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Pegasus, I just can't help myself...
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post Jun 6 2005, 03:37 PM
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I agree. Slimey, slimey! But you wrote that harrassment scene very well. I liked all your little descriptions here and there. When I read it, I could feel his hands around my wrists. It was wonderfully described. Now I will let out my breath of frustration. I want Riza and Roy to get together already. GAH!


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post Jun 6 2005, 04:12 PM
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Sou, sou, Kimbley is indeed a most slimy character! >D You wrote the entire scene so well that that I couldn't really help feeling all the different emotions that went through the minds of Riza and Roy. Very nicely handled scenery. laugh.gif


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post Jun 7 2005, 07:02 AM
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Kimbley IS very slimey!!! Your descriptions were SUPER!!! I absolutely cannot wait for your next update!! I need more Royai moments ... hehe


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post Jun 7 2005, 04:28 PM
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Yes, Kimbley is beyond slimy. As for the rest...*starts singing "Kiss the Girl"*

laugh.gif You are so good, tokage!


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post Jun 8 2005, 10:22 PM
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kimbly = evil >.< great writing! keep it up!


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post Jun 14 2005, 09:28 AM
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My God, Kimblee is just .... I am speechless
Great writing though
Please keep it up!
I'm enjoying it so much!
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post Jun 14 2005, 05:13 PM
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I do hope you update soon, you really left it on a cliff hanger. *Sigh*


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post Jun 16 2005, 12:09 PM
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QUOTE(Elderberry @ Jun 6 2005, 05:12 PM)
Sou, sou, Kimbley is indeed a most slimy character! >D  You wrote the entire scene so well that that I couldn't really help feeling all the different emotions that went through the minds of Riza and Roy.  Very nicely handled scenery. laugh.gif
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I have to agree. Your descriptions were wonderful and it made me feel as though I was actually there. As for my commentary on Kimbly, well he makes me shudder. ...Slimeball tongue.gif
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post Jun 16 2005, 03:38 PM
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UPDATE SOON, PLEEEEEEEEEZZEE!!!


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post Jun 16 2005, 10:23 PM
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Sou ne. I would very much like for tokage-kun to update soon, but she's probably very busy and I wouldn't want to pressure her...who knows what kind of crazy airport issues she's caught up with at the moment? rolleyes.gif||


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post Jul 6 2005, 08:14 AM
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Absolutely amazing. I am in awe at your skill. This is the first piece of work of yours that I have read and I am completely in love with it. I love how you portray the characters, especially Hughes. And you have a nice balance between humor and drama. And your style is unique. I've really enjoyed the story so far and I can't wait to read more.


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post Sep 7 2005, 06:27 PM
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Hi Tokage,

I really enjoyed your fanfics! However, it was been 3 months since you last updated Pegasus. You are probably very busy and everything, but is it possible to have an update before Christmas? Thanks a lot! tongue.gif
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post Sep 8 2005, 03:56 PM
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I haven't posted in a long time but I'm always reading this fic. I hope this is updated soon.
There's something about this fic that 's so addicting.


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post Sep 11 2005, 07:07 PM
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This is such a good story. You're a really good writer tokage-kun. I hope you update soon. smile.gif
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post Sep 12 2005, 06:56 PM
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I just wanna shoot Kimblee more than I usually do now. Kimbly and I are at war now! Who will join me!?


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