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Mary-sue Test, Take it NOW.
Becca-chan
post Jan 23 2007, 10:59 AM
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post Jan 24 2007, 12:24 AM
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Hmmmm...burning the test down? Perhaps it maybe best to not to do that. How about another course of action?

What if we just did not take it? It's purely a voluntary thing to do. I did it, got a crappy score, figured that was inevitable. So now I'm faced with a decision. "To re-vamp or to not re-vamp."

I'll choose to be optomistic and iron out a few kinks about my OC, but she will def. be a "mary-sue." So SUE me!

If you have a "mary/gary-sue" fict, PM me and I'll read it. As long as it hooks me, it will not matter how "sueish" it is. We all must start somewhere if we want to get better.

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post Jan 24 2007, 06:47 AM
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I was just joking about burning the test down ^^; I could never really do that.. for more than one reason.

Eitherway, I'm not going to revamp my character ( she got a fairly low score but it's at what could be known as a border-line Sue)

- Edit -

So let's see what the test said about my characters..

Quartina - 31 ( she was my first character though..so that's probably why she got that score)

Samuel Hunton - 17 ( which is hilarious to me.. since I made him long before I even watched FMA or knew who Shou Tucker was..and Sammy boy is more or less just like him, both on appearance, though with some variations, and for the fact that he experimented on his own daughter.. O.O; although his personality is slightly different to Shou's)

Lucia Stickwell - 7

Pete - 3


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post Feb 27 2007, 03:14 PM
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137. WHAT!!!!


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post Mar 1 2007, 03:38 PM
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My character got a 40-50 (I did it twice, and swiched a couple one way or the other after actually reading the rules...)
She definately needs revamping I guess... A couple of the points dont seem like they matter that much though. Like being the same gender as the author; it's one of the other, and you can't always write about the one! It does not make the charater Mary-sueish.

On the other hand, I just did one for the other character of the same story and got a 23. I think it's much easier to get Mary-sue female characters on this test than male ones...
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post Mar 1 2007, 04:11 PM
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I did the Mary-Sue test for one of my OCs, and it was far and away a Mary Sue, which made me quite depressed - but then I went through and did it for Ed, and he's a Mary Sue as well, and his score was only a tad lower than my OCs, so I guess I'm fine, perspectively speaking. smile.gif


EDIT: Oooh, we're burning the Mary Sue test? Bring it on!!!! laugh.gif Actually, given that it's on the internet, maybe not (I value my computer far too much...)

But here's the fic that I was talking about, how the OC's score was only a little higher than Ed's... It's a cross-over fic, but I did that in order to utilize a "loop-hole" later in the story... It's still good, though.


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post Mar 1 2007, 05:37 PM
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And that, my friends, is why I only write stories in which all the main characters are drug addicts/dealers, sexual predators, manipulative teenage sluts, mafiosos, corrupt politicians, fallen priests or any other combination of depravities.

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post Mar 10 2007, 03:07 AM
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Pinned this on experimental bases. See if this thread might/ might not benefits the forum. ^^


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QUOTE(Abstruse Eulogy)
And that, my friends, is why I only write stories in which all the main characters are drug addicts/dealers, sexual predators, manipulative teenage sluts, mafiosos, corrupt politicians, fallen priests or any other combination of depravities.

I keeps it real, y0

laugh.gif My character is a middle-aged mental child abuser/drug dealer with no real talents but a sick mind and a big mouth and he still got a 23.


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post Apr 5 2007, 11:02 AM
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A 5. I think I'd kill myself as well as my OC if I had scored above a 10.


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post Apr 7 2007, 04:38 PM
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I got 103 ._____. for a character I use in a crossover ... I should go take the test again...

ETA:
Nope got the same thing...

Man I'm creator of a Mary-sue. -cries in corner- sad.gif




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post Apr 9 2007, 04:19 PM
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post Apr 9 2007, 05:58 PM
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QUOTE(Popogeejo @ Apr 9 2007, 07:19 PM) [snapback]527608[/snapback]
Please use the button instead of double posting please smile.gif

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post Apr 25 2007, 12:00 PM
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Was bored. Made up some character and scored and 8. Decided to spice him and scored....13!

OMG lyk this test is rigged! >:(


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post Jun 9 2007, 01:33 AM
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Oh yeah, Elisa got only 14! I'm SO happy biggrin.gif


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