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happy.gif I've noticed that there are many drabble stories out there, but I'm not doing this b/c it's like the style or something. "I'm here for me", like Edward says. I've wanted to give it a try for sometime and I finally got the right ideas! I hope you all enjoy because I enjoy doing this. FMA is just so addictive for me.

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Orange Juice


I yawned as I entered the kitchen and saw that Edward was awake. That was a first considering he was the one that always slept in.

We greeted each other and I opened the refrigerator to retrieve the drink I craved for. There was a glass on the counter and I decided to place my juice there. But when I turned after putting the container back, Edward was already drinking from it.

“Hey! Get your own damn juice!” I exclaimed as I swiped the glass from his hand.

“I did; you placed it in my glass.” He said as-a-matter-of-factly.

“Your glass? It’s mine. I found it here on the counter.” This argument was pointless.

“But it was next to me.” He smirked.

“You should have gotten milk so you could grow, Ed.” I murmured as I got the carton of juice again.

“I’m already taller than you by seven inches, so I don’t need it. Maybe you should so it might help you in your days or something.” My days?! That little [All hail lord Xenu]!

“You should get it for your days; you seem to be showing the attitude.” I almost pulled a nerve.

“I’m glad I’m not a girl so that I won’t experience that.” He kept smiling and got the glass from me.

“Right, you’re so lucky Ed. You don’t have to live through the colics and pain.” I said sighing.

I walked towards him. “But we girls have our advantages.” I cooed in his ear as I sat on his lap and kissed his lips.

I heard him place the glass on the counter and we wrapped our arms around each other. But just as smoothly as I sat on him, I got the glass.

“Hey, Ed?” I breathed.

“Yeah?” he was equally breathless and blushing.

“It’s my juice.” I pecked him on his cheek and walked through the kitchen door to go outside.

He followed me and I felt his strong arms make a ring around my waist.

“You know we could share, right?” Him, sharing?

“We could, but I just don’t want to.” I said as I took a sip.

But he backed me up to the wall and kissed me sweetly.

“You taste like orange juice, baby.” He whispered.

“You taste better.” I said as the flavour of the drink united our lips again, but the juice was later ignored.


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I hope you all enjoyed! I'll update soon to not keep you all waiting! biggrin.gif
edo little kid
Yaay !! ^o^

great job Auto-Alchemechan ^^

I enjoyed it

the last part was Cooooool ~<3

Auto-Alchemechanicist
QUOTE (edo little kid @ Aug 2 2009, 06:21 PM) *
Yaay !! ^o^

great job Auto-Alchemechan ^^

I enjoyed it

the last part was Cooooool ~<3


THANK YOU SO MUCH! Wow, I didn't think people would like it here, but I'm glad you made me change my mind!
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm also glad you thought the last part was cool! I'm posting the next one tomorrow! Thank you again!
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edo little kid
Aww , you're welcome

Looool *happy*

I will wait your update tomorrow \^o^/

see you soon~ ^.^/
Auto-Alchemechanicist
biggrin.gif Um...I hope I posted this right! Hope you keep enjoying this and thank you edo little kid for replying
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Surreal


The alley way was dark, but what can I expect when I come home at this hour? Al would be furious, but at least my check would have more cash in it.

I heard a scream behind me. It was feminine, but resistant. It was like she wanted to fight back, but she couldn’t. That was a frustrated shriek.

“Get away from me!” she yelled.

“Hey beautiful, we just want to be around you.” One of the cretins said.

“I said leave me alone!” she kept yelling.

That girl was in danger and I couldn’t just stand here and let her get hurt. So I turned around and saw a rather small silhouette and three other shadows surrounding her. How cowardly of them! Assaulting someone who was defenceless?

“Didn’t you hear her? Let the girl be.” I ordered.

“You mind your own business, blondie.” The same one said as the other two came towards me. They were going to attack me, but I would fight back. The other one was coming behind them and he had something in his pocket. It shined; obviously a blade.

I commanded the girl to run, but she was horror-stricken. Through the darkness, I could see her eyes widen, but she didn’t run.

The men began to strike, but I dodged their attacks. The man with the knife got me once on my left cheek, but I made him drop it by breaking his hand with my automail. They were scared now and headed for the alley’s entrance only to run into the police to get cuffed.

