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CodenameElizabeth
<-- LOLZ, it was time for a new icon. Can anyone tell that I was in a bad mood last night? XD


@TianAi: OMG, my teeth hurt-- those pics were sooo sugary-sweet! I have to say I like the style as well. Sweet Roiai is a welcome change from angsty Roiai. Although I like BOTH.

@Tian and Starrie: Jeebuz-- this thread is packed with uber-talented artists. I'm getting pretty intimidated about posting fanart now! SRSLY, I am REALLY bad ay drawing any kind of firearm...

@Tombow: Actually, thanks for resizing the pic. I knew it was going to stretch the forums in a weird way, but for some reason I'm too dumb to get the attachment function to work right. BTW, that was a cool quote. Where is that from? Or did you make it up? I had been meaning to post some pics on the cosplay thread, but I never got around to it. I also have been meaning to post in the "forum Suggestions" thread that we get a "FMA Cosplayers" thread added to "Fanworks"-- since I think that cosplay a sign of a dedicated fan just as fanart and fanfic is! wink.gif
Tian Ai
Thanks to everyone who looked at the fanart biggrin.gif I'm glad you guys enjoyed the pictures.. I like that artist so much ><

A little over a day till Chapter 68, right?! biggrin.gif

riza hawkeye 9
just a very quickly post ( i promise to comeback later for a huge post XD)

CONGRATULATIONS !!!! WE WON !!! I'M SO PROUD OF THIS THREAD !!!

but let's not forget the others that were participating !! congratulations for them too !!

and Very Special Congrats to Tombow, MelRiza and Nil-Chan you guys are awesome and i'm so happy you win !!! congratualtions !!

now i'm going ... don't forget our V-day album is up to february 20th !! let's spread the royai love , you can find the details in pg 664 (i dont know for sure Tombow if i'm wrong please correct me ^^')

and OMG .. 68 should be out today or tomorrow ...so close .. i can't wait ...please roy dear , come back XD

sorry for the hush .. i'll be back later bye =*
Tombow
@LadyHawke78 - Glad you don't mind!! ^^ That saying is on the pic. Isn't that nice?? happy.gif

@Tian Ai - Yap, Chapter 68 in few days!!! Yay!!! biggrin.gif

@riza hawkeye 9 - Thank you for the congrats!! ^^
And, thank you for the reminder for Royai V'Day!!!

(Reposting from riza hawkeye 9's post. ^^)
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Royai Valentines Day Album

we will accept any kind of art that contains Royai as a theme ^^
fanfics - fanarts - pics - icons - signatures - songs - cosplay - and etc ^^

to the fanfics writers :
the theme is warm fluffy royai

the words chocolate , cupid and round were suggest by starriedgirl so the fic would be even more special if you include them ^^


N.C.Stormie suggest a contest with the theme
"Royai fic with Roy POV musing on Hayate"
it can be any kind of fic ( we don't have a lenght limt ), if everyone accept me, NCStormie and Riza'slittlesister will be judging it and the prize will be a royai banner ^^

TNFA created a C2 in FF.NET , "chiken soup for the royai soul" , PM her for add your stories or just enjoy our archieve

the fics should be posted until February 20th !

this themes can also be used to fanart/icon and others kinds of royai art ^^

i'm collecting everything that has been posted since last week( as pics, cosplays and others ) and we'll include them on our royai V-day album.

Haiku's posted between the challenge period will be in the collection as well ^^

any doubts or suggestions just PM me, NCStormie or Riza'slittlesister
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Note: I think NCStormie will be busy for a while, so if you have questions, maybe you can ask riza hawkeye 9 or Riza'slittlesister, I think. biggrin.gif
riza'slittlesister
Yes, if anyone has any questions about the Valentine's Day album, you can ask me! If I don't know either then I'm sure I'll be able to find out.

Chapter 68 will be out any day now! It's exciting! The other manga I read comes out once a week, but that doesn't allow for quite the suspense and the chapters are only 18 pages or so long...

