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akat16
post Jan 21 2005, 09:36 AM
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forgive/ignore my handwriting to the side. There really isn't much to say on this piece. I wanted it to be simple, b&w. And I think I did that.


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post Jan 21 2005, 10:56 PM
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hrm... a rather unusual style... the head looks a bit too big for the body, IMO...and something about the posture isn't quite right... his shoulder looks twisted or something, i can't quite put my finger on it. also the hair at the base of the ponytail looks too plastic, it needs to flow from the band a little more instead of bunching like that, it makes it look like a wrapped sausage or something at that spot. O_o a poignant theme tho, and not a bad piece overall. happy.gif


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post Jan 22 2005, 01:41 PM
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^^;; eh..thanks for pointing out my mistakes...I haven't been able to sit and sketch for a while, so my proportions (no matter what I draw) are funked up. First comment like that about the hair O.o...but I do see what you're talking about. And the shoulder does look twisted---slouching I believe is what you're looking for.


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post Jan 29 2005, 04:08 AM
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I love the style, but the body does seem small. Apart from that...great job.


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post Jan 29 2005, 03:59 PM
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the head looks a bit to big for the body but other then that i like it!


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post Jan 30 2005, 07:31 AM
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funny^^


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post Jan 30 2005, 10:41 PM
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@akat16: His head seems to dwarf his body alittle bit, and his arm seems kinda slim. However, I like the style you used on his hair and eyes. Very unique smile.gif .


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post Jan 30 2005, 10:48 PM
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I think it is hella cool!!! biggrin.gif
I wish i could draw like that... sad.gif


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