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It still needs some work, and I neep some tips for shading and coloring. I guess you can say i can't color to well. Sorry it's in a bad quality, I had to take a picture with my camera, since I can't afford a scanner.

hey thats pretty good i had to tilt my head a bit to look at it though lol
but yeh its looking fine
but do try and colour it or shade it if you cant get hang on to shading
there are some books that teach about manga drawing and it will have some tips on colours and shading but looking at other pictures and trying is good too.. thats how i learn

that is pretty cool finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It looks fine, Kao. It's probably a better picture of Winry than I could ever do.

The only thing that I can see is that the one eye is a bit too high in comparison to the other. Apart from that its fine.