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post Aug 9 2005, 12:46 PM
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biggrin.gif Well my idea is only a little bit done, Ryoku Himura is a 16 year old boy with an uncontrollable anger who gets into a lots of trouble and fights.(not like the begining of yu yu) when he loses his temper he goes into a blind rage and unleashes an unbelievably powerful force. but he meets a man who has a very mysterious past Who decides to train him to be able to control his temper in fights. well thats all i have right now. blink.gif


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post Aug 9 2005, 05:26 PM
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A 9 year old and his younger brother live in a small town where nothing special ever happens. Everyone looks alike, sounds alike, even their attitudes towards the world are similiar. He's sick of it, but there's nothing he can do.
One day, the younger brother assaults the older one on the street in an attempt to kill him with a steak knife. The cuts dig deeper, the tears flow more, and the never-ending screams seem to last eternities.
His parents only stand there, watching him get killed. He runs away as far as he can, his brother stalking him wherever he goes, planning to kill whoever gets in his way.
The brother runs far away to investigate: What happened?
Why didn't his parents rescue him? Why didn't any of the townspeople call the police?
Why did his brother try to do this to him? Why was this happening?


I'm trying to make something with more childhood trauma than Fullmetal Alchemist. I mean really, a 9 year old. An 8 year old. A knife. A parent's blank stare. ...That's traumatic. There are a lot of holes in the plot left over though, so it wouldn't really work.
I'll try something different later...
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post Aug 20 2005, 12:53 AM
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post Aug 29 2005, 12:42 PM
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OK, here comes my unoriginal plot :3

Setting: Current day, our world.

Possible names: Blood Crusade, Black Cross (someone please think up a better name)

Private Investigator of super natural phenomena, David Marshall. Sure, it sounded cool to him too, but living in a run down apartment in Manhatten scrounging up whatever money he can doing odd jobs on the side isn't so glamerous. One day, as he is walking down the street, he is approached by a mad eyed priest. David tries to lose the strange man by hastening his pace, but the man is persistant and grabs David's arm. He says, "The anti-christ is coming. The day of reckoning is near!" David waves the insane notion aside and forced his arm from the priest and begins to walk away. "Wait," the priest says, "you are a man of God, are you not?" David had never thought of himself as a holy man, simply trying to make a living by investigating what people could not detect with science. "My son, I must ask you a favor---"

The priest had paid David handsomely to investigate a cult which he believed to be the roots of the anti-christ's coming. Of course, he had only received half of his payment, and would receive the rest after accomplishing the task. As simple as this seemed, David felt uneasy. "My child, Satan's spawn will branch from this house. You are to found out all you can and stop them at all cost." Mr. Marshall thought this seemed ludicrous but he could use the easy money. As his plain landed he could not believe where he was, Italy! Of all the places to spawn the devil, why in the presence of the vatican? David walks through the small, quaint streets of Abruzzi, looking for the sign that the priest had showed him. When he finally finds the seven pointed seal carved into a large piece of wood, he walks down the stairs that would seem to lead to somone's cellar, perhaps a tavern. He enters the foreboding room and finds a small stone cellar, as he expected. There is not much there other than a few cups and a bar. An adjoined door swings open, and the keep walks to the bar. "What will you be having?" The tender asks politely in surprisingly clear english. "I'm sorry, I must be in the wrong place." As David is about the leave, he spots the crest on the man's finger; his ring. "May I ask what that symbol is?" The bartender's expression is unflinching, "It is the seal to the university I went to. It is my class ring." The bartender cleans the glass and walks out of the room. David stands for a few moments, pondering as to why this man used his college seal as the symbol for his bar. It didn't seem likely... Acting on his instincts, he follows the man into the adjacent room. It led to a stone hallway, as long as the eye could see. It was dimly lit by an unseen light source. As he neared the end, it led to the outside, back to an alley. There was no were, however, any exits. He felt as if he walked into a sanctuary. The warm light was pouring on his face, as he was surrounded by a beutiful Italian garden. He spotted the seal again, on the floor covered in moss and ivy. What is going on here. The voice of the priest resounding in his mind, "You have heard of legend of the Children of the Night, have you not?... Vampires, feeding off the living." This just didn't seem to be possible... he runs back to the cellar but as he enters the dank room, the bartender is standing in the way of the exit. david tries forcing his way through but isn't strong enough to thwart the burley man. He is knocked down and blacks out...

David wakes up in what appears to be a massive stone room, like a dungeon of an old castle. He awakens to be under the eyes of two cloaked figures. He feels the end nearing. He will be the next meal of these two monsters... One of the figures tries to force him down on the slab he is laying on. David feels hid head... he has been bandaged. But why. Why would these creatures of the night aid him? he wonders if they are trying to return him back to health then drain him....

