yours truly,

_alchemist
Saturn Stars
QUOTE(_alchemist @ May 12 2005, 04:25 PM)
Dear Saturn Stars,

First off, you're an AMAZING WRITER! i loved all your edxwin fics, words cannot describe the ingenuity of it! oh yes anyway, i have a request story for you to write, well, since i lack imagination and well, writing abilities, can you please write a story, it could be a one-shot, of the aftermath of Chapter 47 [with Winry wearing Ed's coat and whatnot]. The translations should be out in a day or two so once you get around reading it, do you think you can somehow continue it in your own way? i'm just dying to know what happens and i'll have to wait one full month before Chapter 48 comes out so...if it's not a burden, would you adhere to my request? it would be awesome if you could and i will love you forever  biggrin.gif !

Yours truly,

_alchemist
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iF I do... it's gunna be smutty I bet! But no problemo! I'll write it for ya, I was thinking about it anyway!
Morgri
QUOTE(Saturn Stars @ May 12 2005, 04:34 AM)
QUOTE(_alchemist @ May 12 2005, 04:25 PM)
Dear Saturn Stars,

First off, you're an AMAZING WRITER! i loved all your edxwin fics, words cannot describe the ingenuity of it! oh yes anyway, i have a request story for you to write, well, since i lack imagination and well, writing abilities, can you please write a story, it could be a one-shot, of the aftermath of Chapter 47 [with Winry wearing Ed's coat and whatnot]. The translations should be out in a day or two so once you get around reading it, do you think you can somehow continue it in your own way? i'm just dying to know what happens and i'll have to wait one full month before Chapter 48 comes out so...if it's not a burden, would you adhere to my request? it would be awesome if you could and i will love you forever  biggrin.gif !

Yours truly,

_alchemist
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iF I do... it's gunna be smutty I bet! But no problemo! I'll write it for ya, I was thinking about it anyway!
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I second her request XD Especially if it has smutness XD


speaking of the chapter, it was really good.
Saturn Stars
Yeah it's potential smut because of the state Winry is in. When girls are depressed like that they tend to cling to someone. She could get just out of hand. Since Ed was the one who comforted her... and it's obvious she didn't want to let him go. It REALLL potential smut. But yeah, if you specifically tell me how 'far' they will go it would help!

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No Problem

~*~THEME EIGHT~*~

Since they were little children she had tended to Edward.

When he cut his knee she would drag him to the house, forcing treatment upon him. she would clean the cut and bandage it up, refusing her parents help. They had taught her how to take care of herself, it was only fitting she returned the favour to him.

She remembered how she would never have to help Al. He didn’t complain like Edward, and he would run to his mother and ask for help. Edward on the other hand, would try and put up with the pain, risking chance of infection. It had never made the girl to happy and she would scold him angrily before grabbing his arm with force. He was such a baby, here he was at the age of five and a girl had to take care of him!

She stayed beside him day and night when he had his auto-mail surgery done. She knew he appreciated it, but he could never actually say the words to her. It wasn’t much of a problem; she would learn to interpret his silences one day.

Even now she is all he is to be scolded with. When he got into trouble, who was there to pull him into line? Her. Even though he could hate her for it sometimes, she knew deep inside it was for him. He had no-one to care; he had no-one to get angry. She was the one, the only.

So she will continued to fix his arm when he shatters it into pieces. Not without a good hit over his head with the wrench though. She will continue to welcome him home. Not without an argument over why he never writes to her though. She will continue to care, but not without pulling him into line. Because that was truly caring for someone.

She finishes the work on his arm with the tightening of the last screw. She is extra careful not to forget it now, after all the trouble it had caused him.

“Done” She exclaims. Sighing with content she stretches her back aimlessly. She had been cramped into that one position, huddled over his arm, for far to long.

He smiles widely. “Thanks Win.”

“No problem.” She replies. “But you know you should be paying me extra for the amount of work I put into that!” He rolls his eyes at her, she always ruined the moment. But that was how it was going to stay till he accomplished his goal. She didn’t have to be cute or sexy. Until he had reached that ultimate goal she would be waiting, and supporting.

“Okay then, thanks again.” He replies huffily.

