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1st Ed Fanart, Any comments? ....please?
Kaniza
post Feb 17 2005, 01:45 PM
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YAAAAYYYYY!!!!! laugh.gif
I'm glad you like it biggrin.gif But, dunno why this time I'm more satisfied with the outcome, than with the first one. I think that's somewhat a phase of mine. Sometimes my pics can go REALLY bad and sometimes they are better.

About the shoulder: I thought something was wrong again huh.gif , but wasn't too sure if it was the body or whatever. Still need some more practice in body proportions. ^__^''
Think I'll do as you and xrninja suggested and correct the shoulders and darken the shadow areas.

Arigatou gozaimasu mina san! biggrin.gif
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Hex-Sama
post Feb 17 2005, 03:14 PM
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@Kaniza: Cute Edward wub.gif . Nice detail on the auto-mail and hair biggrin.gif .


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Kaniza
post Feb 18 2005, 04:15 AM
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Thanks Hex-sama! biggrin.gif
Well, I followed the suggestions and hope it's different now.
Here comes the (hopefully ^__^'') improved crying Ed! (guess I'm kinda meanie to draw Ed crying tongue.gif )
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post Feb 18 2005, 10:47 PM
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Oooo me likiee.. happy.gif

I have "hit or miss" problem too....I really need to sign up for a drawing class so I can be taught how to actually do this right....hmmm maybe next semester.


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post Feb 19 2005, 02:50 PM
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Kaniza
Hmmm... I guess, this one is a little better.


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post Feb 19 2005, 11:02 PM
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@Kaniza: It looks even better now! Nice work biggrin.gif .


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post Feb 21 2005, 02:22 AM
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Looks good, and don't take this the wrong way....
shouldn't his P.Tail be longer. <<constructive critisism smile.gif


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Kaniza
post Feb 22 2005, 06:47 AM
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Hmmmm... havn't really thought about it. But now you mention it, maybe it's a bit short..... -__-''
Ah well, I think I'll just leave the 1st pic, so it will remind me of how not to
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In the meantime I did a coloured version (obviously not hand coloured, used my pc instead ^__^'' ) of the crying Ed, but dunno if should post it. Just need to adjust the size and the format of the file.
I'll think about it.......
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post Mar 4 2005, 08:49 PM
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its very nice specialy the colour and the detail you put in it
what did you colour it in with? biggrin.gif


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Kaniza
post Mar 5 2005, 02:14 PM
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Now that you mention it, I havn't posted the coloured version. dry.gif
Somehow it doesn't work. I'll try later then.
@Blackwings: those are just plain pencil drawings. For the shadings I used different pencils. Some more soft, some more hard. It really depends on the user smile.gif
Me personally like to use somewhat between HB and F2 for the basic drawing. For shading sometimes F2, especially on skin areas and B2 for other areas (like cloths, etc.).
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post Mar 8 2005, 04:27 PM
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Alrite, I hope this time the coloured version will show up. Hope it's ok ^__^''

Finally got a chance to redo the colour version (phew).
Had a lot of stress with my projects, I'm just glad that I finished them and now I can do some more drawings and play games!!
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post Mar 9 2005, 12:49 PM
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For the first pic, all it needs to make it great is a bit of shading and hilights and some sort of background. If you have photoshop, you could PM or IM me for a lesson on easy shading. Also... I think Ed's eyes are more gold in color?

Wow.... That pencil is awesome. I just think that that one hair that pops up doesn't look quite right... it's too straight?


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