Don't Joke my fanfic! if you read it..


"Where're you going Ed?..." Al had already taken a step towards Ed. "Nowhere...Nowhere.." Edward was begining to walk to the other side of the hill towards an empty field, with a large city off in the distance.

"Ed wait!" Alphonse tried following Edward, But Edward had put his hand up in a motion signalling Al to stop. "I'm not going anywhere." Ed turned to Al, the same smile he had the last time he saw his mother before she died on his face. "Brother..." Ed had started walking again.

"Brother! don't leave me!!" Al cried out to Ed, but Ed hadn't stopped. Soon Winry had come out of her house, and was close behind Ed, leaving Al behind "Where is everyone going?!" Soon Enough the whole town was heading off behind Ed.

Al Followed close behind the people, trying to figure out what was going on. "Why is everyone leaving?..." He just then noticed that the people were carrying what looked like weapons, and they all broke into a sprint, as they did this, Al began to run as well. "What's going on?!" Al pushed his way through the people as they stopped.

Al noticed Ed standing infont of the people with winry by his side. "I'll take my punishment... After all.. I'd be breaking the 'law' if i didn't.." Ed was referring to "Equivalent Trade". "Ed, What's going on?" Alphonse took a step closer. "He's a Monster!!! He destroyed my home and my store!!!"

"Is this true?..."Al looked from the villagers back to Ed. "He destroyed our village just by clapping his hands!!" Ed looked down at the ground. "Why?!" Al began to shake Ed's arm furiously. "Al....Just go home..."


Er.. and that would be the end.

The layout is a little confusing to follow, and there isn't too much explanation for things. Apart from that its a good story. Add more please, I wanna know what happens.

looks good, please carry on..

@Kou the Lightning Alchemist: Nice start, you got me hooked . The cliff hanger part was pretty good also. Can't wait tell the next part !

I'm workin' on the second part now o.o

awesome!
hurry up on the second part i want to read it! @_@

Ed glared up at Al with a look on his face that would send men crying to their momies."Al.....go home" Ed growled out with such force, it could break a solid wall into pieces.

"But Ed.."Al cried out, though what he really meant to say never slipped out of his mouth. "Just go home." Ed was now getting furious with Al and his constant nagging. "Ed, i'm not going." Ed now outraged with Al, claps his hands and puts his right hand to the ground.

"Al, go home, or I'll do it." Ed now had a small cannon under his palm. aimed at Al. "Ed..I'm not leaving...tell me what's going on..." BAAAAM suddenly a round is fired from the cannon, but the cannonball barely misses Al's head. It looked as though Ed was serious.

"AHHH" Al was now ducking in fear of being hit. "Why'd you do that Ed?! he's your brother!" Cried out winry, who was now grasping onto his arm tightly, and shaking it. "He's getting too deep into this.. He can't be blamed for my mistakes.." Ed shook his head. "Now Al, Go home now." Al stood up confidently

"I said i'm not leaving." Al was really terrified, but he was hiding it pretty well. "So tell me what happened. "You don't need to know, Al." Ed now had the cannon pointed at Al. "Now Go home or else!!!" he fired another warning shot.

"GET'EM!!" one of the villagers cried out as he ran and attempted to grab Ed's arm. Ed clapped his hand and swung his Automail-sword/arm at the villager.(Take note, Al has his own body.)"I've sacrificed too much to lose it all now.." Ed grabbed Al and winry by the hands, and ran towards the new city. "We're Leaving! NOW!" But Al was still confused. "what did you do that was so bad?.." Al now looked up at Ed who was pulling him by the arm. "well.."

ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER!! MWAHAHAHA!

Well..the second part is posted on a seperate topic, it helps seperate the comments between the two parts.

You are so cruel...but you did post the next part pretty quick. I like how you have still kept it quiet what he has done (until the next part)

Winry is allowed to stand by him hey? She really does care if she will go anywhere with him.

It only just clicked (duh) but Winry is willing to styand by his side and face an angry mob. Ah...love.

thats so cruel don't leave now

but anyway that was awesome ^____^

Don't start new threads for every chapter, please.

I'm not, i wanted to try something new, and piss people off I see it worked

who knows? maybe i'll keep it a secret for longer?