OK, I have typed out all this excessive crap because I am not as good of a story teller as Bacon. If you wanna know the point of this pointless story, here it is: [spoiler]The vampires are not ones of the conventional sense. They are actually the oldest branch of the early church, the Way. They were seperated as a Protestant faith and have almost died out because the early catholic church's popes didn't feel they were against the will of God in their eyes. The idea of them drinking blood had not come from Vladamir Dracula, but Jesus himself when he turned the wine into blood at the last supper. The priest was told to give the large sum of money to David so he could find out their whereabouts so the church could finally wipe them out. The Way has many cloisters scattered all over the world, with a small following. The reason the catholic church wants to destroy them is because they claim to be actual children of Jesus. As David finds out more about the Way, he finds out what the church means. They are immortal as long as they are not murdered, such as a gunshot or mortally injured. The source of that immortality is the actual blood of one of the immortal members of the cloister itself. David inquires if the original vampire of The Way is still alive. They all say he is. David asks where he is-- David eventually sees what they believe to be the second vampire. A woman, of dark skin and curly hair and hazle eyes. He talks to her and asks why the church is after her. She claims she is little over 2000 years old. She explains that the church really seperated them almost immediately. One of the founders, Peter, had started asserting some of his own belief and the Romans adopted it eventually, but the Way did not follow Peter, thus the Way has been a target from the beginning. David fights the church and blah blah blah, you can imagine the action sequence and where the story goes from there :3 any questions or comments would be nice. Enjoy >3[/spoiler]


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post Aug 30 2005, 10:49 AM
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Here's one of my ideas:

It starts with a girl at her little brother's funeral, saying goodbye to him. She hears a distant bell but she can't make out the location. As the days pass by after that, her blind mother becomes ill and the doctors think that she won't be able to make it. Meanwhile, the sound of the bell continues to get louder. One day, in the middle of the night, the girl wakes up and she sees a boy next to her. He tells her that her brother's soul has not reached heaven and he's in danger of becoming an evil spirit is he's left for too long. Thus, they embark on a journey to fid the little boy to guide him to Heaven.

I'm thinking of naming this story "Finding Heaven". What do you guys think?


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post Aug 30 2005, 12:40 PM
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I always wanted to draw a manga, but I knew I'd screw it up. So I always just kept the idea in my head.

A guy walked home from school finds an injurred cat. He's a pretty happenin' dude, so he brings it home and takes care of it. One night, after the cat was in almost perfect health, he finds a girl in bed with him and that cat missing.

OMGWTF THE CAT TURNED INTO A GIRL. The rest would be in progress.

Most likely it'd just turn out to be a bad hentai.


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post Aug 30 2005, 01:12 PM
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I have always wanted to be a manga-ka, so this would pretty much be a manga.


The Life of Me

This will be kinda like a diary based on my childhood. biggrin.gif


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post Sep 1 2005, 12:02 PM
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an epic anime that pits two people aginst an army of deamons, while they search the land for a frogotten tresure.


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post Sep 23 2005, 03:28 AM
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The year is 2035. The world is shattered following the events of the Dark Wars (started 2017, ended 2034). It seems that nothing will ever be right again. Even as people live on, their souls are uninspired. They have lost hope and lost faith. Worse, laws are extremely regulated now and all of mankind are bound to be good always and those who dare disobey are put to eath.

In year 2082, on a wintry day with the sun shining and a snowstorm brewing, a little boy is born. He is the Dreamweaver, a child who can bring heaven or hell to the souless, dreamless populace...

This would be a very controversial story. Also, I'd better not find out that any of you coy this because this happens to be the one of the only stories of mine that I think is truly original. mad.gif


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post Sep 23 2005, 11:04 AM
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QUOTE(Ronaldo Rodregez @ Aug 30 2005, 03:40 PM) [snapback]268266[/snapback]

I always wanted to draw a manga, but I knew I'd screw it up. So I always just kept the idea in my head.

A guy walked home from school finds an injurred cat. He's a pretty happenin' dude, so he brings it home and takes care of it. One night, after the cat was in almost perfect health, he finds a girl in bed with him and that cat missing.

OMGWTF THE CAT TURNED INTO A GIRL. The rest would be in progress.

Most likely it'd just turn out to be a bad hentai.

SOmeone beat you to it.


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post Dec 2 2005, 06:52 PM
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this is just a story that my friends and I like to play all the time. We write what we play and turn it into stroies it wouldnt be a bad anime though.