The C2 is thriving too, visit if you have a chance!
CodenameElizabeth
QUOTE(Tombow @ Feb 8 2007, 06:25 PM) [snapback]502619[/snapback]
That saying is on the pic. Isn't that nice?? happy.gif


OH... so that's what the Kanji says! Nice!!

Any way you could translate this one too? (looks like the same artist...)

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(Woohoo! I got the atachment thing working!!)

BTW, I recently put in for a username change, so expect something 'different' in the near future... ')
Tombow
@CodenameElizabeth - Tehehe, for a moment I thought you're a new poster!! tongue.gif
Yes, that one is saying...
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Riza: "It's my duty to guard you."

Nice pic!! happy.gif

And, here is it!!! Courtesy of Kirara on Chapter 68 thread in FMA manga forum...
Chapter 68 Raw!!!
Nekokitty
@ CodenameElizabeth: That's a pretty picture. It's so sweet.

I just finished Chapter 68.
I won't spoil what happened. D:
Tian Ai
Tombow and riza hawkeye 9 - Thanks for the reminders! I'm going to have to try and squeeze something in between my schedule biggrin.gif

CodenameElizabeth - I like your new name!! happy.gif Thanks for the raw link!

CHAPTER 68 RAW!! I think I want to wait till it's translated so I won't be wondering tonight what they said...ohh, but I want to click the link ph34r.gif No...must...resist...temptation! ARGH!
Ahahaha
T^T *weeps in a corner* I dun wanna spoil the storyyy!!! but I'm pretty dissapointed with it!~~ T^T (even tho it's cool)
Tombow
@Ahahaha - I know what you mean... is talking about Chapter 68.
It's a good chapter, and if you are a fan of Trisha x Hoho papa, that's great!!
But, no[spoiler] Roy, no Riza, no Royai[/spoiler]!! *sob*!!!


So, to console everyone, here is a page from Red Marker:
(It's like a preview of what's coming.. biggrin.gif )
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Top

The Military uniforms for female personnel have been changed to Mini-skirts!! (It's possible!!)

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Middle

Roy is a new Führer!!
Roy: *smile~~~*
Kain looking at mini-skirts: Haaaa~

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Bottom Right

Kain: "Thank you very much, new Führer!!! You're the best!!!"
Havoc: "Lady killer!!"
Roy: "Ha ha ha!!"

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Bottom Middle

Havoc continues: "Love Boy Führer!!! ..Pervert!! .. Useless!! ....Small-sized!!"

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Bottom Left

*charred Havoc*
Roy: "By the way..."

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Just for a taste... ^^ The story continues.... biggrin.gif
esrz22
I made a Riza Mii last night.I'll try to make Roy today, then see if I can find a way to post them. tongue.gif
Untitled
Hi guys! Just wanted to say congratulations to:
This thread, Tombow, MelRiza, and Nil-Chan

Back on topic:
Omg? It's valentines again? And no valentines gift from Arakawa-senseii?!
*dies*

Oh well.. Be looking forward to the continuation of that Tombow!
Edamame
ZOMG, chapter sixty-eight is here~ Thank you so much Tombow for the link to the raw and the translation of Red Marker.

Tian Ai: I love your artwork of Riza; she looks truly sweet. I would love to see more of your work.

Starrie: I am glad to see that you are still continuing the Royai Twelve days of Christmas. Too bad there is no twelve days of St. Valentines.

(Zahh, this chapter had TrishaXHoho papa. tongue.gif I bet TripleSoul will be more than pleased)
Tian Ai
Tombow - Thanks for that translation! biggrin.gif Hope to see more ^^

Edamame - Thank you, I hope to get better biggrin.gif

Triss Hawkeye - I forgot to say before, I'd really like to see your work! tongue.gif

I'm scared about your reactions to Chapter 68 ph34r.gif I can't...hold... the temptation anymore!