“Edward?” The same feminine voice that had been roused called out to me. Only one person had that lovely voice.

I went towards the girl and she walked towards me. As soon as the moonlight hit her, she glowed. She ran to me now and when she was inches away, she jumped at me and locked her lips with mine.

“Winry,” I breathed. Winry was here, in this world? “How?”

“I crossed over and I came in contact with those three when I did. I came to find you.” She said hugging me tight.

“Wow, this is incredible.” The smile was very obvious in my tone.

“But you’re bleeding, Ed. They hurt you!” She’s going to start worrying!!

“It’s nothing Winry. You’re safe, at least.” I pointed out.

“Thanks to you.” She whispered touching both sides of my face. “If I kiss your wound, will you feel better?” she asked almost innocently.

“Try it out to see if it works.” I replied with less innocence.

She had that smooth touch; the wound did feel better.

“Come,” I said taking her hand in mine, “I’ll take you to my home.”

The moment of her hand in mine didn’t last though. She wrapped her arm around mine when we began to walk. It was unbelievable that this girl was here now. It wasn’t a dream because that cut was pretty convincing to me, so she couldn’t be a fake. It wasn’t real for a second, but after I got over it, she was the girl I had fallen for back in our world.

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I hope you liked! I'll put the next one up tomorrow!
edo little kid
awwwwiiii , kawaaaiii what awesome update !!
Loooool , I liked the fight too ^^

( “If I kiss your wound, will you feel better?”
“Try it out to see if it works.”)
awwwww sooo niceeee !!

I enjoyed it a loooot

thank you Auto-chaan

you did cool job !!
I will wait the next ! ^o^

see ya~

Auto-Alchemechanicist
smile.gif Okay, this one came out of pure boredom. Amazing what I can think of when I get bored. *Giggles* Anyways, thank you edo little kid for reading and replying! I rate this one a minor T+.
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Shower


I was angry with him! I spend hours over a hot stove preparing the best meal I could for him and his brother and all he can say is that he’s tasted worse?! I’m never cooking for him, ever!

At least this nice cool water calmed me down. The icy drops felt good as they hit my burning skin and I relaxed. I took my time and scrubbed my body with my light green loofa and washed my hair until I felt that it was straight again. That would last for a while though; this immense summer heat made my hair frizz up and unwanted curls appeared out of nowhere.

I rinsed from head to toe and wrapped my body with my towel, but as I stepped out of the shower, I noticed that I had forgotten to bring clean clothes. I was furious enough to forget even the smallest garment. Well, at least everyone was asleep and I can run to my room and change. But as I opened the door, I wished that Edward would be waiting for me outside. It was a strange feeling I possessed toward him. I’ve felt this way for a long time—maybe since I was eleven—but with every passing day, it evolved from mere friendship to pure love. This was true: I loved him, but I didn’t know if he felt the same way.

When the light of the room hit the darkness of the hallway, I saw him there, standing outside, waiting for me. I blushed because for one thing I didn’t expect if and for another, I had no clothes on. I was bare, wrapped in a towel that only covered my chest, abdomen, and a small portion of my thighs.

He blushed as well and apologized, but I didn’t know the reason for that. Maybe it was because he found me with dripping water and I was practically, well, naked. He turned so he wouldn’t see me, probably trying not to be perverted and stare at my body or something, but I didn’t consider this a coincidence that he showed up just now.

“What do you want, Edward?” I questioned sourly. I was still mad.

“Sorry”, he was hesitant, “about dinner. I was an [All hail lord Xenu] with you and I should appreciate your efforts more.” It wasn’t easy for him to do this, but to me he looked so natural. And he looked even more convincing as he stared into my eyes and told me all of this.

I gulped silently. “You should because I made that food with care and…” I didn’t want to finish. How could I tell him I did it with love? He’s not the type to feel any affection towards anyone except for his brother. And my tears drowned my voice as I spoke.

“But you know how much of a prick I can be, Winry.” He finally admits it!

“Yeah, but somehow I feel like you changed, that you’re not the same.” That you’ll love me like I love you. I was too sensitive right now and I know he couldn’t stand to see me cry.

