Oh no I can't, I can't find my way,
it's the beginning of night,
and end of the day,
You see, I'm drowning in misery,
pain and blood and hostility,
who will come to me to save me, who?
you're the only one, my heart ever knew,
help me up, show me the way,
stand by me, be my day




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Very nice !

It has that certain ring to it.
It also has the really neat feeling that goes good ith the title,


preety poem

nice one!XD i think this applies to Ed alot....^^
aw poor Edo

0_0 wow...that was good normaly i would just find poems boring but that is really really good

Thanks everyone! Thought of it while reading yours, Legolas of Mirkwood.

Yes Ed's secret agent 10/10 becuase I wanna piss off legolas becuase I am so bored right now my fat uncle is hogging the TV I can't play KOTOR II. My books are in my room, which is locked and my mm has the key, The phone is being hogged by my sister so what better thing to do? This applies to Ed a lot. Poor kid, they should have used Obi Wan as their main character, foolish foolish mortals when will they learn that no alchemist will take the place of the jedi?

^ Woah. O_O

Thanks for 10/10

*sighs* that is so sweet! Applies to Ed and lot!! Good Poem!

Just try

I know it's hard to stay in the fight,
to go on 'til you can't see the light,
to rip yourself to pieces until you want to die,
I know it's hard, but you still have to try

........... *crys*.............


Edit: Kitty, your avy is awesome.

whoa, that was deep..^^ i really like it!!! nice work, lil' sis! keep going

[SIZE=7][COLOR=blue][quote=ed's secret agent,Mar 25 2005, 08:11 PM]
Oh no I can't, I can't find my way,
it's the beginning of night,
and end of the day,
You see, I'm drowning in misery,
pain and blood and hostility,
who will come to me to save me, who?
you're the only one, my heart ever knew,
help me up, show me the way,
stand by me, be my day

BEAUTIFUL! SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!
I WISH I COULD DO THINGS LIKE THAT!
can i?

Of course. Just try. XD XD XD

I'm going 'til the end

I'm getting it back, try 'til the end,
and all of my friends, I'll try to defend,
I'll do anything, and I'm not lying,
I'll get it back, or I'll die trying.
-- Thinking on Ed




............. *Actually cries* ...........................

my gosh, you're so good at writing these poems!! *^.^* yeah, i was thinking this is like Ed also. Great work sis!!!!XD

Thanx for [reviving and] commenting the topic.



Helpless

My eyes widen, I watch them all die,
I sit down, helpless, I break down and cry,
Alchemy, is the only thing, that I ever knew,
I guess, the truth is, there's nothing I can do.

Wow, all those poems were great. Some of the bestest poems I've read in my life~ You are so good at writing poems. ^^ When you have the time, can you teach me how to write poems? :3 *bad at writing poems*

I'm not a good teacher But maybe I could. [Thanx]

Pain

There's always gonna be some sort of pain,
some dull little ache, or some horribly insane,
there's the kind that barely even fazes your heart,
and the kind that grabs you ,and rips you apart

Yours is the one that made everyone cry,
yours is the one that made him lie,
yours is the one that made you, innocence sell,
yours is the one that drove you to hell

That was weird.

Cool poems Secret Agent, but are they good enough to defeat the poetry spider?

Poetry SPIDER? O_o

What happens

What happens when you break every day?,
when you rip yourself apart in every way,
when from even your brother, you try to hide,
You know what happens? You die inside.

Holy shit, I loved that.

I love it!!!XD very detailed and effective! exellent work!!XD

Run


and down i ran through the moonlit drenched street.
Everthing happens for a reason, but what reason is this?
The world was drown out by the rain and sounds of my feet.
'A Nistake.." but the thought was quickly dismissed.

i ran through the rain,
i ran through the fear,
i ran through the pain,
from the one i hold dear.

my mind has gone blank, like the fresh fallen snow.
the rain is frigid, my body has gone numb.
but i am grateful for the relief, for now not to know..
not to remember the reason i run.

my legs start to tremble; and ny thighs burn
the long game is over, no one has won.
if not me, fate would have taken its turn...
but i'm not convinced, 'what have i done?'

i just have to get away i just have to leave.
whatever i did, its whati had to do...
all suddenly went black, i can't breath
and the memory is bacjk, i remember, i knew.