Keoni
*pops in*

zomgzomgzomg!!! * squeee* The Royai Thread won an award! That is so cool biggrin.gif Congratulations guys! *grouphugs*

And congratulations to Nil-chan and Mel-chan!! *GLOMPS* That's so awesome! It couldn't have been anyone else, since Nil-chan is the best graphic-artist I know and Mel's drawing skills are just unreal. Seriously cool biggrin.gif

Sooo.... uhm.
Is the new scanlation out yet? *refuses to look at the raw this time* Bet there won't be any Royai, huh? dry.gif

So, about this Valentine thingy, I want to contribute something, too. since I slacked off at the whole Christmas thing. I'll write something since my drawing suck Is it okay if I just make something up, or does it has to involve Hayate, chocolat cupids and that other thing? I don't wanna be nagging or anything, but I don't think I can write dogs happy.gif I can give it a shot though.

Oh, and Welcome to everybody who joined! Man, there are so many new names here, I'm affraid I can't remember them all (I'll leave that to Tombow tongue.gif )
Speaking of which, it seems like I missed your "lecture" Tombow. laugh.gif It's been ages since you've posted one of those. The good old days.. *giggles*

*goes off to catch up* some more*
Tian Ai
Keoni - Hi Keoni, I haven't met you before, but hi and welcome back to the Royai thread biggrin.gif

(Btw I LOVE your sig! Such pretty colors... Kairi's awesome tongue.gif)

I'm hoping to get nice drawing/writing sessions in this weekend, maybe I can get something up in time for <3-day biggrin.gif
Keoni
Thanks Tian Ai! happy.gif
I just saw your Riza-fanart a few pages back. I'd love to see your next drawing. You have a very cute style. I love how you did her hear and eyes, really awesome biggrin.gif

(btw: thank you! I bought the game last week and now I'm totally addicted laugh.gif )
Tian Ai
Keoni - Ahh thank you biggrin.gif I've been on a roll lately because of inspiration from other fanartists and with Valentine's Day coming up happy.gif

[I remember starting the game, but I got stuck somewhere a bit past the half-way point.. had to start a new game. = ="]

Oh yeah, I was wondering about how some series have chapters come out every week [like Naruto] and some have one come out every month [FMA], does it have anything to do with popularity? Or just how much they can handle?
Keoni
(Man, I hate it when that happends! I keep crashing gummy-ship dry.gif)

Well, I think that has to do with the artist, actually. Kishimoto-sensei draws one chapter a week and Arakawa-sensei one each month.
I don't think it has to do with populairity,or with how much they can handle but I'm not sure ^^;;
Maybe it's because FMA chapters are longer than, for instance, Naruto ones?
riza'slittlesister
About the raw: sad.gif That's too bad, I'm very disappointed. Oh well, it has to happen sometime!.

Hmmm... I'm not sre. I don't think it has anything to do with popularity, it's probably just the author/publisher's choice. Another thing to note is that the manga chapters that I read once a week are MUCH shorter than FMA's.
Tian Ai
riza'slittlesister - Hmm, yes.. that's true, Naruto chapters are like, 20 pages.. plus their storyline moves a little slower, too..

Ahh, I looked at the raw.. won't say anything for now, though.. But, [spoiler]at the end, Winry and that one man-lady mention 'military'.. could that mean...next chapter..? biggrin.gif[/spoiler]
Starrieidgirl
@ Everyone My goodness how we are moving along! New chpts must do that.

@ Edamame I take up the challenge to start a new song...

The "12 Hours of Valentine's Day" Song!!!!

In my happy lil world...the military start their day at 7AM and end at 7PM aka 0700hrs to 1900hrs.

"In the first hour of V-day my true love gave to me...
A cup of coffee."

And to help move the song along, let's imagine that these are things Riza is giving Roy. For White Day, we'll do a song having Roy giving Riza gifts.

Please join in! I had sooooo much back in December with our Christmas song that this only makes too much sense.

Love y'all!

EDIT: Yay!!!!! My 100th post in the FM-A.com forums!!!!! biggrin.gif
Tian Ai
Starrieidgirl - That's such a clever idea! I love it <3 It's cute biggrin.gif

I did a drawing just now because I was bored and thinking about scarves (XD)

Scarves??