But I thought he would let me do my quiet water works. Instead, he caught me by my waist and captured my lips with great tenderness. I don’t know who gave in first—I think it was me—but we both stepped into the bathroom and we both closed the door. Although my towel didn’t come off, he touched me sweetly, but just a few kisses and caresses, nothing extreme.

“Winry, so…” he was out of air, “you forgive me?”

“Your apologies have always been accepted.” I panted. He should know that already; how could I keep a grudge for so long and towards him? That was impossible!

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I have such an innocent mind, don't I? I love that mind of mine! Anyways, I hope you liked this one.
edo little kid
Loooool that was hot ^o^ !!

I liked the Shower part

Win X Ed part too!!

you have a wonderful mind !
and I enjoyed all this fic so much!

I'm happy to read this nice story

thank you very much ^.^/

Auto-Alchemechanicist
Thank you so much! I'm very pleased that you enjoy them! That gives me a big boost! And THANK YOU for reading this story you call nice! I'm so flattered, I'm blushing! Thanks! I'll post the next one in a few minutes!

happy.gif I've noticed these keep getting longer. But they won't pass the 1,300 words limit (I hope). And yeah, I feel like this one is cheesy, but I have to put it up sometime or another, so I might as well get it out of the way. Let me know what you think of this one, okay? Thank you so much edo little kid for enjoying these!
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Heed


My tears ran down my cheeks so quickly that I felt they would never be stopped. He was leaving again and it made me miserable to watch him go. He was getting everything ready for his departure and I had no way to stop him.

“Winry, are you crying?” my granny surprised me from behind.

I was hesitant. “Yes,” I squeaked.

"Honey, you’ve watched him come and go too many times. And every time he leaves, you cry for him. Why don’t you tell him?” Tell him? My grandmother!

“Are you crazy?! He would never listen to me. Do you think he could feel the same in the slightest?” I had my reasons to feel doubt. He was always busy.

‘Why not? You got a nice smile, expressive blue eyes, a gorgeous face and body, pretty hair, a caring attitude. What’s there not to like about you?” her attempts were sweet, but not persuasive.

“Thanks granny, but he won’t” I choked.

“Winry, you’re letting time pass and eventually, he might look for someone else. You’re killing the love you have for him.”

“I don’t know what to do, granny.” I whispered.

“You’ve thought that it’s not worth the time because you grew up and your childhood days won’t return. Even if you and Edward have changed, your love for him has also. Everyone has taken notice, Winry.” She was lecturing me, but it sounded like a pep-talk.

“You’re right; he doesn’t know and he won’t know until I tell him.” I stood and headed for the stairs.

“You have to help yourself, honey.” Granny said as I came to the last step.

I was nervous, but I was the extroverted out of the two of us.

“Edward,” I said as I entered his room, “we need to talk.”

“What is it Winry?” he sounded indifferent, but he would start caring in a few moments.

I closed the door and took baby steps so I wouldn’t lose my balance. “Ed, I…you can’t leave yet.” What was I doing?

“Why not? Winry, I have to; it’s my job.” This time he turned to face me and his eyes widened when he saw me.

“You’ve left me so many times, Ed.” I began as I continued to walk towards him. “I’m not blaming you of anything. I’m telling you it hurts.”

I saw him cringe when I said that. “Winry…I’m sorry I do that, but the military needs me and…” To hell with that crap!

“So do I.” I felt the need to break down, but I had to be strong so he would listen. “I miss you so much and you don’t come that often to visit. But I want for you to stay…with me here.” By the time I finished talking, I was a few inches away from his face.

“What are you saying Winry?” he was confused, but he would get the picture.

I leaned forward and connected his lips with mine, wrapping my arms around his neck in the process. He responded to my gesture and wrapped his arms around my waist.

“I love you, Ed.” I was prepared to tell him, but I didn’t think it would be this easy.

“What?” he breathed.

“It’s what you’re hearing Ed. I’m in love with you. I can’t stop thinking of you and when you’re here, you fill me up.” Does he need another explanation?

“You waited all this time just to tell me?” Huh?

“I’m not just going to come up all of a sudden and tell you this in your face.” I said intrigued.