Exhausted and stunned, i gazed up at the storm.
they kept me a prisoner, away from the sun.
and after i snapped, my plan took form.
my freedom only cost, the shot of a gun.

Woah. You're a good poet.
I'll just try.

You

And I walk down this road, with all my broken dreams,
nothing was, nothing will be, nothing is as it seems,
and now, my poor heart is being cut with a knife,
and now I walk lonely down this hell you call life

And my poor heart is being cut down,
and my poor soul is being pushed around,
and the whole world is being lit on fire,
and now, even god has become a good liar

Ah, my memories, they're bliss,
but, now my pain is endless,
and, I'm stuck in this infernal world,
so why do I feel so helpless?

And my spirit is shattered,
my blood has been splattered,
and my body's been beaten,
yet, my memories sweeten

And, I've lost so much, and felt the pain,
I've felt there's nothing else to gain,
and it's all a lie, everything I knew,
I've lost everything.............
everything except you
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I did this a long time ago. I even have a picture . But this stupid scanner won't work ......Oh well.

Niiiice poems. You guys (dont take offence if your a woman becuase I just go guys when I am talking to 2+ people) have some talent. Allow me to be your manager, becuase my goal in life is to become a general in the army and achieve global conquest. So who would be a better manager than the supreme ruler?

Blast accidently clicked add post twice. Mods should really give us the option to delete our own posts.

Manager?

Very nice and clearly thought out.

Yay ^^

Heart of silver

Heart of silver,
eyes of gold,
strength's been bought,
innocence sold

But you come before me,
righteously stand,
you have the strength of a rubber band

You can't do this yourself,
you'll eventually die,
but I guess ,like you said,
you at least have to try

You're falling......... ,
Very slowly, you're falling...... ,
But I'll catch you, don't worry... ,
And I'll send you back on your journey...

Heart of silver,
eyes of gold,
strength's been bought,
innocence sold.....

Eek. Did this a long time ago too.

You guys are good at writing poems I suck at poems! I did this one about an elephant who wanted to rob a bank (has nothing to do with FMA but I don't care ) Has 3 alternate endings. Read the first stanza and then read an ending. Then read the first stanza again and read another ending etc...

The Elephant Who Wanted to
Rob a Bank By: Phyco girl


There once was an elephant whose name was Hank
and one day he went poor
So Hank decided to rob a bank
Simply because he wasn’t insured and had damaged his car door
Ending 1-

So when the stars filled up the sky
and when the went sun low
Hank snuck past the bank guard guy
and went in the safe which held the dough

He filled his sack with loads of money
and then he tried to sneak back out
But what happened next was not funny
He was caught by a cop

Then poor Hank he went to jail
and though he got what he deserved
Hank taught us a valuable lesson:
Never take what isn’t yours
Ending 2-

So when day turned into night
Hank snuck past the guard
He disabled the security system
and took a load of money heavier than all the junk in a junkyard

He got out without being caught
and quickly drove back home
Then ten years later he was the richest guy on Earth
because he invented reality TV and never again needs a loan





Ending 3-

So when the moon lit up the sky
Hank snuck through the doors
He cracked the safe and slipped inside
before remembering about his brother Theodore

Who was a cop who would for sure
be devastated if he saw Hank
trying to rob a bank

So quickly and quietly Hank ran home
and sold his house on the market
and he ended up with a lot of regret
because he had to live outside Target

He desperately tried winning game shows
He wanted to get out of debt
But later he died without knowing he had a trust fund
Yes, Hank was a really big wreck

Told 'ya I suck at poetry but whatever Hope you had a good laugh at my pathetic poetry skills

-Phyco girl

I wanna try. This poem I made up while I was writing it....a.k.a right now...

Rice

Rice is so fluffy,
So fluffy and nice,
Like fresh snow on the ground
Snow is like rice.

Snow, snow the wind blows the snow,
swirls, whirls and twirls
so peaceful, so nice
snow for some reason reminds me of rice.

XD I don't think that was too bad....waddya think?