Damn you

"Hm?" Al was more curious than before. "Well we don't have time for this now!!" Ed clapped his hands and hit the ground with his palm, as a large wall rose from the ground beneath them, Al and Winry now ahead of Ed, he ran to catch up.

"That should stall 'em" Ed turned to winry and nodded, they both began to run faster, though Al was lagging behind a little bit, his body still being that of a 12 year old. "Wait up!" Al tried running faster "Ugh! quit being so slow!!" Ed called out to Al, slowing down quite a bit.

"Don't be so harsh Ed!" Winry slapped Ed's arm in disgust. "He needs to run faster or go home!" Al looked at Ed screaming at winry now "She didn't do anything Ed.. It's my fault, I'm sorry.."

Ed smiled and looked at al satisfied "Well, you're too deep into it now to get out just like that." He grinned now.

"You mean..." Al began to smile "Just try not to slow us down too much" Ed was now grinning widely to his brother.

"I wont, I promise" Al began as he sped up, they were now entering the city. "Lets stop at a hotel, you look beat, brother" Ed said as he looked down at his younger brother. Standing at the counter of the hotel as they entered...

"Hey Ed! you've really grown!" Ed looked at him angrily "WHO'RE YOU CALLING MICROSCOPIC?!" Roy smirked and shook his head "I was mearly saying you've gotten taller." Standing behind Roy was his trusty companion/subordinant, Riza Hawkeye.

"Ed, you really did grow" She smiled gently to him, like a mother would a son. "Well, uh.... um.." Ed blushed alittle bit, then looked at winry. "They're right Ed, you ARE taller, See! you're taller than me by far!" She was referring to about maybe 3-4 inch difference in their heights. "Well.. I AM me afterall" Ed began, Sounding Cocky. "Don't get too caught up in it ed, you've still got a long ways to catch up to roy" Everyone but Ed began laughing, but soon he joined in.

"Why don't you join us?" Riza looked to the others "Yeah, we're on a 'mission' but you could stay with us, free of charge, we know how much you like free stuff, Ed."

Ed began to boil up again "HEY!!" Roy laughed "Only kidding Fullmetal." They all had begun walking up the stairs to Riza/Roy's Room.

"So what brings you hear Fullmetal?" Roy was alittle puzzled.





Oooo i'ma keep doing this for a bit >.>

@Kou the Lightning Alchemist: Nice . I counted a few spelling errors , but over all it was pretty good .

Yes what brings you here...tell me dammit!

But then it'd make the story shorter!

I know...but I'm impatient.

An interesting fanfic! It's a nice touch of you to not tell what the reason is why they are running away. Makes me want to continue reading!

Ah, sorry 'bout that. I somehow posted this my previous comment twice.
My PC is playing tricks on me

Ed continued up the stairs, Lookin at roy, a consered look on his face. "Well.. I er..." he looked down at the stairs, "Come'on Elric, What brings you to this place, after so long?"

"We were run out of town" Al continued "Why?" Riza joined the conversation again. "We don't know, maybe the villagers dislike alchemists?" Al looked to Roy "Then why'd they run her out?" Winry looked at Roy who was questioning her.

"They didn't.. I followed Ed.." She looked at Ed's sorrowful face. "They....they called me... a monster..." Ed's hair covered his eyes. "Now why would they do that?" Roy mocked playfully.

"ROY!" Riza yelled in roy's face, mad at his constant ability to play around. "what? I'm just asking a question?" He turned to the woman who had just slapped him. "A question that's butting into their business! we should just let them get to sleep." She had an angry Expression on her face. "Fine, Fine, if you insist. The room's this way boys, and ladies." Roy turned to a door leading out of the stair well. "here?" Ed walked into a semi-empty room. "Yes, here." Roy closed the door behind him, leaving everyone outside, then a moment later, he let them in, and there were 3 beds, 1 for roy/riza, 1 for Ed/Winry, and 1 for al. "Looks like we're going to have to share.. except you kiddo" Roy pointed to al.

"Why not me?" Al was concerned a bit. "Because you're a kid." Roy had quickly replied, as he cut off the lights and went into his/riza's bed. "Night kids."

Ed quickly sat up as well as roy, to the sound of a gunshot outside, they had both headed to the door, and made it there at the same time. Ed looked at Roy, and nodded, as Roy did the same.

They both quickly ran down the stairs and went outside. They saw thousands of...villagers, the leader of them was...




