I was thinking of writing a fanfic, but I wasn't sure who's view it should be from. Thus, this topic was made. Like I said, If you have any suggestions, please feel free to post them. Darn it, I sound like some automatic machine. Well, whatever. I'll let you stop reading now, and this is the last thing I'll type. For now.Here it is:POST!!!

Definately Riza. I already saw Roy's point of view a couple of times (which is sometimes very naughty ) so I want to see how Riza reacts to Roy's or anyone else's pickup lines.

Yea, that might turn out intresting. Most of the time I think Riza wants to smack him.Especially about the miniskirt comment.Which was funny.

Well, first... what's the fic going to be about? Or is that going to be based on whose POV you write for?

<span style='color:blue'>Yea, because for me I just can't say "Oh, ok, whoever I write about is going to find a big traesure chest!!! "It'll depent on who's
POV, and what type of plot what suit them.</span>

Sorry about how pethitic the example was, it was the first one that came to mind. Plus it says what I want it to.

I'd like to see a Dante fic.

that'd be interesting too.And probably fun/interesting to write.

POST! Or the water alchemist(yes that's what my user name is SUPPOSED to say)~mumbles about how annoying and stupid typos are~will attack you with... uh... water.. I think...

I got one o' those. ^^ Nobody read it. >>; Well, one person on ff.net did. But whatev.

Anyhow, any well done angst fic is what I go for. Roy-Hughes and Ed-Al friendship fics are the best. But generally, it just has to be well done, and I'll appreciate the fic no matter what the content.

Id like to see a riza one..

Did you post it on here? I didn't realise there was one sorry.

Thankies for the suggestions/comment. I'm starting a Riza one, since she currently has the most votes, and I thought of an interesting plot. Now you get to post comment on the fanfic. YAAAAY!

The Other Side of the Gate
Warnng: this will contain spoilers

Riza and Roy sat down at the table, Black Hayate at her feet.
“So… do you like the the chick-” Riza looked at Roy’s plate, and realized Roy hadn’t eaten a bite of anything.
“Hey, hun, you haven’t eaten anything.” She ate a bite of mashed potato. “See, it’s edible,” Riza smiled.
Roy took a bite of food. “Thanks for informing me of that.” He sighed. “It’s just… you know what I deal with at work. Dammit, you work there too!”
“What’s it this time, babe?”
“It’s nothing...”
“What do you mean?”
“Exactly what I said!”
Riza looked at Roy’s hands, and then hers, ad sighed. Both were encircled by the same gold ring. She touched hers and then looked at Roy.
“Dammit, Roy! When I handed you your ring, and said ‘I do’, I didn’t mean it as I do agree to my husband not telling me anything!” Hayate whimpered, and she sat back down, and pet him, trying to soothe him.
“I-“Roy started to say something as the phone rang. “I’ll get it.”
He stood up, and walked over to the phone.
“Roy and Riza’s place, what do you-Oh! Yes, sir. Of course I wonder. I have a vague idea, but… Yes. Right away. Riza also? Thank you, sir.” He walked back to the table and said “We’re leaving.”
“Now?!?!?!”
“Yes, now.”


Tell me hopw you like it so far. Should I continue?

Eh, kinda not very character-ish. I can't imagine Riza calling Roy hun or babe even if they were married.
I'm not trying to be mean! but I think the others would agree with me....or at least I hope so.

Yes I DO agree, dammit!
...doesnt the Guy always ask the Girl to marry, not the other way 'round...well I just quickly scanned that, and it was kinda...er...anyway "hun" ...laughing my ass off...?
And you wouldnt go "Hello, Roy and Rizas place..." when you answer then phone

No offence or anything, but it needs....well, more then just a couple of tune ups...

Sorry sis, I have to say that I do agree with darkangelslayer... But please, don't be discouraged by these opinions. Think about what we said and try again!

On the contrary, Ged.. I'd actually be disappointed if no one had their harsh opinons, and it was all "perfect story".Cuz I knew it wouldn't be. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll edit it, cuz looking back, I realized I forgot to add~cough cough just thought of things to make it better cough cough~some inportant things. I going back to fix it. I'll repost it once I finish.


