May 8 2008, 05:30 PM
here is my own sequel to the fma movie. It is similar to RavenHair's but a bit different. Well here is the first chapter it isn't very good but you can read it if you want.
Winry had to face the truth,she missed Ed and Al,The Elric Brothers,her childhood friends. One year has passed since Edward and Alphonse had left. Now Winry was feeling very lonely without them. Her Grandmother had passed away a month ago at the age of 76,she had been diagnosed with a fatal condition. Now Winry was living alone in a one bedroom house. She is nineteen years old.
Winry also realized that not only did she miss Ed and Al but she had been in love with Edward for a very long time. She did not know if he had loved her or not because he left without saying goodbye. Colonel Mustang had told her that when Alphonse had asked Ed about Winry when he was leaving he said 'Tell her thanks she always made the best",the best meaning the automail arm and leg that Winry had fitted him with before he left.
Now Winry was alone,she had no one to talk to. She did have a friend,Sheska but she moved away weeks ago. It was late at night and Winry was having trouble sleeping because she was too depressed. The night before she had a nightmare,in it she had somehow found Ed and he had said that he had not wanted her there and that he would be better without her in his life. Tonight she did not want to have any nightmares so she decided to try stay up the whole night. She spent most of the night thinking about of of the time she had with Ed and Al.
In the early morning she had decided that see if she could find a way to see Ed and Al again,but she didn't know how.
TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2
*NOTE:there might be a few grammar mistakes.
May 17 2008, 06:56 PM
Hey Hun! Sorry I haven't responded back to you in my story. But I should be working on mine again hopefully within 2 weeks. I have some friend's coming from out of town next weekend so I will be cleaning my place this week to get ready. Love the first chapter of your story and can't wait to read where this is going. Great minds think alike as they say ;-)
May 18 2008, 12:48 PM
here is the 2nd chapter: Edward quickly awoke from his sleep. He was having a nightmare about Winry telling him that she hated him for leaving her without even saying goodbye. He has been having nightmares like this almost every night. He got out of his bed to get a glass of water Lately he has been thinking about Winry, about how he should have told her goodbye and about how he liked her as more as a friend,he loved her. He quickly drank the water and went back to bed. He couldn't get back to sleep for another two hours because he was thinking about Winry. When Ed woke up again it was 8 a.m.Ed was going to be late for work if he didn't get up now. He got up out of bed got dressed and left his bedroom. Alphonse was in the kitchen making his breakfast. "Hey Al why didn't you wake me up Ed asked. "Oh sorry Brother I forgot" Al said."It's okay" Ed said as he started to make his breakfast. "Hey did you wake up last night" Al asked. "Yeah i couldn't sleep" Ed replied. "Oh i thought i heard you" Al said. Once they were finished eating they left to go to work, they worked at a shop that sold and repaired automobiles. "Good morning Edward, Alphonse Hughes said as they arrived at work(he works their too) "Good morning" Al said."Hey" Ed said sounding depressed as he walked off to his work area. "What's up with him" Hughes asked Al."Oh he hasn't been getting much sleep lately"Al responded. "Oh" Hughes said. "Hey who is that" Al asked as he pointed to a young blond women. "Oh she is starting here today,I think here name is Windy or something like that' Hughes told Al. "I'll go met her" Al said. Al walked towards the women. "Hello you must be new here I'm Alphonse" Al said as he approached her. The young women turned around. "Oh yes I'm new here my name is Winry" the women said politely. Al was shocked at her name,she did look a bit like the Winry he knew except she had shorter hair. She held out her hand for him to shake,he shoke it. "So how old are you Alphonse" she asked. "I'm eighteen"and you are Al said. "I'm nineteen" Winry told Al. "Oh i have a brother who is nineteen would you like to meet him" Al said. "Sure" she said as she smiled. Al lead Winry to where Ed and Al worked,she would be working there too. Al saw Ed working on a flat tire of a care. Brother I want you to meet...Winry Al said. Ed turned around and stood up."hi nice to meet you" Winry said as she held out her hand for him to shake . "hi nice to meet you too I'm Edward Ed said as he took her hand.They let go of each others hands."I think it will be fun working with you" Winry said as she smiled gently. "Winry I have some work for you over here" Hughes called. "Coming" Winry called as she headed towards him. Ed and Al worked until 4 p.m. They walked to work and were now walking back. "Brother do you think that girl was Winry's counterpart in this world" Al asked. "yeah i think so" Ed said. Ed dreamed about Winry that night also. TO BE CONTINUED NOTE:there may be a few grammar and spelling mistakes that's okay RavenHair just post it when you can. ^_^
Jul 8 2008, 03:53 PM
If anyone is actually reading this story please message me if you want me to post the next chapter.
Oct 27 2008, 03:20 PM
here is the third chapter: Winry decided that she would first try to ask Sig, Izumi's husband if he knew a way to get to Ed and A. She took the 8 o clock a.m. train to Dublith. She arrived in Dublith at 10:05 a.m. She arrived at Sig's meat shop at 10:30. "Hello may i help you?" Mason said as Winry entered the doorway."Oh, hey your Mason right?,Im uh a friend of Sig's and i wanted see him" Winry told Mason. "Oh aren't you Winry?,Edward and Alphonse's old friend"? Mason asked. Winry felt depressed by hearing Ed and Al's name.She took a few seconds to answer. "Oh um yes that's me Winry said. "Okay well come this way Mason said as he started to walk towwrds the back of the shop. Winry followed him into the back of the shop where Sig was sitting down reading a book.Mason turned around and left the room. "Hey Mr.Sig it's me...Winry Winry said. "Oh hi,what would you like today" Sig said. "Um actually i was wondering if you knew ant alchemy?" Winry asked. "No sorry i never learned it the way Izumi did" Sig replied. "Oh well that's okay" Winry said her eyes began to fill with tears. "What's wrong?" Sig asked. "Nothing its just that i had hoped i could find someone to teach me alchemy so that i could find a way to bring Ed and Al home" Winry said while crying. "Oh well sorry i can't help you with that" Sig said. "That's okay I'll just go now Winry said as she wiped her tears away.
Winry ran right out of the shop. Why? Why?,why can't anyone help me,it;s just not fair she tought as she headed towards the train station. She got on a train to Rezenbool ten minutes later,just before it left.Through half of the train ride she slept,though the other half she thought about who else she could for help. Right away she thought of Colonel Mustang,but then she thought how could she ask someone who had killed her parents for help,but then she thought more about that and then decided that she did forgive him for that,so she decided to phone him when she got home.
As soon as she got home she picked up the phone and called the Colonel.waoted and on the 2nd ring he picked up."Hello"? Mustang asked. "Oh hi it's Winry". "Oh Winry what would you like?" "Um actually i was wondering,I really mis Ed and Al and I really want them to come home,do you know if there's a way i could bring them here?". "Well i don't really know,it might be dangerous for you to try that alone" Winry interrupted him "But" Mustang finished his sentence "So i will help you,come to my.. our house tomorrow morning okay?. "All right,thank you bye" Winry said. Winry hung up the phone. At that moment she smiled,and it felt good because she hadn't smiled in a long time. TO BE CONTINED
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