“No problem!” She repeats, eyes wide at the thought of the cash she would be getting.

She says it’s no problem, but sometimes inside it was. Helping him was no problem, caring was no problem. But when he left tomorrow there would be a problem, a longing within her heart.


Saturn Stars
Morgri
Very good theme ^^ I really like this one. Keep up the good work.
Sonic-Teal
A new theme and a good one. Lol "...you should pay me extra..." hehehehehe isnt that what all mechanics say?
Hikusa Rockgirl X
x) i LOVE your EdxWin fics!
u are a great writter
*her favorite theme was the Dog theme* xP
keep up the good work!
_alchemist
QUOTE(Saturn Stars @ May 12 2005, 04:34 AM)
QUOTE(_alchemist @ May 12 2005, 04:25 PM)
Dear Saturn Stars,

First off, you're an AMAZING WRITER! i loved all your edxwin fics, words cannot describe the ingenuity of it! oh yes anyway, i have a request story for you to write, well, since i lack imagination and well, writing abilities, can you please write a story, it could be a one-shot, of the aftermath of Chapter 47 [with Winry wearing Ed's coat and whatnot]. The translations should be out in a day or two so once you get around reading it, do you think you can somehow continue it in your own way? i'm just dying to know what happens and i'll have to wait one full month before Chapter 48 comes out so...if it's not a burden, would you adhere to my request? it would be awesome if you could and i will love you forever  biggrin.gif !

Yours truly,

_alchemist
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iF I do... it's gunna be smutty I bet! But no problemo! I'll write it for ya, I was thinking about it anyway!
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ohh but if you do, can you also make it angsty? i <3 angst! oh, sorry if i'm inquiring too much.

now, as to how far they would go...uh....keep it PG13, that's all =) we don't need complete lust taking over winry. besides, she just got out of a hellish situation and by gluttoning themselves with lust, it would be....a bit too fast. but i dunno, whatever you do, i'll be soooooooooo happpyyyy!! biggrin.gif
Saturn Stars
QUOTE(_alchemist @ May 13 2005, 08:24 AM)
QUOTE(Saturn Stars @ May 12 2005, 04:34 AM)
QUOTE(_alchemist @ May 12 2005, 04:25 PM)
Dear Saturn Stars,

First off, you're an AMAZING WRITER! i loved all your edxwin fics, words cannot describe the ingenuity of it! oh yes anyway, i have a request story for you to write, well, since i lack imagination and well, writing abilities, can you please write a story, it could be a one-shot, of the aftermath of Chapter 47 [with Winry wearing Ed's coat and whatnot]. The translations should be out in a day or two so once you get around reading it, do you think you can somehow continue it in your own way? i'm just dying to know what happens and i'll have to wait one full month before Chapter 48 comes out so...if it's not a burden, would you adhere to my request? it would be awesome if you could and i will love you forever  biggrin.gif !

Yours truly,

_alchemist
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iF I do... it's gunna be smutty I bet! But no problemo! I'll write it for ya, I was thinking about it anyway!
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ohh but if you do, can you also make it angsty? i <3 angst! oh, sorry if i'm inquiring too much.

now, as to how far they would go...uh....keep it PG13, that's all =) we don't need complete lust taking over winry. besides, she just got out of a hellish situation and by gluttoning themselves with lust, it would be....a bit too fast. but i dunno, whatever you do, i'll be soooooooooo happpyyyy!! biggrin.gif
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Well I am finished, and posting it now! I didn't make it smutty just because it dosn't fit, it's really crap... but hey...
Morgri
Shuddup... if that story was crap... then mine was... argh... XD
Yukina_Raven
Wootness! Finally finished reading 'em all and got a chance to review! happy.gif

OMFG, I LUFF THIS STORRRRRRRYYYYYYY!!!! @_@ Damn, sis, is there ANYTHING, you can't do?! ....... Nope, didn't think so. XD Yer a frickin' genius, sis! A GENIUS! I think I loved the last theme the best. Good to see Ed's stubborness in full effect and Winry always managing to beat it down with her 'charm' AKA wrench of doomage. laugh.gif (Although in this case not yet... but give it time. XD) And the idea of her taking care of chibi Ed is so KAWAII!!!