TO BE CONTINUED... agaiaiain

@Kou the Lightning Alchemist: Good one . Cliffhanger after cliffhanger . I must keep reading !

sorry guys.. i can't post again today.. i feel nausious...

is...is...why do you keep leaving me in suspence?

Oh well, keeps me on my toes.

Fantastic fanfic!

Ed was shocked to see this man once again, but even more so, Roy was shocked to see that he was still alive.

"How.....why?" Ed was stammering, still shocked. "Alive i see." Roy added on to Ed's random questions that were constantly popping up. "Edward Elric destroyed the village, and he should be punished.

"I DID NO SUCH THING!!!" Ed's face was now burning red, and roy had put his hand on Ed's shoulder "Calm down Elric." Roy had now seen through the trick that had been placed on the Elrics.

"Yes.. you destroyed their homes...son" Edward was more shocked at the fact that he still had the nerve to call him 'son' after all of these accusations. "I DIDN'T DO IT!" Ed was now about ready to kill him.. if it hadn't been his own father. Roy looked forward with the most calm face any man could have at such a situation.

"Edward Elric..." Roy added in "Did not do any of this... did he?" he was now speaking to Ed's father as if he were the enemy, and he was. "He did. and we have proof.." Edward's father was now grinning. "No, you did this.. didn't you..."

"Me? why would i do this? You and I both know Edward did this" He was grinning wider than before. "Because you are not who you seem to be.." The man smiled.."Maybe..maybe not." He/she was now taking form, and becoming who she really was, "Envy" laughed as she had called the villagers to attack the hotel.

"CHARGE!!" Cried some of the villagers who were going forward at roy and Ed. "Outnumbered?..too bad" Roy snapped his fingers, and caused an explosion to his right. "heh...should've known better." Edward clapped his hand and sent a few men flying through the air on a chunk of rock which was rising from under them.

"Shall we?" Roy looked to Edward. Edward had only to nod and smile before they both ran in towards the villagers.


ohhhh i'm making cliffhanger after cliffhanger

Forward to battle men!

Ohh, looking forward to a next instalment.

I hope you all like my mystery-to-action story

@Kou the Lightning Alchemist: I do enjoy your fanfiction . It's been awhile since I've read a fanfiction like this. You keep throwing elements into the mix that catch me off gaurd. Very unique .

Ed and Roy had begun fighting, though Al, Winry, and Riza were still asleep. "ROY!! I don't think we're gunna hold out too long!" Ed was fearing for the worst.

"But we've gotta try!" Roy had just punched a man in the face and grabbed another man's shirt, causing it to catch fire. "Heh... I'll do better than try..." Ed clapped his hands, and created a cannon from the ground, and fired it at a few of the men, knocking them straight to the ground.

"Nice one Fullmetal!!" Roy snapped his finger and caused an explosion under a few of the villagers. "Call me Ed!" He had said, jumping onto the roof of the patio, looking up at Envy. He gave him a 'you're next' look, before clapping his hands and placing them on the roof of the patio, which then created a spring, which brought him up to Envy.

"Mr. Elric... I see you made it" Envy had the widest grin you could have seen on anyone. "You wont get away this time!!" Ed swung his sword arm at Envy, envy jumped back, the sword barely cutting his hair. "heh.. you've gotta be better Edward Elric." Envy had swung a punch at Ed, but Ed caught his fist at the blunt of his attack. "heh.. I'VE gotta do better?" Ed swung his free hand at his face, though she blocked it with his own hand.

Meanwhile....

"You fools can't possibly win!" Roy smiled as he looked around, he punched one of the villagers in the gut, and kicked another in the neck, just before reaching to the ground, and forming a sword from the concrete under his feet, swinging his new sword covered in flame at one of the men's stomach's, cutting it wide open.

"Next?" Roy had just looked forward to see a large man. "Uhm... I think... YEAH! I'm next!! woohoo!" Roy could tell this big oaf was nothing but brute. The man swung his fist at Roy's gut, sending him flying into the wall.

On Ed's side...

Ed lifted his leg up, only to have it caught by Envy's knee. They both jumped back, panting for air. "You've gotten better. Boy." Envy was smiling as if he were hiding something. "You haven't seen anything yet..."Ed said, catching his breath. He ran at him, thrusting his leg forward, hitting his gut, he slid back alittle bit, before running under his leg and tripping him.