Uh, yeah.. really splotchy ><
Starrieidgirl
@ Tian Ai Yay!!! Fluffy Royai! And it's wonderful! I could never draw anything like that. Please do some more, so that they can be added to the V-Day album. And thank you about the song idea. I cannot remember what pages you'd find the Christmas one, but if you come up w/ something. Please post it.

How much longer til the scanlation? Days? Hours? Minutes?

Hugs!
The New Fullmetal Alchemist
Hello, all!

All that zomgfta says right now is "Chapter 68 is coming soon!"

Thanks for posting the RAW, though, Tombow!

Hey, Keoni! long time no see! happy.gif

4 more days until Valentine's Day!!

Everyone work on your submissions!!
Triss Hawkeye
My scanner is now working! ^^

Here's my sketch. It's just Roy, but it does have Royai implications, especially if you read the manga. I've just realised his hands are way too small. O.o

Roy
Keoni
Aww taht's such a cute drawing Tian I love it a lot! happy.gif

@ Triss: LOL he's holding the queen. XD cute drawing smile.gif

*waves at TNFMA* hey! nice to see you, too

I think I'll get started on a drawing, too wink.gif
Nil-chan
Keoni-chan!!!!!! *superglomptackleattack* You're alive! Halleluia! *huggles to death*

I'm so happy you came back! And thanks for your congratulations. happy.gif (And I love your new sig by the way. KH2 for the win!)

Thanks for posting the RAW, Tombow. Now i just have to be steadfast and hold out until the scanlations are out. *tries to be patient*
Starrieidgirl
@ Triss What a wonderful pic! Well done, too! I love the chess allegories the manga makes, or any other movie/show/book etc, that uses chess pieces. Would you like for it to be added to the V-day Album?

Does anyone have an idea for the 2nd hour of V-day song? I'd love to know!

Have a good night all!
Tian Ai
Triss - I like your picture! The queen piece biggrin.gif Hehe...

Starrieidgirl - Congrats on your 100th post! Sorry, I just SUCK at these song lyric things.. I end up making it sound like some kind of 'omake' song o.o"
Triss Hawkeye
@Starrieiedgirl - Yeah, why not? smile.gif Can't think of anything for the song yet though...
The New Fullmetal Alchemist
Starrie - sure, I'll help out - what exactly are you looking for??? (I'm most creative when I have some guidelines. smile.gif )

Chapter 68 Update

Well, Tombow already posted the RAW, but now it's up on ZOMGFTA.com as well, along with a text translation - the finished scanlation should be up within the next day or so. smile.gif
Tombow
I'm having terrible connection, so I'll be quick, but Red Marker is translated, and I'll post as soon as my connection improved. biggrin.gif
Starrieidgirl
@ Tian Ai Thank you for the congrats! And it's okay if the song becomes an omake! It's kinda the idea biggrin.gif

@ Triss and TNFMA Go back to pg. 670. There I started the song.

Rules??? There really aren't any. Just think of something Riza would give Roy on V-day and can be stretched to fit the "12 Days of Christmas" song lyrics. It's for fun and for killing time!

So here is a reprisal of the start of the song:

"In the first hour of V-day my true love gave to me...
A cup of coffee."

I'm off to finish the doodles!

Hugs!

PS Tombow I hope your connection gets better! We need you! K? bye-bye!
The New Fullmetal Alchemist
Thank you for the translations, Tombow! happy.gif Hoooray, Red Marker!!!

@ Starrie -

"In the second hour of V-Day, my true love gave to me:
two white spark-cloth gloves,
and a really good cup of coffee!"

(heehee... I have to have the tune in my head to write "lyrics," and those adjectives about the coffee make it sound more like the actual song, y'know? But that's just me! laugh.gif)
Tombow
I'm skipping responses to the posts for the past few pages because I'm trying to catch the window of period when my Internet connection seems to be working, and trying to post the Red Marker... I'll catch up with everyone's posts later!! Sorry!!