I really can't wait for more! I can never get enough of your writing! Post more soon! happy.gif
Saturn Stars
QUOTE(Yukina_Raven @ May 14 2005, 08:46 AM)
Wootness! Finally finished reading 'em all and got a chance to review! happy.gif

OMFG, I LUFF THIS STORRRRRRRYYYYYYY!!!! @_@ Damn, sis, is there ANYTHING, you can't do?! ....... Nope, didn't think so. XD Yer a frickin' genius, sis! A GENIUS! I think I loved the last theme the best. Good to see Ed's stubborness in full effect and Winry always managing to beat it down with her 'charm' AKA wrench of doomage. laugh.gif (Although in this case not yet... but give it time. XD) And the idea of her taking care of chibi Ed is so KAWAII!!!

I really can't wait for more! I can never get enough of your writing! Post more soon! happy.gif
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Thanks sis! Look you inspire me so much, here is a theme dedicated to your story!

EdxWin 100 themes
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Dedicated to my big sis’ fic Winter in Germany (Because I just love her and the story so much!)

~*~THEME NINE~*~

He has been here for far too long…

Does he even know if his old life existed? That was the question now. He had been here for so long that he was almost loosing hope. Old memories where fading. The ways of an old life were slowly being forgotten.

He knew he had a love back home, but was that just a dream?

He was determined in the beginning not to think like this, but how could he help it? This world had no magic, no splendid wonders. The colours were dulled, his senses were blunted. How could something as stupid as alchemy ever exist? In reality it was impossible.

But no, hope was not completely lost. He held onto his dreams at night.

He knew had captured another heart here. His body reacted to her, but did his heart? He saw someone else when he looked at her. That wasn’t fair to anyone.

She had only confessed so many times of how she wanted to be with him, how she would love him till the very end, and do her best to be like the girl in his dreams. But he had to push away. Until he was sure he really loved his real Winry’s mirror image.

What did he have to do to discover the truth? What was ahead for him? He had gotten to the point now where he could just lay in bed all day. With the woman who loved him sitting on the edge of the bed, stroking his hair lovingly. He never let her in, she had just invited herself. But being catered to like this, he really couldn’t complain.

Sometimes he would turn on his back, and look back up at her. Her emerald eyes shining at him. She would sometimes be daring and lean down to capture his lips in a soft and gentle kiss, which sometimes turned into more. He couldn’t deny it, he was lonely. And it was this human affection that he clung to. He had made sure to tell her many times that he didn’t love her. It was her choice to continue chasing after him.

After their bodies came into contact she would gasp. Just like the way he used to with his only. Her green eyes would look at him, plead with him. How many times had she asked him to ‘pretend’ to make love to her, to act? He could do it, if it really made her happy.

When done, her emerald eyes would gaze at him with satisfaction. Yet there was always a distant sad look to them, a look he held within his own eyes. She knew he didn’t love her, she knew who he saw in his dreams. His one and only.

And when he closed his eyes, there she was to smile back at him. His one and only, blue eyes shining.

Saturn Stars
Yukina_Raven
O_O .... AIIIEEE! My fic isn't WORTHY of this dedication!!! XD I LOVED that one! I think its my favorite... just the wording and the whole idea was perfect. How he would comply with her request only because he's lonely and how she just can't give up on him... that truely is their tragic love story, huh? I LOVE IT! Thanks for much for dedicating this to me story! I feel so special 'n stuff now. biggrin.gif
Saturn Stars
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O_O .... AIIIEEE! My fic isn't WORTHY of this dedication!!! XD I LOVED that one! I think its my favorite... just the wording and the whole idea was perfect. How he would comply with her request only because he's lonely and how she just can't give up on him... that truely is their tragic love story, huh? I LOVE IT! Thanks for much for dedicating this to me story! I feel so special 'n stuff now. biggrin.gif
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I'm not worthy to even write about it! But I couldn't help myself! Hhehe now read that smut fic I sent you!
Morgri
Awww, very nice, but #4 is still the best XD

Keep up the good work!!!
Sonic-Teal
When I read your fics Saturn I get emotions I barely feel, which takes a true writer to do that. I love reading your work good job, as for me I have to go intoa hate filled envorinment now, maybe a going into a goth club wearing yellow with a captin saying "Life is Beautiful" Yeah that will work XD
Saturn Stars
Ahhh here you go, some sappines!