Title: Elements.
in the day and age some kids have been able to have he powers of the elements.(fire water wind etc)
there are also dark elements and side-elements. There is also one elemental master. The kids holding the elements of wind(motoko) Fire(Pyro[real name he keeps secret]) Water ( Nayru[Also keeps her real name a secret]) and sometimes the side element of light (hikari) the elemental master(Sekai) and a cursed girl who looks kinda like a cat(jinx[name unkwon)
journey the country warning the elements of the man trying to take their powers. but the dark elements are trying to help him. (not teally elements but people woh have abilities like chaos suffering, darkness of mind)
Now not only do they have to deal with the mad scientist, but also squables between each other.

Motoko and Nayru both like Pyro. But Nayru thinks it cant be her with him because he is the fire element and her being the water. But after the dark element(Kyros) sends these evil shadows into Nayru, Pyro starts to look after her a little more.
These shadows can turn Nayru agaisnt everyone, or tear her soul apart.
Motoko and Pyro fight alot, and sekai jinx and Nayru are the peace keepers.
more recently, Pyro meets his older brother, who controls arsinest fire.
They fight, Pyro gets the crap beat outta him, friends come to save the day. But when Motoko leaves to go to a funeral, Nayru and Pyro get closer, to the point that they are friends.
(Hiakri told Pyro that Nayru loved him)
when motoko comes back she and Nayru get in a fight over pyro and she tells her that her new best friend is Pyro's brother. Nayru doesnt plan on telling pyro this , bewcause she is afraid he likes her and he'll leave her alone. Then Nayru does something to make motoko practically crazy(the co-creator told me it should be that she kisses him and motoko sees)
plus, they all have to deal with the fact that pyro will someday move to the dark side and kill all the elements.

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post Dec 2 2005, 08:00 PM
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Man i really don't know how to explain my story.....Hmm....Well its a manga that me and my friend have worked on. Its called Elite Union. Its pretty much DBZ stylized but with more humore and better plot. Its mostly a bunch of fights ((Kind of like on bad guy to another....)) all the while revealing the characters past and motives. The cast is pretty big and there are a lot of main characters. Lets see....well the cast mostly started with only four main characters. ((It has a lot of child trauma, since there main characters start as children)) It starts out with an 8 year old boy named Cojin. He is a humanoid type alien from the planet Cruora ((he looks exactly like a normal human...except with sharper teeth)) His race is born with super strength and super senses. One day while training, demons attack and destroy his planet. He escapes the planet in a spaceship with his 13 year old brother Gallack, but is separated from the rest of his family. ((His parents and younger brother)) They decide to become space pirates to get enough parts and money to get an even better ship. One powerful enough to find the rest of their family. They destroy countless planets for their selfish cause, and even become known all around the universe. During their travels, they come across Earth. They think nothing of the planet and continue on their buisness of plundering the planet and destroying it after. After nearly leveling all of Downtown Los Angeles, two boys come to stop them. They however, are not ordinary boys. Nathan appears to be a normal kid, but is actually a cyborg who is almost as strong as Cojin. Eagle however, doesn't look normal from the get go. He has angelic wings from his back. He doesn't even like to fight. He is the most powerful of the trio. After a scrap with Eagle and Nathan, Nathan questions Cojin about why he does the things he does. He teaches Cojin about the value of life and how it can't be thrown away like a toy. Saddened by these words, Cojin realizes that he is the same as the demons who destroyed his planet. He decides to quit being a space pirate. Gallack gets pissed about this and turns against his brother, calling him weak and telling him that he doesn't care about his family. Gallack has become Cojin's enemy and is the antagonist for the rest of the story. Gallack fights all three of them at once and thrashes them with ease, until Cojin unlocks a hidden power and defeats him. Gallack says that he will leave him on Earth for a whole year until he becomes stronger. Cojin hates this because he believes Earth is full of weaklings and he will rot. Gallack leaves him regardless and with no where else to go, decides to stay with Nathan and Eagle. Thats pretty much where the story starts. The three have such contradicting personalities and its hilarious to see them in a room together. We have a fic and I think you should read...as it explains things more than me.

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LoLs...i'm currently working on this manga of mine ^^

:: ETCHED IN STONE ::
Short (and crappy) Version
The 6 Element Guardians (Flame, Earth, Wind, Water, Light, and Dark) join together to try and take the Ultimate Stone from the Prince of Darkness. With the Stone, the user's any desire would be granted. Its no secret that the Prince would use the Stone for his corrupt desires. Auria, the Flame Guardian is in a racial limbo: half demon, half human. She desperately wants the Stone to become pure human. But using the Stone would require sacrificing the souls of the Guardians. (Even if Auria sacrifices her soul, she can still be kept alive by her demon blood). How far will Auria go to achiever her goal?

