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A Girl's Life, Winry's afraid granny will find out
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post Jan 22 2005, 10:41 PM
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Winry rushed into the bathroom, hand clamped over her mouth. The toilet’s lid went up, and her breakfast and lunch went in. She moaned, and laid a gentle hand on her stomach, before leaning over and retching again. She stopped awhile later and sat up, wiping her mouth.

Standing up shakily, Winry flushed the toilet and rinsed her mouth out.

She looked sadly at the ground as she walked. She knew the cause of her sickness, and wondered how long she could keep it from her grandmother.

“Are you alright, Winry?” Roze asked, seeing the downtrodden girl.

“Yes, I’m fine, I was just thinking I’d go visit Ms. Hawkeye.”

Roze looked at her, worry shining in her eyes, before Sammy, demanding attention, clapped his chubby hand against her cheek. She smiled affectionately at him, before tickling him.

Winry smiled, before walking over to Granny Pinako.

“Um, Granny, I was wondering if I could go visit Ms. Hawkeye for awhile?” Winry asked, worried her grandmother would ask questions.

But she only nodded, not looking up from the automail she was preparing for her new customer.

“Thank you!” She said, and ran to go pack.

hhhhhhhhhhhh

“I’ll see you guys soon!” Winry said with a smile to Sheshika, Granny, Roze, and Sammy.

Sammy looked at her, eyes sad and opened and closed his hand a few times in a silent wave.

“Bye, Sammy,” The blond said, taking his small hand in hers.

“Bye?” He questioned.

The train started moving, and Winry leaned out the window to wave goodbye.

Once her friends were out of sight, she sat back down in her seat, and sigh, and laid a hand on her stomach.

‘I hope I don’t get sick,’ She thought, leaning back and drifting to sleep with the sun.

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post Jan 23 2005, 03:37 PM
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More!!!! *AAAaaaccchhhhooo!* *sniff* I'm still sick...
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post Jan 23 2005, 04:40 PM
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you know, even though i'm not a big fan of the presentational format, its a decent basis for a story...

a knocked up winry... laugh.gif

maybe armstrong is the dad.. laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif


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post Jan 23 2005, 05:01 PM
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QUOTE(hitokiri @ Jan 23 2005, 03:40 PM)
a knocked up winry... laugh.gif

maybe armstrong is the dad.. laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif
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God forbid. ph34r.gif *spasm*


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post Jan 23 2005, 05:39 PM
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she has a hangover? i thought she was pregnant and going to see riza for advice o.o

at least thats waht i got outta it tongue.gif
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post Jan 23 2005, 05:44 PM
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QUOTE(hitokiri @ Jan 23 2005, 04:40 PM)
you know, even though i'm not a big fan of the presentational format, its a decent basis for a story...

a knocked up winry... laugh.gif

maybe armstrong is the dad.. laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif
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I dare someone to write a story with that pairing, if this one isn't already intended for that pairing. laugh.gif


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post Jan 24 2005, 06:13 PM
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That would be sooooooo wrong.... heh,heh,heh...
but funny...
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post Jan 29 2005, 12:29 AM
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NO! Ew! No Winry/Armstrong. That is sick, and wrong... (maybe alittle bit funny), but mostly sick mad.gif .

@Alchemy101: First reaction: WINRY'S PREGGO?!?! ohmy.gif lol. You've got a nice start. Nice verbs, such as "retching", even though I don't like the thought of vomiting/ralphing/hurling or whatever you want to call it biggrin.gif . "Retch" isn't even a fun word to say laugh.gif . Anyways, keep up the good work wink.gif .


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post Jan 29 2005, 04:03 AM
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Armstrong + ANYONE is beyond thought.

Nice start to a story since you never actually say whats up...even though we can guess. tongue.gif


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post Jan 29 2005, 12:55 PM
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Let's say Ed is the dad... **That thought just brightened up my day!!!
Ed's gonna be a daddy!!! Chiyo I love your avatar.





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post Jan 29 2005, 02:28 PM
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Yay, brightened my day too!

And thank-you ed's secret agent, glad you like it.


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post Jan 29 2005, 02:33 PM
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Let's see if Alchemy101 posts more If I scream.


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post Jan 29 2005, 03:53 PM
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i like it...kinda sick but still


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post Feb 9 2005, 01:50 PM
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I liked it, but I'm getting away from the idea of Winry/Armstrong. Maybe it was that crazy dude that kidnapped Winry when she visited Ed and Al in Central. You know, the one that chopped up women, then tried to chop up Ed?


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post Feb 9 2005, 02:16 PM
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^^ Wouldn't she have been a bit young at that time, and that would have been one hell of an overdue pregnancy if that was correct (3 years?!).


Winry and Armstrong is very......strange, but if this is the case, it could be very 'fun.'

Also..grammar (I should apply for the grammar police smile.gif ), the verb is 'wretch' not 'retch,' tongue.gif


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