“Ironically enough, you did just that. But I’m glad you did.” Now he was confusing me.

“What are you saying?” I wanted his reason!

“No offence, but how could someone like you be attracted to me?” I wanted to slap him there.

“Don’t say that! Do you have any idea how many girls are after you?!” It was impressive to me that I had to tell him!

“I know that, but I’m asking about you. I mean, look at you, you’re perfect. How can you love me?” he snorted at first, but then he softened up.

“I don’t know. It’s just…you I guess. I love everything about you. There’s no other explanation to it.” I blushed heavily.

“Well, I feel stupid.” He murmured.

“Why?” Did he want something?

“I didn’t think you’d like me. That’s why I never said anything. And you know how shy I am.” But he liked me?!

“Don’t feel like that. And you’re not being shy right now.” I said.

“I guess, but Winry, I still have to go over there.” That job of his.

“Right, but at least I don’t have to drown myself in my own truth. I got to tell you how I feel even if it was like this.” My cheeks felt like lava.

“But once I finish, I’ll ask for time off and I’ll come here. Now that I know you love me, I can come with more anticipation.”

“Really? But you better be careful. If anything happens to you, I’ll kill you myself!” I smiled.

“That’s very affectionate of you Winry.” He laughed. “But I will.”

And then he kissed me. I felt triumphant and as I watched him go, I was relaxed. He knew already and now I was the reason he would return. Granny was right; I had to speak up so he could hear me.

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I hope you like this one! I'll post the next one tomorrow! Thank you for your time!
edo little kid
Woooooooooow \^o^/

I loved the dialog between Winry & her granny!!
you did a nice job in this part!!!

also ,(I miss you so much and you don’t come that often to visit. But I want for you to stay…with me here..) just awesome , loved this sentence T__T

I love how you expressed winry's feeling to Ed !!!! Wooooow

Loool, you're skillful in hot parts XD
thaaaat niceeeee

“I know that, but I’m asking about you. I mean, look at you, you’re perfect. How can you love me?”
Hmmm,,,but I think Ed is more pretty than winry heheh , just my opinion ^.^"

Awwwwww Winry will kill her self for Ed !!, this is best part
I like this kind of love!!

thank you so much for this wonderful fic!!

can't wait for next ^o^/
Auto-Alchemechanicist
laugh.gif cool.gif Thank you so much! I'm so touched by your comments edo little kid! Thank you! I didn't really believe I was skilled in hot parts, but I'm so glad you tell me now! Thank you for letting me know! This one's to you! I hope you enjoy it!
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Sister Sight


Kimmy has always been the sweetie out of the four of us. Al is the kind and understanding person, Edward’s the tough, yet adoring man I love, and I’m the one that Ed calls ‘precious’. I’ll let others judge that.

Kim was a great addition to the family and Al’s happy by her side. She’s basically the fun person who brought the laughter with her. Al and her are Ed’s subordinates in the military, so she sees us every day. When she was dating Al, she got to know how we worked. She obviously knew her partner inside and out, but she also knew how Ed and I were and how our love was.

Ed and I fought sometimes, but most of the time—the minutes we didn’t fight—we kissed, flirted, and seduced each other. She knew a lot, and it surprised us that she thought our love was cute. We didn’t hear her, (even if she wore high heels that particular evening) but we had lost track of time and delayed dinner.

Ed and I tasted each others lips when I heard a wolf-whistle. We broke away quickly and saw Kim leaning on the door frame giggling her [All hail lord Xenu] off.

“Why are you blushing on me?” She asked. “I’m not an audience.”

My face was burning. People had never seen us kiss, except for Al, granny, and our daughter Karina, so I felt awkward.

“Kim”? I asked nervously.

“Oh, my bad, but Winry, you go girl!” She cheered as she smoothly walked out.

She sometimes brought it up and she got to see us blush once again, but she remained discrete because we caught her having her moments with Al as well.
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Well, this one was a little short, but it's still full of energy! What'd you think of this one? I hope you enjoyed! I'll be back to put the next one tomorrow! Thank you for your time!
edo little kid
Looooooooool , this chapter is very cuteeee
I enjoyed it ^-^
“Kim” is lovely character
thanks for your great job ^o^/

see you
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