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In the beginning of time, Gaia the Mother Goddess fell in love the Kronoss, the God of Time. While Kronoss controlled the flow of time, Gaia controlled the flow of life and creation. One day while Gaia is tending to one of her human tribes, Kronoss sees her bag of clay and attempts to create his own race. Thus the Atlanticans, a race of people who dwell under the sea were born. When Gaia found what her husband had done, she gathered her human creations and rallied a war against Kronoss and his Atlanticans. Although the two deities forgave each other, the two races never made peace.

Attempting to fix things, they vowed that one of their offspring would bring the two races together. Enter Lucifer, their first son. Lucifer eventually became the first Prince of Darkness. He united the two races in sin and destruction, further tossing the situation into chaos. To protect the land and the righteous, the deities sent the Element Guardians. There were originally five Guardians: the Earth Guardian, the Flame Guardian, the Wind Guardian, and the Water Guardian and the Light Guardian. The Guardians were the same spirits reincarnated over and over again. The deities were to choose the women who would bear each Guardian, not caring to select the fathers. This turned out to be another fatal mistake...

One woman chosen to bear the Flame Guardian fell in love with a demon. She had two children; a boy named Solarius, and a daughter named Auria. The demon who fathered them happened to be a direct descendent of Lucifer so Solarius became next in line to the throne. Auria became the Flame Guardian.

Being half demon, the two children only had half of a human soul. Solarius gave up his sould and chose to become full demon. Auria remained in limbo. To gain control over the world, Solarius tried to create the Ultimate Stone. With the stone, any one person's desires would be fulfilled. All they needed to complete the stone were the souls of the Guardians. Solarius wanted the Stone for power. Auria just wanted to full human.

Auria found the other Guardians and one by one lured them to them to her brother who would add their souls to the Stone. Unfortunately, when the time came to kill the final sacrifice, the Light Guardian, Auria realized she loved him and spared his life. She then shattered the Stone releasing all the souls trapped inside.

500 years later, Auria is still alive and unchanged, kept alive by her demon blood. She met the reincarnations of the Guardians. Meanwhile, Solarius has been trying to reconstruct the Stone, this time using human souls to amplify it. The Guardians now want the Stone to keep it out of Solarius' hands. Auria is still trying to become full human. Although she doesn't want to sacrifice her friends' souls just to acheive her dream, how far will she go just to be human?
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post Dec 2 2005, 09:23 PM
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i really like it. it has some very original ideas
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Title: Acest
Main Characters: Alan Smith, Alice Stonwal, Gungar
Setting: 2010 continent of Sodaim
Description: 15 years ago a demon attacked a village encountering a boy. The boys Parents fought the demon eventually losing their lives in the process. The demon attacked the boy Killing itself leaving only scar on the boys cheek apparently. This boy we know as Alan Smith AKA The Scared One. 15 years later the boy goes to a town called Foru in search of answers about what happened that day When he mets a man in a black hooded cloak with what appeared to be a two guns in a T formation on the hood, holding a bag with something shacking in it the man attacks the boy causing him to drop the bag. Alan stabs him through the heart with his Katana Held on his back. He opens the bag finding a girl inside. She is later discovered to be looking for her long lost brother. The two become friends and quest together.

Character Bios

Name: Alan Smith
Alias: The Scared One
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Birthday: 1993 Oct. 21
Weapons: Katana, Hell bringing Staff
Status: Traveler/Samurai
Description: young Samurai from the village of Foru He is the only remaining member of the Smith family who wre killed during the demon attack of Foru 15 years ago. Being the only surviver of the demon attack. He has a short temper and will not take men hitting girls at all. Basically friendly and Kind-hearted he'll do anything to help those he cares about. He is good friends with Alice.

Name: Alice Stonwal
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Birthday: 1995 Febuary 20
Weapons: Throwing stars
Status: Martial Arts master/Ninja/Traveler
Description: A shy teenager hailing from Gotaka with a dark past first her parents fled the village in hopes of finding a place to sreate military weapons leaving Alice and her Brother Spike. Next, a mysterious murder was killing off the military Spike left to find out why the man was murding people right before the invasion of Jagaso. She then learned martial arts and ninja techniques and joined the military as a special assassin. When the war ended she left the military to search for her brother. She was kiddnapped by a man in a cloak, and was later rescued by Alan. they now search the continent for her brother and Alan's past.

Name:Gungar/GunGar/GUNgar
Description; An evil Gang that is trailing the a item called the Corines Sphere an item thgat can give one strength and wisdom beond belif. all members were cloaks with two guns making aT formation.

Intresting? laugh.gif
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