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The Water Drawing Alchemist, what's this? winrey know alchemy? edwin
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post Aug 21 2005, 12:38 AM
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[COLOR=purple]All righ, besides this being my first post, it is my firt posted FMA fic as well, so constructive cridicism is appreciated just dont flame ~cough~ tokoge~ cough~ I dont think this has been done before so im going to give it a shot, Im writing this as i go along so I dont know how frequent updates will be. ratered Tto be safe.

Disclaimer: I do not own FMA, i do however own a small fortune in merchendise

Chapter one:

Winrey panted and wiped the saturated hair from her eyes. She was going to get this right. She tightened the clasp around her hands and slammed her hands onto the ground. It instantly began to tremble, suddenly a stream of water came up and burst the carelessly transmuted Edward doll fifty feet into the air. The water rained down on Winrey’s overheated form, as if compensation for all the effort she had put for the last three months. She was ready.

Winrey ran all the way back to the Rockbell Automail clinic. She walked in the house sporting an exhausted but satisfied smile.

“I take it things went well today,” Pinoko said tinkering with Den’s Automail.

“I’m ready.” Winrey could not help but give a satisfied grin.

Pinoko looked up from her work with a frown. “are you sure child? You said the same thing a year ago…”

“yea I’m sure, last year I couldn’t pull of that drainage move, and I would have made it if that Trigam guy hadn’t applied.”

“if you say so…”

Winrey gave a supporting smile to her grandmother. “ If I make it this year, you can retire and we wont have to run the Clinic anymore, except for special consumers who never call or write.”

Pinoko and Winrey laughed at the Edward reference.

“It’s nothing like that, it’s just that I don’t want to see you disappointed like last time.”

Winrey gave the old woman a hug and went upstairs to pack. She placed her trusty wrench in her shoulder bag along with a few changes of clothes, a spare Automail kit incase the elder brother dumbass screwed up his Automail, and a picture taken a year and a half ago. Winrey stopped for a minute and looked at the picture. It was taken on the hill where the children played when they were children. Al and Winrey were laughing at Ed who had been jumping around with a bug in his pants. Winrey could see the imprint of the metal clasp on her hands. She had been training so hard back then. It was after the boys left back to central that she applied for the state alchemist exam. She was only 14 at the time but they let her try because Ed had mentioned his Automail mechanic to mustang before, even though he didn’t know that she had been secretly learning alchemy since he burnt down his house, she didn’t make it because some other 14 year old had applied, Russell, he was pretty cute, but he was pompous, that’s why Winrey had refused his advances for a date after the practical skills exam, that plus she was a sore loser.
She closed the bag and shook her head, she had studied, and she had practiced everyday. She was going to become a state alchemist. After all, she couldn’t baby-sit Ed from Resembool.
Winrey ran down the stairs with he bag and gave Pinoko a deep hug.

“I’m going to miss you and I’ll call you once I get to central and tell you the address that I’m staying at.”

“Hold on Winrey, the train to Central doesn’t leave for 3 hours, stay and have a nice dinner.”

“oh ok, I guess I was just I dunno.”



They sat in quite while they ate. The phone rang and the elder woman got up to answer it.

“Why hello Edward is your Automail broken?”


“Your Automail ISN’T broken and your calling us?”

Winrey nearly swallowed her chopsticks. She was however choking on a large clump of rice.

“One moment Edward, your mechanic seem to have swallowed her chopsticks.”

Pinoko walked over to Winrey, who was now pounding the floor with her fist. She hit her sharply on the middle of her back and the rice easily went down. Winrey raised a hand in gratitude as Pinoko returned to her phone call.

“I apologize about that, now you were saying.”


“I see. Well good luck.”


Pinoko hung up the phone. Winrey was ecstatic.

“That some of a bitch didn’t even ask about me?!?”

“No dear, that was Edward from the other side of town he is going on a missionary mission to the mountains and is coming in tomorrow for a tune up.”

“Ok now I feel stupid”

“I’m sure you do child, your train leaves in an hour, you might want to get going.”

“oh shit, thanks Gram, love you! Call you when I get to Central!”

Winrey ran out the door with her pony holder in her mouth.

‘I’m cutting this crap off as soon as I get to Central, you know what, I’m going to dye it to, I’m tired of being judges by my dahm hair color.’

Winrey arrived just as the announcer called over the intercom.

“Train 6 outgoing to Central is now boarding.”

She whipped her brow with the sleeve of her jacket, noticing that she still had her cuffs on.

“Oh well no biggie”

Our heroine got on train and sat in the front car. She laid her bag on a seat and used it as a pillow for a well-deserved nap.

“Arriving in Central in twenty minutes, attention passengers I repeat, twenty minutes.”

The loudspeaker clicked off and Winrey sat up.

“I should ‘yawn’ freshen up.”

Winrey got up and walked to the restroom cart. She noticed a group of men, probely in their 30’s, they were drinking and gawking at her. As she walked past the one nearest to the isle made the mistake of grabbing her backside. Winrey turned around with a look of pure evil on her face. The man snickered.

“Hey baby, looking for a little fun? He he he…”

Winrey leaned down her face a foot away from his.”

“you know what I do for fun?”

She punched him square in the nose, knowing that she still had the cuffs on. Winrey smiled in satisfaction as the man’s nose became a fountain of blood and he shrieked in pain.
“Now, what have me learned?”

The other me shielded their faces as Winrey walked back to her seat, she didn’t have time to wash up now, she would take a shower when she got to the trainee’s dorms at the HQ. Winrey stopped.

‘What if I see Ed or Al? I would have a lot of explaining to do…”

Then as if on queue a woman wearing a bubblegum pink uniform saying ‘Darlene’s Beauty Shop’ walked past. Winrey tapped the woman on the shoulder.

“Excuse me mam but could I by any chance get an appointment today?”

to bevieve in something does not always make it happen, one must take action to gain what is desired. . .

Big suprise: an edwin fan
but wait an alwin fan as well?
holy crap she's a a royia and a a roywin fan too?!?!

She insane...

She's sleping with ed.

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post Aug 23 2005, 01:33 AM
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Hey no problem!
Thanks for clearing up some of the stuff with Winry and the water. smile.gif
I don't think anyone wants ya to feel bad, your doing pretty well, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Hey it's cool, school can be hectic don't stress to much over any of this, just try and have fun with it, okay? Promise me that! ...This is an order!!

he, he, No seriously just have fun with it, remember one thing okay?
It is YOUR story period and we want to hear it how you want to tell it.
Just don't forget no one has attacked ya yet and I don't think anyone will. No one is really out to attack anyone here on these boards, but there are plenty of people here who can help give you some priceless advice and help. There are some incredible and extremely talented writers here but they all had to learn to write too. Chances are a lot of them didn't have such a kind board as this to learn on when they started.

I eagerly await your next chapter. smile.gif

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