Later: Geez, this is fun to fix. Don't worry though, when it's done it'll be MUCH better

The Other Side of the Gate


Riza and Roy sat down at the table, her stomach bulging, and Black Hayate at her feet.
“So… do you like the chicken?” Riza looked at Roy’s plate, and realized Roy hadn’t eaten a bite of anything.
“Hey, Roy, you haven’t eaten anything.” She ate a bite of chicken. “See, it’s edible,” Riza smiled.
Roy took a bite of food. “Thanks for informing me of that.” He said stiffly, and then sighed. “It’s just… you know what I deal with at work. Dammit, you work there too!”
“What’s it this time, Mr. Fuhrer’s right hand?” she smiled playfully.
“It’s nothing...”
“What do you mean?” she said gently.
“Exactly what I said!”he shouted, infuriated she didn’t realize he didn’t want to talk.
Riza looked at Roy’s hands, and then hers, ad sighed. Both were encircled by the same gold ring. She touched hers and then looked at Roy.
“Dammit, Roy! When I took your ring, and said ‘I do’, I didn’t mean it as I do agree to my husband not telling me anything!” Hayate whimpered, and she sat back down, and pet him, trying to soothe him.
“I-“Roy started to say something as the phone rang. “I’ll get it.”
He stood up, and walked over to the phone.
“Hello, what do you-Oh! Yes, sir… Of course I wonder… Who knows? Yes… Right away. Riza also? Thank you, sir.” He walked back to the table and said “We’re leaving.”
“Now?!?!?!”
“Yes, now.”
“Where?”
“To find full metal.”
“Ed?!?!?! But he’s been gone…” she looked up at him “Almost 2 years now.”
“Doesn’t make a difference. It’s a direct order from the Fuhrer himself.”
“Is anyone else coming? Because surely he can’t expect…”
“Oh, no, he doesn’t. He’s ordered Havoc, and Fuery to come with us.”
“Where do we look?”
“He said to come to his office A.S.A.P, and he’ll tell us where to start.”

AGain, I was lookin' down that...

As i sed before...


Do women ask the men to marry them...or the man ask woman? Lol, to be honest, im not sure...

Please dont doble post lil sis.. OK?

Just use the magical 'EDIT' Button.. OKIES?

Yeah, I posted it here, and it died immediately with no replies. (Lots of my posts do that. I'm so unloved/ ;_;) It's a little bit shoujo ai, if you can stand that sort of thing.

Ok, can someone here PLEASE give me the def of double post? Cuz on my other boards, double post just meant posting the same thing 2 times like:

Post 1: I luv my dog, it's cute!
Post 2: I luv my dog, it's cute!

Um, , I think the boy normally asks the girl.... The second time I fixed it, putting "When I took your ring and said 'I do'..."

Double is what you just did....again.It's ok though, let me explain. Instead of taking 2 posts, use the edit button to write whatever you need to say in just one post. On the bottom right of your post is the edit button.

Anyways, it got better but, it still needs a little fixing. I feel like as though Riza's sterness and composure isn't present in the fic.

Thanks darkangel(can I call you that? anyone can call me either Water, or Becca, rather than Water Alchemist)

Yea, darkangel is fine. I know that it's too much time to write the whole thing.
I think that I'll call you Becca...it reminds me of beer...Becks?....okay then I'll stop now.

Edit:It also reminds of Beckham, and soccer and England....On to the word association topic!

Ah, I see, ok then

i like the fic.. looking good.. keep it up!

i would says....Riza ^_~

Ok, peoples. Hang on a bit longer, I'm working on the next part(and trying to remember that's what I'm supposed to be ndoing, not playing DDRExtreme)

Once they arrived in his office, they, all four personnel stood at attention, listening to his order to go to Dante’s manor, and research how it might have happened, and talk to Rose, the only known witness. “Sir!” they said in unison, saluting, and walked out in an orderly fashion, except for Jean, who looked like he would be happy doing anything, anywhere rather than what he had to.
As they left the Fuhrer’s office, Havoc, looking relieved, said “Ok, well, uh, I don’t know about you, but, I’m going to bed. Like he said, we need to get a good nights rest.” He stalked off before anyone could comment.
“Yeah, we should get at least a few hours of sleep. Though,” Kain looked in the direction that Jean left in. “I wouldn’t quite have said it like that. Well, I’ll see you in the morning. Mustang, Hawkeye.”

In the morning, when Riza woke up, she saw Roy still sleeping, and the clock blinking 6:29, exactly one minute before it was set to go off. She saw Roy sleeping, and decided to let him sleep another minute. She walked into the bathroom, and got dressed. As she slid the shirt of her uniform over her stomach, she held her hand there for a minute lovingly.” Good morning, my sweet child.”
She finished getting dressed, and walked out of the bathroom, and the clock caught her eye. It said 6:34, yet the alarm hadn’t gone off yet. “Roy, get up you sleepyhead! The alarm didn’t go off!”
He mumbled something sleepily, then rose. Once he finished dressing, Riza made sure she had her pistol in her belt, and they went to go meet Jean and Kain at the train station.-
“We’re going to talk to Rose first. Let’s hope we don’t scare her. You know her opinion of the military, and of her…bad experience.” Roy said. Rizawas just glad that that had never happened to her. She shuddered at the thought.
Riza looked at the train schedule before her. She traced the schedule with her finger, looking for the train they needed. “Next train to Resembool is at... 7:15. That’s in fifteen minutes. I’ll go get the tickets.” She walked to the ticket booth, and requested 4 tickets on the 7:15 train to Resembool. The teller gave her the pathetic apologetic look, and said,” I’m sorry, miss, but we’re sold out. What about the…” she looked down at what Riza assumed was a schedule.” 7:30 train?”
Riza looked at Roy, and he shook his head. “Sorry, but we’re here on military business-“
“Oh, ok then. The Fuhrer himself requested I hold four tickets for every train, just to make sure that you would catch on.” She smiled. “Four tickets, right, ma’am?”
“Yes.”Riza held out her hand to accept the tickets, and handed her some money.