EdxWin 100 themes
Love or Like?


~*~THEME TEN~*~


She had been contemplating for a while now. Not her usual self you could say, She had been dreamy, clumsy and love struck while around him. And she had absoloutley no idea why.

She dug her head into her hands with embarrassment as she thought of the stupid things she had done around him lately. Thank god he was too oblivious to notice her nervousness around him. Thank god.

She was travelling with the two brothers at the moment; she really didn’t know why she was. But once again she was glad that Edward just shrugged at any excuse. Really glad.

Why was she so nervous around him?

Al had stopped by earlier to ask if she was feeling okay. After all she had smashed a glass, tripped over Ed's feet and hit her head today, all in the space of that hour she had been walking close to him. She had constantly been jumping from accidental touch with him, or not paying attention because she was continually staring at him. It was enough to catch Al's attention that's for sure.

“I’m fine.” She had replied. She knew Al was smirking inwardly. But he left her to sulk over her stupidness in the room.

“Why oh why?” Just as she was about to cry out with self pity, she heared a knock at her door.

“Who is…--" She was suddenly cut off by his soft voice and felt her heart skip a beat. There it was... that feeling again.

“It’s me, can I… come in?” She glanced around nervously when she heard his voice and instantly ran to her mirror like a pathetic teenage girl. She observed herself and sat back down on the bed after pulling the brush through her locks speedily. She then welcomed him in shyly.

Once he was inside the room she looked away, unable to hold eye-contact with him. He shut the door behind him and leant against it with a sigh.

“S-soo? To what do I owe the pleasure?” She asked, flicking her eyes up to him quickly.

He smiled softly and headed over to her bed. “We’re going to grab a bite to eat… I was wondering if you wanted to come or have me bring something back.” He sat next to her, the bed lowering with the sudden weight. This caused her to lean against him slightly, her body starting to tingle at his warmth.

“Is that all…?” She demanded to know, somewhat disappointed. But what was she expecting? Seriously…?

“Yep” He placed a hand on her shoulder, which she instantly flinched over. The touch created a spark within her. No this wasn’t normal at all. She began wringing her hands together. I think I like him…

He frowned at her behaviour and leaned forward slightly, getting his head under her face so he could look up at her.

“You okay?” He asked with concern, cocking his eyebrow slightly. The close proximity caused her to inhale sharply. And being one who naturally had to tell the truth with words, the sentence just rolled off her tongue.

“I think I like you.” She said quickly, looking away. Her face started to burn with heat and she clenched the bed sheets tightly. He didn't hear that, no way, no way!

“Is that so?” He replied calmly. The hell? She turned to look at him with astonishment and watched as he rose from the bed. “I’ll bring you back something okay…?”

Hey eyebrows started to furrow in anger. She had just confessed to him and he was going to ignore it! “Hey Edwar-" She started heatedly. However, once again she was cut off by his soft chuckling.

“If it makes you feel any better,” He paused slightly, hand turning the door knob. He opened the door and smiled lightly at the girl on the bed. “I think I love you.” He left her with that last closing line and shut the door quietly behind him, leaving her with a silence she couldn't handle. She almost fainted with shock over his sudden words and fell back with a content sigh.

“Yes, that’s right, its love isn’t it?”


~*~Saturn Stars~*~
Sonic-Teal
Wow nice one Saturn. Heheh Ed seems like he dosent care or isnt paying attntion or he already knows.
Morgri
Beautiful, very very good. I love you and work to death Saturn Stars, keep it up!

Edit: Not that requests are good, but can you try to make theme based on this pic XD Yeah, it's hard, but Saturn Stars can do it!

http://img7.mytheme.com/upload/108707-111628510426734.gif
Saturn Stars
Sure I would love to. But I can't view that image. I'm not authorised to. So maybe you can try saving it to your comp and uploading it onto your next reply. Or find another for me to view it. Because I would love to do something nice for you! And I will try my best at writing... something about the pic I cannot see!
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