I'll try to post as many pages of the Red Marker in English while the connection is holding... smile.gif

Here are pages of Red Marker in English:
(Originally brought to the thread and posted here by Tian Ai on page 657 (last post). )
And, my disclaimer, which is deferring from my "usual" disclaimer:
I'm rather hesitant to call this as "translation" because of many alterations I have injected. The original doujin in Japanese is including some lewd/raunchy comments, and also some story inconsistencies. Also, if translated directly from Japanese, what Roy character says in this doujin may sounds rather male chauvinistic in some parts.. (although, in Japanese, since he is a military superior to Riza, the words used are possibly understandable.) Therefore, I am presenting vastly sanitized version of the story in English. As such, please be advised that you may find some other versions (if any) of translations for this doujin that might be widely differing from what I'm presenting here. And, also for the same reason, please do not bring this to outside, or do not repost this on other sites and present this as the "translation" of Red Marker. It is "an English version of Red Marker" and slightly altered and sanitized version at that, and I'm presenting this only for the enjoyment of viewers of our thread for the Royai Valentine's Day 2007 celebration for this thread. ^^


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(Page 4)

The Military uniforms for female personnel have been changed to Mini-skirts!! (It's possible!!)

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Middle

*Roy finally became a new Führer!! Yay!!*
Roy: *smile~~~*
Kain looking at mini-skirts: Haaaa~

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Bottom Right

Kain: "Thank you very much, new Führer!!! You're the best!!!"
Havoc: "Lady killer!!"
Roy: "Ha ha ha!!"

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Bottom Middle

Havoc continues: "Love Boy Führer!!! ..Pervert!! .. Useless!! ....Small-sized!!"

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Bottom Left

*Charred Havoc*
Roy: "By the way..."

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Top Right

Roy: "Have you seen Lieutenant Hawkeye? I have been looking for her."
Havoc: "No, I haven't seen her."

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Top Left

Roy: "I see."

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Bottom

Havoc: "Oh, I got it!! Führer wants to see Lieutenant in mini-skirt!!"
Roy: "Wh.. What?? Nonsense!! You fool!!"
Riza: "Hello, Führer!!"

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Riza: "What are you doing here, sir??"

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Falman: "Ho, ho, ho!!"
Crowd: "Ohhh!!"
*Stares..*
*Camera shutters clicking..*

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Bottom Right

*Operation "lifts!!" and...*

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Bottom Left

*"Run!!!"*
Roy shouting while running: "No, No, No!! No way!!! Can not show this to everyone!! Mini-skirt is BANNED!!!"
Riza: "You shouldn't run on the hallway, sir."
*Thus, "Mini-skirt ordinance" for female Military uniform was taken down in one day.*

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*RoyRoy and AiAi... sound like names for a Panda couple!!... Off topic!!!*

Top Right

*Ring ring!!*
Riza on the phone: "Hello, this is Central!!"

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Top Middle

Riza still on the phone: "Aha, yes??"

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Top Left

Riza: "The color of my underwear?? Let's see..."
Roy" "BWA!!!"

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Roy: "That's a prank call, you do not have to answer...."
Riza talking on the phone: "No I'm not wearing underwear."

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Riza on the phone: "Bye."

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Top Left

*Riza hangs up the phone*
Roy: "You.. you're not wearing un.. under... underwear??"
Riza: "Aha, yes, so?? Anything about it, sir??"

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Roy thinking to himself: Hold it, hold it... calm down!! Don't panick!!
Whew, I'd almost fallen for it!! This must be some joke.
Their must be some punch lines coming next...

Riza: "Well then, about this form, Colonel.."
Roy: "Wait, wait, wait a minutes!! You mean that wasn't a trick joke?? Could I take that as a face value?? !!"

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*Roy, a desperate 29 years old....*

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*More OT... When I hear anime Riza's voice (Japanese VA) she reminds me of an old anime heroin..*

*Roy and Riza on a date on their day off*

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Top

*Roy seems preoccupied with thoughts...*

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Middle Right

Riza: "Nice day today."

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Middle Left

Roy: "Yes it is.."

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Bottom

Roy: "I wonder what we do look like to others now."
Riza: "Huh?"

Meantime at the distance...
Ed: "Waaaahhh!!"
Winry: "Wai~~~~t right there!!"
Al: "Niisaaaan!!"

