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1st Ed Fanart, Any comments? ....please?
Kaniza
post Feb 12 2005, 02:54 PM
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Rite, I'm new here and I posted my first Ed fanart.
Just to get some comments and critics.
Hate it or love it. Anything is fine.

Thanks!
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Hedera
post Feb 12 2005, 04:37 PM
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I absolutely understand your wish to be commented (I wonder, why nobody comments my new fanart - it's not that bad unsure.gif ) In comparison with other novices you're rather good. smile.gif
But his hair needs some shine and shadows. And everything else also needs shadows. Face is a little twisted.


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Kaniza
post Feb 13 2005, 08:50 AM
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QUOTE(Hedera @ Feb 12 2005, 11:37 PM)
I absolutely understand your wish to be commented (I wonder, why nobody comments my new fanart - it's not that bad unsure.gif ) In comparison with other novices you're rather good. smile.gif
But his hair needs some shine and shadows. And everything else also needs shadows. Face is a little twisted.
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Well, first of all, thank you for your comments. I guess I'll stick to pencil drawing, coz I have no sense for colours. ^__^''
It's good that u mentioned the face, coz somehow I never get rite. T__T
So, where is your fanart, I'd like to see it. smile.gif
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post Feb 13 2005, 10:36 AM
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not bad for a first


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post Feb 13 2005, 11:28 AM
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Kaniza
My fanarts are in this thread. Actually, I want to now, what do you think about the latest one (though, it's just a lineart).
http://www.fullmetal-alchemist.com:81/foru...opic=2708&st=15
Also one of my drawings is on my avatar right now. wink.gif


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Kaniza
post Feb 13 2005, 01:38 PM
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Ok, this a strange situation..........
I can't see the pics!!!!! T___T
Well, I can see your avatar pic. As far as I can see now, I think it looks good. I think you did a good job on the hair.
Still, I wanna apologize that I can't see the pics and give any comments. Sorry T__T

Hope next time it'll work, until then do your best and keep drawing!
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Hedera
post Feb 14 2005, 05:46 AM
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Kaniza
Ugh... damn! huh.gif I've edited my posts a bit - now the pictures are inside the links. I hope, you'll see it.
And thanx for compliments about my avatar. smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2005, 06:12 AM
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@Kaniza: Nice job biggrin.gif . Better then anything I could do laugh.gif . Welcome to the forum smile.gif .


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Kaniza
post Feb 14 2005, 11:47 AM
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Yay!!!! I can see it now!
So, let's see.... Well, at first look it seems fine, but then I thought (don't want to be rude ^__^'') the right hand looks a bit too small.

Anything else? Hmm, the hair looks kinda stiff (???) and some lines seem a bit thick.

Well, that's my unprofessional opinion, so dunno if it's right -__-''
(I'm never good at critising....T__T)

But thanks for showing me, coz it's nice to see other people's work and try to give an opinion.
Hope see you again soon and maybe exchange some more comments and suggestions. Thank you! biggrin.gif

By the way, thanks to Hex-sama welcoming me smile.gif
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Hedera
post Feb 16 2005, 12:27 PM
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Kaniza
Thank you for comments. smile.gif
I think, you're right about the hand and the hair... Other people, who saw this pic told me the same thing. sleep.gif
I'll try to change it a little and then I'm going to color it. rolleyes.gif

P.S. Sorry for slow reply - I was offline during this two days.


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Kaniza
post Feb 16 2005, 03:38 PM
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No worry, no worry! biggrin.gif

I did another drawing yesterday. This time it's purely pencil drawing (I'm stupid when it comes to colours dry.gif )

Well, this time I tried to submit it to the Fanart Gallery, so hope they will poste it.
Just to see if people will give some more comments, if not I'll just continue posting them here.....or not? Nah, just have to see.

Anyway, I'm looking foward to your coloured version biggrin.gif and do your best!
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post Feb 16 2005, 05:03 PM
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i think...the heads to big


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Kaniza
post Feb 17 2005, 10:51 AM
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Yeah, I kind of guessed it......T__T
No sense for colour and no sense in proportions. dry.gif
Guess I'm helpless...... T__T

Well, these few days, I was bored (again) and did another drawing of Ed. This time I left it as a pencil drawing. Hope people will give me some comments on this one too. Thank you!
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post Feb 17 2005, 11:21 AM
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nice job! the face and hair look great, and my only criticism would be that the shoulders aren't wide enough. smile.gif


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post Feb 17 2005, 01:04 PM
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Hey! That's veeery nice!! laugh.gif I really like it! happy.gif Your pencil drawing looks better than the colored one, IMO.
Mistakes: shoulders (as xrninja said), lines on the neck are displaced a little, lack of shadows again (especially on the skin and on the clothes).


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