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Need help with my writing., Can't write combat :/
smoothietime
post Sep 28 2010, 01:49 PM
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I desperatly want to rewrite the fight between Scar and Wrath and I already have thought of the perfect dialogue and how it will happen. The only problem is... I have no idea how to write combat and make it interesting to the reader. Like... how?

"Wrath thrusts his sword into-" ZzZzZzZ

Can some one give me a quick combat writiing tutorial? Hahaha I fail at the english language.
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post Sep 28 2010, 05:31 PM
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@smoothietime - Welcome to our board!

I'm not a good writer and don't have any advise myself, but hopefully some of these might help you? biggrin.gif

How to Write a Great Combat Scene - Advice for Fantasy Writers

Writing Action Scenes

A few advises on writing Fight Scenes

Writing Fighting

Five Ways to Write Intense Fight Scenes (Superhero and Fantasy)

Writing Examples of Sword Fights

Writing Action Scenes

Writing fight scenes

Dos and Don'ts of Writing Battle Scenes

Q&A How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes

Does Your Fight Scene Pack a Punch?

Best ways to write a fight scene - 1

Best ways to write a fight scene - 2

Best ways to write a fight scene - 3

How to Write Battle Scenes

Creating Fight Scenes and Battles

How to Write a big Battle Scene for you Fantasy Novel


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post Sep 28 2010, 06:24 PM
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Wow some of these are helping a lot. This is exactly what I was looking for! laugh.gif
Thanks!
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