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Top Right

Riza: "..."

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Top Left

*Nearby, Izumi is "busy" with Sid"
Izumi: "Yeaaaaa!!"

Riza: "I don't think anyone is 'looking at us, sir??"
Roy: "Do we..."

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Roy continues: "...look like a couple, don't we??
Riza: "A..."

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Bottom Right

*Nearby, Winry beats up Ed*
Winry: I told you not to brake my automail!!!
*Whack, whack!!*

Riza: "I don't know what normal couples should look like.."

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*Still nearby, Izumi is busy punching Sid*
Izumi: If you ever look at other women like that again, I'll kill you!! Got it??!!"
*Bzoooom!!*

Roy: "Let's change the sceneries, Lieutenant!"

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(Story continues... I'll catch next window of period with better connection and post more!! ^^)
Jo21
@ Tombow
Nice translation, man!!!
@ Keoni-san
Yo!!! Welcome back!!! I remember ya from a long long time ago! Welcome back!!!

COUNTDOWN: 2 MORE DAYS TO VALENTINE'S DAY.
Edamame
Starrie: "The Twelve Hours of St.Valentine's" is so cute. I'm glad that one of my crazed ideas is being put to good use. Hmmm, not what else would Roy give to Riza behinds piles of paper work to complete? (joking, joking)

Tian Ai: Your artwork just pulled my cuteness heart-string. You draw such sweet and lovely pictures.

Triss: Great artwork of Roy. I remember that scene from the manga so clearly. I think its so sweet how Roy considers Riza to be his queen.

Tombow: Thank you for translating more of Red Marker. You seriously rock!

Chapter sixty-eight made me feel really emo. Sniff, Hoho papa is turning out to be one of those 'tragic characters'.
CodenameElizabeth
QUOTE
Riza: "The color of my underwear?? Let's see..."
Roy" "BWA!!!"

Roy: "That's a prank call, you do not have to answer...."
Riza taking on the phone: "No I'm not wearing underwear."



*headdesk*

Tombow, you KILL ME DED! XD
Excellent translation.

And Winry beating up Ed at the end was a nice bonus...


Tian Ai
Tombow - Thank you so much for the translation! I lol'ed my butt off at the underwear part... although that is way out of Riza's character blink.gif IMO, anyway.. my favorite scene was the page where they talk about the weather, Riza looks so pretty ^^

Edamame Aw thank you biggrin.gif At my age I prefer cute to romantic.. if that makes sense XP
The New Fullmetal Alchemist
Wow, Tombow, thank you so much! smile.gif

I don't have time to read it now, but I promise, I will!

As far as V-Day contributions go, I've decided I won't be submitting anything for Wednesday, as next week during our school's week-long break I'm going to London with my family, so right now I'm kind of running around getting ready. Instead, I have a great idea for a cute story that I'll write up and upload as soon as I get back in town. smile.gif

Oh, and did I mention... ???

CHAPTER 68 IS HERE!!!!

I know that the RAW and translation has been floating around for a while, but here it is! The actual scanlation!

Happy birthday, ZOMGFTA!!!

2 days until Valentine's Day!

Go and read Chapter 68 RIGHT NOW!!
Tian Ai
TNFMA - Thank you thank you thank you! I'm going to read that NOW! biggrin.gif

Can't wait to read your story! tongue.gif
The New Fullmetal Alchemist
@ Tian Ai - neither can I! laugh.gif

Ah, one last visit on the thread before I head off to bed. smile.gif Hey, that rhymed... You know what? We haven't had a haiku in a long time... I'm going to do one right now... Um... Hmm.. Ok, here we go (Riza is saying this one):

"Put that away NOW!
You are making Havoc bleed.
Stupid miniskirt."
Starrieidgirl
@ Tombow Thank you for the translation of Red Marker. I'd been waiting for it as soon as others started talking about it. Hopefully your connection is getting better so that we can get the rest of the story.

@ Edamame You are soooo welcome! I agree that it will be hard to come up w/ stuff, but let's just stretch the imagination for V-day.

