HAGANE NO RENKINJUTSUSHI
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Metallic Angels, a poem about Ed and Al, in thier eyes
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post Jul 25 2007, 12:03 PM
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We're metallic angels,
Red and gray the colors of our banner,
Solar rains, and the fear
Of losing something we never had.

We're metallic angels,
Cursed and doomed to always move,
untill that little piece of a dangerous heaven
is in the palm of our hands.

We're metallic anges,
but our tears are very real,
and so are the emotions
that leak out through the seams of our beings.

We're metallic angels,
and we're all we've got,
in this world of deceptions and lies
and nightmares that are almost prophetic.

We're metallic angels,
blood and steel,
painted stone,
we're metallic angels,
and we are not alone.

We're metallic angels,
Red and gray the colors of our banner,
Solar rains, and the fear
Of losing something we never had.


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Slightly smiling, yet nothing to hide,
Slowly dying on the inside
a spirit that soars, yet a heart lay broken
a future untold, but a life hath forseen
it all lays here in the words left unspoken
of a life or a void that used to be me.


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post Jul 29 2007, 09:35 AM
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wow....amazing
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post Jul 31 2007, 02:54 AM
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@slightly-smiling - Metallic angels, eh? Makes sense.. ^^
I like the title, and I like the poem. ^^


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post Aug 7 2007, 11:27 PM
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Moving,deep,and so lovely description-wise! happy.gif


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post Aug 19 2007, 06:41 AM
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Arigatou!! I never expected to get such a reaction!


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Slightly smiling, yet nothing to hide,
Slowly dying on the inside
a spirit that soars, yet a heart lay broken
a future untold, but a life hath forseen
it all lays here in the words left unspoken
of a life or a void that used to be me.


~~If you have attempted alchemy by drawing an array or clapping your hands,
copy and paste this into your signature~~

~~If you cried or balled your eyes out any time during episode 25, copy and paste this into your signature~~


If you think that Edward could be the eighth deadly sin, copy and paste this into your signature.
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