Oh no, I approve well of a critique. ^^Thanks a lot for that. My drawing style is really stylized as you see, and well, I wanted to draw Ed in my style. I know Ed has a real bright side, but I also drew this thinking on what problems Ed has had ^^; so that's why he looks serious here. The only thing I wasn't aware of was the body, yes, too tall lol
, I'm used to draw people long and skinny. Maybe I should try and draw Ed in the original creator's way
and see how it goes.