@ TNFMA OMG!!!! I love London! I went there about two years ago on my own and I have to go back and work in the West End. It was amazing! Have lots of fun, take lots of pictures, go see some theatre, and do a Jack the Ripper night walk. I did one on a night of a full moon, it was soooooooooo cool!

Also, thank you for the addition to the song and restructuring the first line. It was a little awkward.

@ Everyone Head over to DA and check out Day 6 of a Royai Christmas

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"In the third hour of V-day my true love gave to me...
Three black books,
Two white spark-cloth gloves, (Would "Two ignition gloves" fit better?)
and a really good cup of coffee!"
Tombow
Here are continuing pages of Red Marker in English:
(Originally brought to the thread and posted here by Tian Ai on page 657 (last post).
For preceding story, please check page 1 ~ page 10)
And, once again my disclaimer: I'm rather hesitant to call this as "translation" because of many alterations I have injected. The original doujin in Japanese is including some lewd/raunchy comments, and also some story inconsistencies. Also, if translated directly from Japanese, what Roy character says in this doujin may sounds rather male chauvinistic in some parts.. (although, in Japanese, since he is a military superior to Riza, the words used are possibly understandable.) Therefore, I am presenting vastly sanitized version of the story in English. As such, please be advised that you may find some other versions (if any) of translations for this doujin that might be widely differing from what I'm presenting here. And, also for the same reason, please do not bring this to outside, or do not repost this on other sites and present this as the "translation" of Red Marker. It is "an English version of Red Marker" and slightly altered and sanitized version at that, and I'm presenting this only for the enjoyment of viewers of our thread for the Royai Valentine's Day 2007 celebration for this thread. ^^



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Note: The scene changes, and this is back in the Central HQ, on some later day.
(Page 11)

Top Right

Roy: "Second Lieutenant Havoc, have you seen Lieutenant Hawkeye??"
Havoc: "Lieutenant Hawkeye, sir??"

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Middle Right (Note: I know it seems out of order, but that's how the order is here. ^^)

Havoc: "She was on the early rotation today. She said she got some business elsewhere, and left shortly before."
Roy: "I see."

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Top Left

Havoc: She might still be in the locker room.

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Middle Left

*Knock knock*
Roy: "Lieutenant Hawkeye, are you in?"
Riza: "Yes I am, sir."

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Bottom Right

Roy: "Pardon me to bother you, but I need to ask you about.."
*Roy opens the door*

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Bottom Left

Roy: "..about this data.."

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(Page 12)

Right Bottom

Roy: "!!!"

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Left Top

Roy: "Oh, uh..I didn't mean to catch you while changing... umm.. about this data..."
*Sweat drop!!*
*Meantime, Roy's wondering eyes catch a book on the table*
*"Führer Roy 'uke' doujin"* (Note: That's some naughty doujin. ph34r.gif )

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Left Bottom

Riza: "Nooo!! Don't look at this!!"
Roy thinking: Lieutenant!! Just what are you reading!!?? blink.gif
(Note: I couldn't read the caption in the tiny print here. )

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Note: Scene changes again, and the following two pages look like some fan-service filler.
(Page 13)

*By request, Ed and Winry scene.*
Top Right

Winry: "E.d."

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Top Left

Winry: "How is your arm working lately??"

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Middle Left

Ed: "Amm.. Nothing to complain about."

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Bottom Right

Winry: "I got some good idea.."

Ed: "No thank you."

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Bottom Middle

Winry: "What, Ed??!! I haven't said anything yet!!"

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Bottom Left
Ed: "I said, no complaint!!"

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(Page 14)

Top

Winry: "Come on, Ed! E. d.!! Let me try the new part!!"
Ed: "Don't want it!!"
Ed: *Hoa!!*

Riza, Roy, Al.. *Feels very "outsider"..*
Roy: "..."

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Middle Right

Winry: "Ah!!"

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Middle Left

Ed: "Oh!!"

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Bottom

Roy: "To our pure & fresh sweet couple, a gift prepared by us adults."
Ed: "Cut the joke, Colonel!!"