As they sat on the train, the men were talking about the mission on hand, but she wasn’t paying attention. The womanly instinct of wondering about her unborn child was kicking in. Will it be a girl? Will it be a boy? What will I name my-she looked at Roy-our child? Lily? John? Savanna? Andrea?






As always, comments are welcome. And if you DON"T comment...I shall poke you Bwahahahahahahahahahaha


EDIT~Pokes everyone~ BwhahahahahahaCOmmon, people. If you don't comment, I shall stop writing thins story! I need your opinions!

~sniff sniff~NO one like me; oh well, I'll just finish this for completions sake. ~is crying that no one likes her~

WHOA! WHAT IS WITH THE TRIPLE POSTING?!
I thought we explained it to you?!
Use the edit button!!

Anyways, I liked this one more then the others. Not bad.

(well, at least someone ackoknoledges my pathetic fanfic)sorry bout the doub post, should've combined it., but the last one is like a week later. Was I supposed to combine that?

Here's more of the story(sorry fo the long wait. I hate writers block):

***

Winry sat on her bed, writing in her journal, rage building up inside of her at the evil little book. It was so cruel, reminding her of her precious memories, of times when Ed was still in her world, and Al a boy with all of his memories intact. Yet still, she wrote.
“Dear diary, I missed Ed so much! I can’t believe Rose, to this day, still won’t tell me what happened, even though she was there. If Ed gets back I’m going to-“
She stopped, looking at what she wrote. If he gets back. If. She knew eventually she would have to stop clinging on to memories of him, but it wasn’t eventually yet. At the cold thought that she had given up on him, that she had put “if” instead of “when”, she cried. Eventually wasn’t there just yet. After a few minutes, she brought herself back together, and mentally smacked herself. Crying. Over a boy. She was an idiot. Sure, she missed him. But srying over him? Sheesh. As she heard the doorbell rang, she ran down the stairs to get it. She thought to see Rose, with Jonathan, her son, returning from afternoon excercize, but was suprized. She saw Riza Hawkeye, the man whom had murdered her parents, and two others.
“Riza?”
“Yes, we’ve come to ask a few questions, Winry. Is,” Riza looked down at a paper she held in her hands “someone named Rose Silverbell here?”

I updated my fic, if anyone cares

I think it's pretty good.

PLEASE DON'T TRIPLE/DOUBLE post!!! If you have seen the moderator's sigs they say:"Doub/Triple post and DIE!" So I would suggest calming down and continuing your fic. Also PLEASE don't double or triple post just to say something like "Nobody cares" because it's not true!

I have another question:Why did you make fun of your forum family on your sig??? Is it because you're mad at them? I mean you can be mad at all of them right?

Sorry for involving myself in your personal bussiness.

-Phyco girl

what do you mean? I make fun of them?~checks sig~ If I did, I was kidding. If I did that was hurting them(or at least their feelings)~makes voodoo doll of self~ I was bad. If any of my family visits this, I'm sorry for making fun of you.~pokes voodoo doll~ OwWwWwWwWwW

what do you mean? I make fun of them?~checks sig~ If I did, I was kidding. If I did that was hurting them(or at least their feelings)~makes voodoo doll of self~ I was bad. If any of my family visits this, I'm sorry for making fun of you.~pokes voodoo doll~ OwWwWwWwWwW

Oh, is something wrong with your computer? It think it accidently automatically double posted. It happens a lot to some people though so don't fret

I didn't know you were playing a joke on them I thought you were mad a them or something.

Oh, don't make a voodoo doll of yourself! We love you and your fic Water Alchemist I think that you aren't getting as many replies because people think it's a poll and dosn't have a fic involved. Good luck

-Phyco girl

my computer took a long time to post, so I thought it5 had forgot the command, so I clicked post again. No, I honestly didn't realize I made fun of them or anything. I'm really AM oblivious, sometimes. I'm gonna add to my sig the link, and that it's a fanfic.



LATER Sorry, I'm discontinuiong this fic, at least temporarily. Sorry. Just don't feel the inspiration, anymore. Maybe I'll continue it later.