at the moment i only really have one fma sketch... and its incomplete, but i thought i should post it and see what people think before continuing on and to see what others think dosen't look quite right before its completed and is inked up, anyway here it is (comments and Critisism welcome):

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e207/Hyu.../fmasketch1.jpg


(by the way... can you post non-fma art some places as well?)

also if this is in the wrong place can someone please move it

Hi,
This is really great I love Ed's expression, and the sense of movement in his jacket thing. Pretty much all the clothes are brilliant!
The only things I could find to critisize were that some of the cheekbones are slightly too curved and large and Roy's hair has a large quiff (look in my sig), and he should have a less pointy chin.
Otherwise, 8/10 great, you should carry on.

That's really nice! I love the look Envy is making. I think it would look a hell of a lot cooler if it were in color. Its very nice for a sketch.

Great work.

Good Job! *claps* *crowd cheers*

I have to admit I'm really critical about fanart. But I have to say...


Yours is amazing! I LOVE that sketch! More more!

I like how you drew Ed.. Envy has a crazy look in his face
It's really nice! Will you be making more?

coool

thanks everyone for your comments and critisism

Untitled i will be making more, however my times kinda fully booked with college and what not (i'm an illustartion student )

Oh, is that so? Well good luck with your time! Oh wow.. An illustration student.. No wonder!

Why does Ed have a mallat? xD It's a great picture. (:

lol every picture needs a psycho weilding a mallet
oh and i've started up with the picture again

Yay!! Be sure to post it here so that everyone will compliment you! Yes compliment! You're a great artist! </hyperness>

MEMORIA I LOVE YOUR AVATAR

WOO HOO finally finished the sketch *runs round in circles...... falls over laughing hysterically* drawing has left me insane .

(Anyway i may get round to inking and colouring it at some point)

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e207/Hyu...ete--sketch.jpg

(oh and DarkHaze thanks )

Haha, please don't go insane!!
*goes to look*
Aha, you added lot more characters!
I like it!
For the next one, could you draw some individual characters??
I'd love to see more of your drawings!!

Wee!! It looks great! I like how Riza's gun looks! You're great!

Oh and let's go insane together!!

yay! my insanity is contagious

anyway thanks for the comments i will get round posting more single pictures. i did an image of ed reading books, might post that

YAY! INSANITY! Your drawings are awesome! I'd love to see more! If you don't mind, would you mind looking at my art?

really awesome job

*__________* WOW, your work is very good. Congratulations

YAY INSANITY!!! Oh, and great picture.

yay! thanks everybody!

i have done more (as requested by some ):

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e207/Hyu...chiyo/Havoc.jpg

^^^ done in coloured pencil

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e207/Hyu.../Ed-Gouashe.jpg

^^^ a gouashe painting (gouashe = somewhere between poster paint and acryllic )

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e207/Hyu...ichiyo/Envy.jpg

^^^and a pencil sketch

Nice job!!
I really like that havoc one!!

Wow, i like the havoc and the envy one
Great job

Memoria - Wow! I like your style And you use the plan-out-lines-and-circle thingie.. [Sorry if that made no sense ] You're good at capturing the character's personalities too

The group picture: There were just some small things that I saw [it might just be my style though =S] Most of the characters are very very skinny, like Envy, Lust, and Izumi.. and what someone else said, Roy's head looks a little strange And the cheekbones are just a bit too round, like a chibi person's.

Havoc and Ed: One thing I noticed was that their eyes seem a little too close together.. they're also larger than they are in the manga/anime, but that's just personal style haha right?

Envy: I really, really, really liked this one!! The detail you put into the monster form was amazing It's just like Envy's facial expression and pose! His eyes are still a little close together though

i always make the eyes closer, i think it looks weird if they aren't... guess its the way i've been taught in my life drawing classes. i suppose making people thinner is better than making them too fat LOL

the envy one was nasty and took agae so i have vowed never to do another one like it (knowing me i will probably do one thats even more difficult to draw ^^;;)