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Simple Breeze, >< Extremely short... like...3pars...
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post Mar 15 2005, 06:00 PM
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Simple breeze
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Winry put her arms around her head as she looked up at the sky. A gentle wind played around her hair as she watched the sunset go down. She sighed depressingly. She felt so tired after he left. She would wait another forever for him. She'd just sit there, waiting for him to blow his head off.A simple breeze lightly caressed her cheek as she thought.

Times had gotten tough. Back then, all you needed was your friends , your family, some good eats, and a dependable toilet. But now.... Life just seemed so rough. When they were young, all three of them would spend the day exploring the woods, playing in the lake and enjoying a cold, refreshing lemonade. At night, they would read scary stories and pee their pants thinking about flesh-eating monsters.

"Where'd those days go?"She thought. If he hadn't tried to transmute their mother back... He would be home... With her.... She thought about it. But that was what made his visits so.... Special. She would get them only once in a while... A long, long while... She rolled over on the soft grass and let her eyes droop down. And as she slept, a simple breeze blew back memories.

But life would have to go on for her, because even though those memories of joy and love could never be relived, beautiful new memories would be blown in, by a simple breeze.
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A simple sun up in the sky,
the simple moon up so high,
a simple sunset so intense,
a simple lake so very dense

A simple leaf up in a breeze,
a simple breeze, blows back simple memorys
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Parents calling me to dinner. biggrin.gif
[You'll enjoy it more if you read it slowly, 'kays?]
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post Mar 16 2005, 02:03 PM
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I like it esa...


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post Mar 16 2005, 02:36 PM
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its so relaxing. it makes me sleepy. a gentle breeze, a sunset. such serenity.


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post Mar 16 2005, 02:43 PM
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Ah, calm.


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post Mar 16 2005, 03:16 PM
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Yay, You liked it. Although it's extremely short... Short and sweet. smile.gif
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