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Mea Culpa, a poem for roy
Tobu Ishi
post Feb 20 2005, 07:15 PM
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A very brief poem that sprang to mind in the middle of the night. I don't typically write fanpoetry, but I decided to post it and see what y'all thought. The Latin means "my fault".

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Mea Culpa

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Back from the wars, back and of course
He dreams of shadows without a source

He dreams of a child who cries with fear
He dreams of eyes without remorse

He dreams of a hand that's reaching near
And a soft sad sigh that he can't quite hear

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An Appetite For Grief Dividing the Bones Elysium FULLMETAL FOLLY
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She remembers the way her inexplicably riveted gaze slid unbidden
down the curves of his back, slowly, like honey. And she particularly remembers
the rush of prickly heat, the unfamiliar melting sensation that made her duck
her head to hide a blush that caught her entirely by surprise; as she realized
for the first time, in an entirely new way, that Ed was a
boy.

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post Feb 20 2005, 11:41 PM
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That's deep mellow.gif ... And sad sad.gif . However, I think it's very nice biggrin.gif . Very creative.


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Chiyo
post Feb 21 2005, 04:41 AM
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Short and...I'd say sweet but its not.

Emotional then


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post Feb 22 2005, 12:56 PM
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deep.....yet very good


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post Feb 23 2005, 01:00 AM
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I'm not a big poetry fan but I liked it! GJ


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