(Note: I didn't quite get the joke. This might have been part of requests made by the doujin fans. unsure.gif )
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(Page 15)

Middle

Riza: "Colonel has left his date book on the desk."

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Left

Riza:" "Ah!!"

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(Page 16)

Top

Riza: "Colonel."

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Middle

Riza: "You left this behind."
Roy: "Ah, thank you."

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Bottom Left

Roy: "Have you read inside the book?"

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(Page 17)

Right Top

Rize: "A little."

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Right Middle

Roy: "That was rather a bad conduct, wasn't it?"

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Right Bottom

Riza: "Sir, the book was open!"
*Riza is getting annoyed!!*
Roy thinking: She is getting annoyed!!

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Left Top

Roy: "So, how much of my secret has been exposed to you??"

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(Page 18)

Top Right

Riza: "You can forget about that, sir. Rather, please concentrate on your paper work."
*Thud!!*

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Top Left

Roy: "Lieutenant, I need to know."

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Bottom

Riza: "Red markers on your off days. With female names... multiple names."

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(Story continues, but I need to take a break..... I'll post the conclusion tomorrow. biggrin.gif )
Jo21
@ Tombow
thanks for translation!
Tombow
@Jo21, and everyone, glad you like Red Marker in English!! ^^

Whew, my connection had been so bad I couldn't even load up the pages here without getting timed out.
Hopefully, I can catch up now.
Let's see...

@Untitled - Nice to see you!! And, thank you!! ^^
I love you new sig!! biggrin.gif

@CodenameElizabeth - Saw you Riza Cosplay getting great review on Cosplay thread!! Good job!! ^^
And, I posted How to post pics on our board (second post on the thread) and it explains how to make attachment.. maybe that could help?? unsure.gif

@riza'slittlesister - Thanks for doing the Royai Valentine's Day Album, and C2!!

@Keoni - OMG!!! So nice to see you!!! *hugs!!*
(Yes, Royai thread won TWO awards. Best Thread, and Best Character Discussion Thread. biggrin.gif )
And, gahaha, you remember my old editorials also?? Tehehe... yap, good old days.. tongue.gif
BTW, love your new sig and avatar!!! happy.gif

BTW, hope we see Paca for Royai Valentine's Day!! unsure.gif

@Starrieidgirl - Congratulations for your 100th post!!! Glad you came here to make it!! ^^
And, I love the songs!! Thanks for starting it!! ^^
Also, nice job with the drawing!!

@Tian Ai - Awww.. I love Scarves!! That is such a sweet Royai drawing!!

@Triss Hawkeye - That Roy is so cute!! And, you did wonderful job on the chess board, too!! Queen!! Yes!! biggrin.gif
BTW, I like your new avatar!! biggrin.gif

@Nil-chan - Nice to see you!! Yap, the scanlationis out!! biggrin.gif

@The New Fullmetal Alchemist - Wow, you and your family are going to London next week?? Awesome!!Hope you're gonna have great time!! ^^
And, thanks for posting the scanlation link!!
And, yes, I like your 2nd Day for 12 Days of Royai V'Day 12 song!1
And the Haiku!! Love it!! laugh.gif


I think that's it, and I'm all up to date!! (By any chance if I missed anyone, sorry!! Please blame it on my bad connection!!)


Assuming the connection will hold, I'll post the conclusion of Red Marker tomorrow!! ^^
Tian Ai
Tombow - Thank you so much for the translation! biggrin.gif Wow I guess I must have skipped over a lot of parts while I was reading it last time because I didn't know there was some.. weird .. stuff in here blink.gif

Starrieidgirl - Haha, I love the song so far! I think 'ignition gloves' would fit better tongue.gif

TNFMA - Haha! I like that haiku X) Roy's going to get Riza'd after that...
Edamame
The New Fullmetal Alchemist: I can not wait to read your Valentine's Day story. I hope that you have a wonderful time in London with your family. It really is a great city.

Starrie:
I love the song so far. I can only think of odd gifts like shiny pistols, and mini-skirts. rolleyes.gif

Tombow: Thank you again for the translation! It is a rather...cough...interesting doujinshi to say the least.
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