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Hawkeye X Roy: The Royai Thread, For Roy, Riza, and Royai fans, and more!!
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Tian Ai
post May 1 2010, 10:49 AM
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post May 1 2010, 05:06 PM
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spectator--Thanks for the translation! I get chills reading these!

Tian Ai--8 pages of Royai goodness already? Yay!

OT: Um, I was reading the bottom part of the front page earlier... Happy birthday, Turdaewen!


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post May 1 2010, 07:24 PM
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And to continue…

You tried to smile, saying that you were fine, it was just flu. Yet, only a fool would believe with your console, because on the next second, you almost cried out in pain when that disease began to devour your lungs. She saw it all, and your pain had crushed her hear. Even though she hid it under her collected and almost perfect mask, her eyes, her canvas of soul, had betrayed her.
Under the effect of morphine, you watch the drizzles of tear rolling down her cheeks. One thing registered in your mind before enjoying that temporary discontinuation was the warmth of that woman’s grip. You swore to apologize to her, once you woke up later.
Apologize for making her cried.
That oath was delayed.
The moment you opened your eyes, you found her fast asleep with her head resting at the side of your bed. Your hand and hers were still attached, like the moment before morphine overtook your consciousness. That space would turn be completely pitch black, if none of the lamps on the table beside you was alighted. Under the obscurity, you used the time to watch her face by sweeping away her blond bang that covered part of her face.
Ah! How you wished you could destroy that frown that embedded so deep in her brows.
Then, that feeling came back. The feel of throwing yourself far into the deep sea once again, since the day you found the significance of it. The feel that closing to kill you silently. The feel of not care whole heartedly, although the truth made you happy and worrying till half dead. Strangely, the more you rejected, the greater its effect.
You condemned that creator of felt because back it came in situation that obeyed your very flawed analysis, like now. You cried, out of wish to feel – sorrow.
It came and gone, how routine.


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post May 1 2010, 10:54 PM
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Tian Ai - Wonderful work, glad to see you continuing even if you should be doing homework/research. I do have to admit, the plot bunnies always seem to multiply during schoolwork time.

Happy Birthday Turdaewen!


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post May 1 2010, 11:53 PM
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You're doing a good job translating this for us. It's so sad but I want to read more!


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post May 2 2010, 01:15 AM
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@ Tian Ai : oh? Owo ok. ok. hehehe, and WOW 8 PAGES!!! really good job! awesome!
@ Turwaeden : Happy Belated Birthday! biggrin.gif
@ Spectator : OMG PLEASE CONTINUE!! I'll copy it until you finished and post the whole story biggrin.gif


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post May 2 2010, 03:36 AM
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Very nice translation spectator smile.gif
QUOTE (spectator @ May 2 2010, 10:24 AM) *
...Then, that feeling came back. The feel of throwing yourself far into the deep sea once again, since the day you found the significance of it. The feel that closing to kill you silently. The feel of not care whole heartedly, although the truth made you happy and worrying till half dead. Strangely, the more you rejected, the greater its effect.
You condemned that creator of felt because back it came in situation that obeyed your very flawed analysis, like now. You cried, out of wish to feel – sorrow.
It came and gone, how routine.


Interesting, my interpretation is slightly different. Excuse my paraphrasing of your sentences below, they're just too beautiful not to use wink.gif

Then, that 'feeling' came back. That feeling that you really wanted to throw far into the deep sea since the day you found the significance of it. That feeling that was killing you silently. That feeling that you ignored with all your strength, although it actually made you half happy and half worried. Strangely, the more you rejected it, the greater its effect.
You cursed the creator of the feeling for bringing it back at this moment that, in your judgement, is so inappropriate. You felt like crying. Sorrow.
She came and went, so routine.

Someone is trying to hide his feelings here tongue.gif By the way, the last sentence refers to Riza.

Next bit:
It could be counted, your most absorbing activities in the ward were to wait for her arrival, other than staring at the ceiling, sleeping under the effect of the drugs, and counting the time passing by.
You didn't talk much during the visiting hours. More accurately, almost nothing passed from your mouth, or from hers. She would come, utter a greeting-which you would reply with a full smile, check that your infusion is fine, put a supply of fruits and other healthy foods in the fridge, and then peel an apple for you in silence.
She never looked at you.
You nearly screamed in frustration.
Occasionally you invited her to talk, asking about the state of headquarters and other military personnel. Her answers were no more than a short sentence. Longer, if neccessary. But not long speeches that had to be said while focusing her view on the listener.
You reached your limit.
"Look at me," you ordered. She did not respond. "Look at me, Riza."
She gasped, hearing you call her name. Her first name. Not her last. Nor the formal honorifics you should still use. Just plain. But you didn't hear her answer.
"'For God's sake, Riza, what is it?" You were flustered. Very flustered. "Don't act like I'm not here." As if that wasn't enough, you added, "You can act so in a few more months. For now, I'm still here, I'm still alive. I'm in front of you. So don't treat me as if I'm dead. Look at me. "
She paused in her activities, and looked at you immediately. Her gaze swinged from your left eye covered with a black patch to your whole face. You almost couldn't believe how any human could show such a blank expression, especially because of your words. "I realize you are completely in front of me, sir."
You wanted to ask, so why then does it seem that looking at you is such a painful task. You're not poison.