"Gotcha!" Envy was proud that he had pinned Ed on the ground.


Roy's Troubles...

Roy got back up, whiping the blood from his mouth. "that all you got?" he ran forward, jumping to a flip over the man(wooo! GO ROY!) landing behind him, and tripping him with a sweep kick. He then stabbed through the man's neck with his sword, looking up to ed, who was having just as much trouble as he was before.

Ed Vs. Envy



Ed had created a legion of spikes which had stabbed envy in the back, he grinned at him before jumping off the other side of the roof. Ed ran after him, but when he reached the end of the roof, she was gone. he jumped back down to roy. "he got away... how'd you do?" Ed grinned at roy "I beat'em bad" Roy said. overconfidently "wait'll we tell the others" Ed smiled wider "Let's wait till tomorrow" Roy suggested "Why not?" Edward agreed.




Another cliffhanger eh? Will envy ever die?! Will Ed and Roy stop being a good team? Will they tell the others?! will i stop asking questions so much?!

*just to point...Envy is a guy *

Great battle scene. Will they tell the others indeed. Many questions to be answered.

Shhh.... no one knows that >.> <.<

@Kou the Lightning Alchemist: Whoa ... Roy is a vicious madman . I don't blame you for calling Envy a girl. The first time I heard Envy's english voice I almost did a friggin' back flip off of my bed cause he sounded like a woman. I thought he would have a more masculine voice .

Roy and Ed had finally gotten to sleep, but that wasn't a long-lasted peace, for winry woke up, and woke Ed up for the breakfast. Ed and Roy had been up all night fighting to protect them, and they didn't even have the respect to let them sleep. They didn't know, however.

"What's for breakfast?" Ed looked at Winry who had been at the oven. She looked like she'd be suited for motherly duties. "Eggs and bacon" Ed looked at winry, astonished by how beautiful she had looked today.

"What's the matter?" Winry rose an eyebrow to Ed. "uh...n-nothing..." Ed smiled while he looked at Winry. "Just enjoying your company." Ed gave a wide grin before sitting down at the table across from Roy.

"Why don't you get her?" Roy winked to Ed, though not so that anyone else would notice. "Because.... I know she doesn't think of me as more of a friend." Ed sighed, before grabbing a plate and silverware. "Besides, she has better things to do than 'go out' with me." Ed had his hair unbraided, and it was rolling infront of his face.

"Why don't you let me get that for you?" Winry stood behind Ed, gently running her hands through his hair, before begining to braid it. She felt as if he were always there for her. She thought to herself he's very...cute... She smiled, and Riza caught that smile on her face immediately.

Winry had finished and given them their eggs and bacon, then sat at the other table with Riza. "Why don't you just ask him?" Riza smiled she knew that winry wanted Ed. "Ask what?" Winry rose her eyebrow again. "Him to be yours." Riza, put her hand on winry's shoulder.

"Better do it now before someone else takes your place." Riza had her hand on winry's cheek. "But... I know he doesn't like me..." Winry gave a sigh similar to Ed's. They both felt the same about each other EXACTLY the same.

As they finished their meals, they hopped into Roy's new convertable, and drove towards Roy's hometown. "Why your home, Roy?" Riza was confused a lot more so than before.

"Because I have to meet someone there." Roy put on some sunglasses and continued to drive, the wind blew all their hair, except riza, who had hers in a bun, like usual.

((sorry for the late laaaaaaate update, i had school -.-))

Aww, a little bit of romance goes a long way

Ooh, who has Roy got to meet. And a convertable you say? I fancy some of that.

Glad you updated...can't wait for the next part.

DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGERS!

I'm waiting for the next chapter and being very impatiant about it (like always )

Great job so far! Hmmm... Who's Roy meeting? And a CONVERTIBLE?! Man, Roy is one fancy shmancy (and must also be obsenely rich (if I even spelt that right and knew what 'obsene' ment)) dude.

Ah love. I'm a big supporter of EdxWinry and I like RoyxRiza too. Therefore I will strangle Roy to death if he is meeting a mystery woman who he is secretly dating and whom is staying in Roys's humongus mansion that's a gazillion miles long and... Well I'll strangle him

Bring in the new chapter! I MUST HAVE IT!

Great fanfic! Good luck

Also HI CHIYO!

-buh bye 4 now!