Such a sad part T.T

On a sidenote, happy belated birthday Turdaewen!


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post May 2 2010, 04:45 AM
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@whippersnapper & spectator: Wow. It's so poignant! I haven't read such a good (piece of) fanfic in some time.
Now I want it all. tongue.gif

I remember there were a pair of fics in Spanish which I liked a lot... Such a bad moment to remember it, I don't have the time nor the mind free enough to translate it. And I'm not a good Spanish-English translator, either. Hope I remember their names later. XD

Feliz cumpleaños, Turdaewen. (Spanish may not be Portuguese, but it's close, so I thought it would be nicer in a language that resembles yours smile.gif).
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post May 2 2010, 07:24 AM
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amazing, whippersnapper: AMAZING translation. exactly what the fic said. biggrin.gif man I'm glad that I asked you and Spectator to translate these. thanks a lot!


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post May 2 2010, 09:14 AM
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Thanks a lot for helping me out whippersnapper. I was so confused with those words, especially when the author use 'ia' instead of 'dia'. shanryelric, is it how Bahasa Indonesia use the word for 'it' and 'he/she'?

I will continue after i watch the latest FMA:B episode tongue.gif

But you were afraid. You were afraid because deep inside your heart, you already knew her answer. Her excuse was the same as why you had no courage to break the wall. You doubted if both of you could go further. You were afraid to hurt her more. Enough was enough.
“We…” you listened to yourself talking, even before your mind allowed doing so. “I…” how to do this? “You should not have done this, you know? Visiting me, taking care of me. There is not a single obligation for you to do all of these. If it is torturing you…” Stop! Stop! “just stop it.”
She looked as though as receiving a hard blow. Her mouth was slightly open and she finished everything as if in a rational defense. However, there was no more rationale, other than due to ‘feeling’. But certainly, she would not have told you of that. To her, it was a taboo, strictly prohibited taboo. And didn’t you too think the same?
Both of you fell into fear that was not logical; paranoid.
But at the end, that woman only gave her answer, shaking her head side to side, not paying attention to what you had said before.
Then she came tugging at your hand when the sudden pain enveloped you, and that blond and hazel eyed figure was the last being imprinted on your memory before you went back to sleep, under drug effect. That figure, your tiny heart called out, was the one you wished to spend the time with for the rest of your life, before death welcomed you.
Both of you had lost connect to the world outside. Who knew how many days had fled since you were stuck to that medical shelter. Tens of times you were trembling in pain. And guarding your soberness, whenever that fiend was torturing you, was her hug.
Once in a while, in your unstable and blurry conscious state of mind, you could see her crying. You wanted to plea to her not to shed tears for you, but you weren't quick enough to do that. It was such a shame, once you were awake, you would find her in her usual expression; firm, strong, and… distant.


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post May 2 2010, 10:26 AM
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QUOTE (Kaori Ayanami @ May 2 2010, 04:45 AM) *
I remember there were a pair of fics in Spanish which I liked a lot... Such a bad moment to remember it, I don't have the time nor the mind free enough to translate it. And I'm not a good Spanish-English translator, either. Hope I remember their names later. XD


If you remember them, could you send the links, it would be something fun to help me refresh my Spanish...used to be fluent in high school, but didn't use it and can only remember the basics, now.


I just saw these fanarts on livejournal by astridv and thought to share them here.

Quite a beautiful fic, sad to know he really does end up leaving. Thanks for translating spectator and whippersnapper


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post May 2 2010, 11:21 AM
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QUOTE (Causmicfire @ May 2 2010, 07:26 PM) *
I just saw these fanarts on livejournal by astridv and thought to share them here.


Yeah, that fanarts are yummy! I like em! The first one is really brilliant.
I also have a no-fanart that wakes up warm Royai feelings...

I love it so much! But we all know, who he actually wants to hug in sleep...
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post May 2 2010, 11:28 AM
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roy looks so adorable when he's asleep. that pic looks like he's having nightmare.


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post May 2 2010, 11:30 AM
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QUOTE (spectator @ May 2 2010, 08:28 PM) *
roy looks so adorable when he's asleep. that pic looks like he's having nightmare.


Reminds me of your avatar, if you get what I mean...


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I saw those fanarts on LJ, they're awesome.

@hayate: Haha, yes it's from the Roy Mustang's Observation Diary. Roy must be dreaming about hugging Riza. And his sketch of Hayate is so cute. happy.gif
BTW, that pic reminded me of this short comic by Chocolate Queen:
http://www.geocities.jp/yn_cq/2-g2-100201-01.html
Wish I was able to read it.


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